Wow... look how re-emerges from the depths of the great hole of writers block. ~Blows some dust off her FF writing skills, and proceeds to cough and hack from dust inhalation~ Wow... haven't been here for a long time... and there may be very good reason for that. This next instalment of the ff is a little... fluffy... I don't really think it has much of a point more then to kinda... illustrate what Letty and Dom's relationship is like, and to pretty much move the story along so that the one night that has spanned about... 5 chapters finallys gets to die and be buried in a shallow un-marked grave, where it will be incessiantly referred to and pretty much mangulated and deformed even though it's supposed to be dead. As quiet often happen in my ff. I JUST CAN'T LET THINGS DIE! Ack. But anyway as of the next chapter It shall be a new day, and hopefully I'll get to work in some of my plot twist's before it turns into a novel... as my FF's also tend to do. Anyway... enough story-deprication... a few shout out's and then I shall let you read the chapter.
To my two driving influences
Lani: You know you my heart boo! You give me reason to live, and you allow me to give my characters dimensions and work on them in a realistic fashion, and I trust you enough to call me on a completely idiotic personality trait and tell me to fix it.
Zuleyka: HA! New chapter! GIMME MY DAMN SQUIRREL! YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN! GIMME IT! NOW! SQUIRREL! SQUIRREL! ~Starts a Squirrel chant.~
To my Reveiwers!
Prettyg36: Lol I have to admit I have a soft spot for Vince. I think he's a sweetie. And I don't think he's dumb so much as primal. Which I was just telling a friend about not 2 days ago, that Vince may appear dumb because he doesn't seem to have that same... sophisticated, well-adjusted male veneer to cover him. He is who he is and he excepted that and lives in that. At least that's my thoughts hehe.
Brin: I think I pointed out... well I don't know if I did it in the FF but I have frequently told people over IM that the only reason Diana is so openly aggressive is because she's scared to death, being in a new place, new people, she had issues from New York she's still trying to deal with, she has no idea how her boxing career is going to end up, that she's so frazzled she's not acting normally, and the only place she feels any comfort is in aggression, like the aggression she uses in the boxing ring. That is why she is ab-normally aggressive it was a purposeful point to make her so... overly aggressive to put a little distance between the Movie Diana and this new Diana in Cali.
Reveiwer: I have to admit I didn't even think about a Diana+Dom pairing. It was never a possibility in my head... until you put it there... and now... who on earth know's what my brain is going to do with that information. LOL.
Xemindar: I couldn't think of a better FF to have two Michelle's in... (Well that was pre-Blue Crush) Because both her characters were so strong and yet different in there attitude... and not to mention Michelle is just damn Gorgeous! Hehehe.
Maliska: Umm... I'll take that as a compliement lol. And Diana was with Adrian in Girlfight, but I have absouletely no place in my head to dredge him up from, I really just can't get into his mind work.
Anastacia: Well to answer your question... I'm not going to answer your question hehe. I don't know if there well be a romance at all, or if there is if it will be with Vince, or Leon, or some other un-named person, I kinda just let the characters interact and see what happens...
Reece: Thanks your Review came a coupla months after I had temporarily stopped writing the FF and got me motivated enough to try writing again! Thanks!
Chapter 7
"I gotta take Di home." Letty reminded Dom pushing his hands away from her waist as tempting as they were.
"It's only a few houses down, let her walk... it'll be alright... let Leon take her home.. he'd like that..." Dom insisted, not letting go of her waist, with a smirk. His woman. She should be here with him. That's where she belonged... beside him. Always.
"Yeah but Leon may not return in the same state we sent him off in. Diana has... issues with him... you saw... She could mess him up." Letty chuckled relenting to settling back on his chest for a few more minutes.
"What she gonna do? Leon can handle himself... he could handle you... your cousin will be no problem..." Dom teased, into the long smooth neck he was nuzzling.
"I don't think so..." Letty rejected, pointing out... "The girls a boxer, state champ... I think she can handle herself. She's a William's after all." Letty told Dom with pride.
"She just needs to find herself a good man and settle down... like the other William's women." Dom said nibbling on her ear contentedly.
Letty scowled her patentented, I-know-more-then-you scowl and shook her head, "I think the last thing on Diana's mind is settling down with some guy. She's only 18." Letty added, as if to give some reason for her previous statement.
"You were all ready to settle down with me when you were 18. I think it was actually about 12 wasn't it... when you batted those big moist brown eye's up at me and asked ever so coyly, 'Dom... would you come to the school dance with me? I have no-one to go with... and I love you so much... your such a spunk... take me now.' " Dom mocked in a Letty voice.
"I did not! You lieing ass!" Letty said indignantly. "I really didn't have anyone to go with. My date came down with the flu! And I wasn't going to a school dance by myself... sheesh... your so full of yourself Dominic Toretto! Way I remember it you were the one, following me around panting when you were 21 'Let, what you doing tonight Let? We could work on cars... or you know... in them... huh? I'm so smooth! How could you resist me huh?' " Letty mimicied in a Dom voice.
"Well I don't remember you putting up to much resistance in the back seat of those cars either!" Dom bit back, also biting lightly on her ear to punish her for bringing that embarrassing scene up with him.
"I'll show you resistance!" Letty promised threateningly. She'd be the queen of resistance, he wouldn't be laughing then.
"No you won't. You don't wanna resist me... you love me. You want to kiss me. You want to marry me!" Dom sing songed with the maturity of a 5 year old.
Dom slid Letty down to rest her back along his knee's chuckling intently as he placed little kisses all of her pouting face. Well her face that was TRYING to pout, over her delicate little smiles, which he kissed away with a matching smile. "Letty loves her some Dom." Dominic pointedly out proudly.
"No I don't you big jerkhead!" Letty said punishing him with her hands on his shoulders, rubbing slowly and moving down to his waist all... scary and soft and gently. Yeah that'd show him who was boss.
Standing at the doorway of the lounge room where Letty and Dom were making out, Leon looked between the couple on the couch and Diana standing beside him... well... 10 feet away. "I'll just go and... er... break that up if you want?" Leon said trying to show his manly prowess by not pointing and laughing at Dom and Letty, and that he'd caught them out. Making out.
"Nah it's okay... I'll just go back to aunt... home... by myself it's not too far..." Diana mumbled a scowl on her face which she had given up trying to hide.
"It's no trouble, lemme grab my shoe's won't be a..." Leon started.
"I said it I'd walk home by myself." Diana pointed out to the next winner of the prettiest little prisoner in the whole 3rd level. Jack ass.
"And I said it won't be any trouble. I'll get you to the door. Your not walking around here at night, I mean, do we LOOK like we're looking to kill you so soon after you got here?" Leon joked, but was in large part serious. They had had three murders on this STREET alone last year... no place for a greenhorn New Yorker, to be walking alone.
"I said... I said..." Diana scowled at Leon, "I want Vince to walk me home!" Diana bit out finally. She'd rather Vince, he was quiet, dumb, and wouldn't try and give her a good night kiss, or 20.
"I can do it!" Leon said quietly frowning at her. What had given her the impression that he couldn't walk 10 houses down and drop her at Letty's mami's house? Did he look that useless?
"I want Vince to walk me! Or I'll go by myself!" Diana snapped again. Thank god this would be her first and last meeting with the group that looked like the all meet up at a prison social function.
"Fine! I'll go get him then!" Leon snapped back, throwing his shoes on the ground and stalking in to the kitchen, where he would find Mia, and there-fore find Vince.
To my two driving influences
Lani: You know you my heart boo! You give me reason to live, and you allow me to give my characters dimensions and work on them in a realistic fashion, and I trust you enough to call me on a completely idiotic personality trait and tell me to fix it.
Zuleyka: HA! New chapter! GIMME MY DAMN SQUIRREL! YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN! GIMME IT! NOW! SQUIRREL! SQUIRREL! ~Starts a Squirrel chant.~
To my Reveiwers!
Prettyg36: Lol I have to admit I have a soft spot for Vince. I think he's a sweetie. And I don't think he's dumb so much as primal. Which I was just telling a friend about not 2 days ago, that Vince may appear dumb because he doesn't seem to have that same... sophisticated, well-adjusted male veneer to cover him. He is who he is and he excepted that and lives in that. At least that's my thoughts hehe.
Brin: I think I pointed out... well I don't know if I did it in the FF but I have frequently told people over IM that the only reason Diana is so openly aggressive is because she's scared to death, being in a new place, new people, she had issues from New York she's still trying to deal with, she has no idea how her boxing career is going to end up, that she's so frazzled she's not acting normally, and the only place she feels any comfort is in aggression, like the aggression she uses in the boxing ring. That is why she is ab-normally aggressive it was a purposeful point to make her so... overly aggressive to put a little distance between the Movie Diana and this new Diana in Cali.
Reveiwer: I have to admit I didn't even think about a Diana+Dom pairing. It was never a possibility in my head... until you put it there... and now... who on earth know's what my brain is going to do with that information. LOL.
Xemindar: I couldn't think of a better FF to have two Michelle's in... (Well that was pre-Blue Crush) Because both her characters were so strong and yet different in there attitude... and not to mention Michelle is just damn Gorgeous! Hehehe.
Maliska: Umm... I'll take that as a compliement lol. And Diana was with Adrian in Girlfight, but I have absouletely no place in my head to dredge him up from, I really just can't get into his mind work.
Anastacia: Well to answer your question... I'm not going to answer your question hehe. I don't know if there well be a romance at all, or if there is if it will be with Vince, or Leon, or some other un-named person, I kinda just let the characters interact and see what happens...
Reece: Thanks your Review came a coupla months after I had temporarily stopped writing the FF and got me motivated enough to try writing again! Thanks!
Chapter 7
"I gotta take Di home." Letty reminded Dom pushing his hands away from her waist as tempting as they were.
"It's only a few houses down, let her walk... it'll be alright... let Leon take her home.. he'd like that..." Dom insisted, not letting go of her waist, with a smirk. His woman. She should be here with him. That's where she belonged... beside him. Always.
"Yeah but Leon may not return in the same state we sent him off in. Diana has... issues with him... you saw... She could mess him up." Letty chuckled relenting to settling back on his chest for a few more minutes.
"What she gonna do? Leon can handle himself... he could handle you... your cousin will be no problem..." Dom teased, into the long smooth neck he was nuzzling.
"I don't think so..." Letty rejected, pointing out... "The girls a boxer, state champ... I think she can handle herself. She's a William's after all." Letty told Dom with pride.
"She just needs to find herself a good man and settle down... like the other William's women." Dom said nibbling on her ear contentedly.
Letty scowled her patentented, I-know-more-then-you scowl and shook her head, "I think the last thing on Diana's mind is settling down with some guy. She's only 18." Letty added, as if to give some reason for her previous statement.
"You were all ready to settle down with me when you were 18. I think it was actually about 12 wasn't it... when you batted those big moist brown eye's up at me and asked ever so coyly, 'Dom... would you come to the school dance with me? I have no-one to go with... and I love you so much... your such a spunk... take me now.' " Dom mocked in a Letty voice.
"I did not! You lieing ass!" Letty said indignantly. "I really didn't have anyone to go with. My date came down with the flu! And I wasn't going to a school dance by myself... sheesh... your so full of yourself Dominic Toretto! Way I remember it you were the one, following me around panting when you were 21 'Let, what you doing tonight Let? We could work on cars... or you know... in them... huh? I'm so smooth! How could you resist me huh?' " Letty mimicied in a Dom voice.
"Well I don't remember you putting up to much resistance in the back seat of those cars either!" Dom bit back, also biting lightly on her ear to punish her for bringing that embarrassing scene up with him.
"I'll show you resistance!" Letty promised threateningly. She'd be the queen of resistance, he wouldn't be laughing then.
"No you won't. You don't wanna resist me... you love me. You want to kiss me. You want to marry me!" Dom sing songed with the maturity of a 5 year old.
Dom slid Letty down to rest her back along his knee's chuckling intently as he placed little kisses all of her pouting face. Well her face that was TRYING to pout, over her delicate little smiles, which he kissed away with a matching smile. "Letty loves her some Dom." Dominic pointedly out proudly.
"No I don't you big jerkhead!" Letty said punishing him with her hands on his shoulders, rubbing slowly and moving down to his waist all... scary and soft and gently. Yeah that'd show him who was boss.
Standing at the doorway of the lounge room where Letty and Dom were making out, Leon looked between the couple on the couch and Diana standing beside him... well... 10 feet away. "I'll just go and... er... break that up if you want?" Leon said trying to show his manly prowess by not pointing and laughing at Dom and Letty, and that he'd caught them out. Making out.
"Nah it's okay... I'll just go back to aunt... home... by myself it's not too far..." Diana mumbled a scowl on her face which she had given up trying to hide.
"It's no trouble, lemme grab my shoe's won't be a..." Leon started.
"I said it I'd walk home by myself." Diana pointed out to the next winner of the prettiest little prisoner in the whole 3rd level. Jack ass.
"And I said it won't be any trouble. I'll get you to the door. Your not walking around here at night, I mean, do we LOOK like we're looking to kill you so soon after you got here?" Leon joked, but was in large part serious. They had had three murders on this STREET alone last year... no place for a greenhorn New Yorker, to be walking alone.
"I said... I said..." Diana scowled at Leon, "I want Vince to walk me home!" Diana bit out finally. She'd rather Vince, he was quiet, dumb, and wouldn't try and give her a good night kiss, or 20.
"I can do it!" Leon said quietly frowning at her. What had given her the impression that he couldn't walk 10 houses down and drop her at Letty's mami's house? Did he look that useless?
"I want Vince to walk me! Or I'll go by myself!" Diana snapped again. Thank god this would be her first and last meeting with the group that looked like the all meet up at a prison social function.
"Fine! I'll go get him then!" Leon snapped back, throwing his shoes on the ground and stalking in to the kitchen, where he would find Mia, and there-fore find Vince.