agent182
mm very good so far, interesting, i hope you continue i din't see any spelling mistake but you know uh are these "critters" from the movie critters cuz if they are that's way rad, but if not that's rad too ye haaaaw
Thanks for the words of encouragement. Yes they are the critters from the Movie Critters. I was wondering if anyone would remember their official name "Crites". Shall we continue?
The Crites began feeding faster than they ever had before. They ate everything that could be eaten. Humans, cattle, dogs, cats, birds it didn't matter to them. If it was alive it was game. Within minutes all of North City was dead. There wasn't a man woman or child alive in it. The Crites rolled back to their leader. "We have found out much. Humans aren't the strongest here. There are beings that come every so often. They are very powerful." One of the children said.
"We need to find the strongest on this planet and eat them. When we do all of their power will be our power. We will do like what did to the Icejin. We will eat their strongest and then completely destroy them." The leader said. "What of Lemekia, your half daughter? She is part of their kind" one of the children said to him. A slinder being stepped out of the ship she looked like a cross between them and the Icejin. Covering her head down between her shoulders was quiels just like theirs. It looked more like hair then quiels. Her features for the most part looked like she was in the fourth stage of her transformation. She looked at all of her brothers and sisters.
"What there is about me is none of your concern. Father let me live because I pleased him. When I no longer please him just like the rest of you I will die." She said looking at them. All of them backed off.
Where Goku was.
Goku felt a energy close to that of Frieza's. This power was different. Although Frieza's was evil and cold this seemed more threatening. It was something worse and it seemed stronger than what he expected.
Chi chi looked at him. "Goku what is wrong?" She asked. "It's nothing Chi chi. I'm just thinking." He said. "Alert the press Goku is thinking." She said being silly. He looked at her and lifted her into the air and kissed her. "That wasn't nice."He said.
mm very good so far, interesting, i hope you continue i din't see any spelling mistake but you know uh are these "critters" from the movie critters cuz if they are that's way rad, but if not that's rad too ye haaaaw
Thanks for the words of encouragement. Yes they are the critters from the Movie Critters. I was wondering if anyone would remember their official name "Crites". Shall we continue?
The Crites began feeding faster than they ever had before. They ate everything that could be eaten. Humans, cattle, dogs, cats, birds it didn't matter to them. If it was alive it was game. Within minutes all of North City was dead. There wasn't a man woman or child alive in it. The Crites rolled back to their leader. "We have found out much. Humans aren't the strongest here. There are beings that come every so often. They are very powerful." One of the children said.
"We need to find the strongest on this planet and eat them. When we do all of their power will be our power. We will do like what did to the Icejin. We will eat their strongest and then completely destroy them." The leader said. "What of Lemekia, your half daughter? She is part of their kind" one of the children said to him. A slinder being stepped out of the ship she looked like a cross between them and the Icejin. Covering her head down between her shoulders was quiels just like theirs. It looked more like hair then quiels. Her features for the most part looked like she was in the fourth stage of her transformation. She looked at all of her brothers and sisters.
"What there is about me is none of your concern. Father let me live because I pleased him. When I no longer please him just like the rest of you I will die." She said looking at them. All of them backed off.
Where Goku was.
Goku felt a energy close to that of Frieza's. This power was different. Although Frieza's was evil and cold this seemed more threatening. It was something worse and it seemed stronger than what he expected.
Chi chi looked at him. "Goku what is wrong?" She asked. "It's nothing Chi chi. I'm just thinking." He said. "Alert the press Goku is thinking." She said being silly. He looked at her and lifted her into the air and kissed her. "That wasn't nice."He said.