I was reading a poem while I was kind of just skimming throw it when I read the part where it said "This goddess has an evil streak like roses and their sting denying me of pleasure sneaking away from my touch hiding from my dreams." It made me want to start writing the next chapter of lost souls for some odd reason. That is just one line from the poem Dark Mistress by Victor Sarpentas. Make sure you check out some of his work it is very good. Here are some comments I had on your reviews. Here they are.
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Now on to the fic!!!
Lost Souls
By MoshiMoshiQueen
~Thoughts~
"Talking"(Me Talking)
Sakura's point of view!
I woke up again at the deep of night and my stomach was hurting form not eating for some time. I opened my deep green eyes and saw non-other then my love who never gave his name standing in front of me.
"It is time for you to meet the others. You do love me don't you?"
"Yes very much so."
"Would you do anything for me?"
I nodded and said, "I would even give my life."
"What if I was something that you fear?"
I looked at him, ~something that I feared? That is what I was called a fear, a vampire. ~
"I know all about fears and yes I would still love you as long as you will love me even if I was your fear. Do you love me?"
He hesitated.
"Yes."
"Then I guess I meet the others?" I said with out asking any questions.
I stood up and held my stomach, which was still hurting, but I could not feel it when I grabbed his hand and held it tightly. I never felt pain when I was with him.
He held my time and we jumped down from a tree and there were two people standing there which faces I could not see.
They come out and I saw their faces one of a man with dark blue hair and another a woman with long grayish hair and deep blue eyes.
"This is my brother Eriol and his mistress Tomoyo."
I bowed to them and said, "It is nice to meet you." I looked at there eyes they had not pupil like mine. Just a deep color; yet they showed feelings like my love did now.
"We are glad to meet the one who stole Syaoran's heart." Said Tomoyo.
~Syaoran so that is his name. It is so strong as he is. ~
I looked at Eriol, his brother who did not seem to like the idea of me loving his brother very much. He looked scared for his brother. I looked deep into his eyes and said, "I will never take him away from you."
He looked at me and I knew he knew what I meant. I did not know why I had said it the words just would come out.
Syaoran held my hand tightly in approval.
"We must go before we are late. The others don't like to wait. Young dear please be careful. I don't know how young Syaoran would be if you got hurt." Said Tomoyo.
"I promise you that I will never cause him pain. Pain is something I know all to well. I will be very careful."
We started walking out of the mansion and then I don't know what happened because it was like I blacked out. When I opened my eyes Syaoran was holding me in his arms tightly. He sit me down slowly.
"Will you promise not to be afraid of me?" he asked.
"I promise." I said whole heartily.
"You will find out my secret when we go threw this door."
"I will revel mine as well." I held his hand tightly and he kissed me on the lips passionately.
"We know you will make the right choice dear." Said Tomoyo holding onto Eriol.
~Choice what choice? ~
I was confused at her words. But somehow I knew what I was going to be seeing.
Eriol opened the large door and we walked threw. We were in some kind of town. Every person hid there face and looked at us as we traveled threw the small town.
Syaoran held my hand even tighter. He was afraid of what might happen and so was I. Then I smelt something. It was blood. I looked around and it stared to get stronger. I was very hungry after all I had not eating for days.
I searched threw out the people looking for the person who was bleeding.
Syaoran watched me look around.
We finally made it up to a large forest. We walked a little more quickly and we came to a place that was in a circle people were all bowing to some people in chairs. They looked old and in charge.
"The young Li brothers and mistress have arrived as I see." One of them said.
Eriol and Tomoyo bowed but Syaoran stood there not moving. I was going to bow as well but Syaoran did not let me. I looked at him with wondering eyes.
Eriol seemed to be angry with his little brother for not bowing.
The old people looked at him and said, "You show no manners for your elders boy."
"I don't have any respect for you so I am not going to bow."
"What about the girl. Who is she?" another asked.
A lady came out and came up to us.
"I know who she is, she is the one who caught the young warrior's heart."
Syaoran held on tighter to my hand and I looked at the lady. Syaoran was watching for approval from these people.
"His eyes have are ready changed master."
"Yes I know this girl, very powerful might I add." The oldest one said looking at me. I looked up at him but still could not see his face. ~How did he know me? ~
"Well she will have to go threw out tests."
Syaoran shook his head, "She can't make them."
"And why not?" he asked.
"Because she is not one of us."
"Not one of us you say are you saying she is human."
Syaoran looked at him.
"A human girl?"
~Human he things I am human? ~
"We will just have to kill her now won't we." He said.
Syaoran stepped in front of me. "I will die before that!"
"Then you want to fight first fine lets begin then."
The oldest one came down and grabbed out his sword.
Syaoran grabbed out his as well.
"Syaoran don't please I have something to tell you first."
"Don't worry I will do fine. Please go to mistress Tomoyo and stay save please."
"But Syaoran…" Tomoyo grabbed me.
"Come on we can not interrupt a fight dear you can die."
"I can't let him do this because I am…" before I could say the fight started and now I could see everyone's faces they looked just like me were they vampires like me? I smelt the blood again it was coming from a little girl was smirking evilly at the two fighting.
I wanted to go and get some blood but I could not take my eyes off Syaoran and the elder fighting he would get hurt because of me.
"You will die boy!" the man said trying to cut Syaoran.
Syaoran jumped out of the way quickly.
Then I saw them. His teeth shaped just like mine then everything made since.
Syaoran's strength, his power and why he only came out at night. He was a vampire and so was I. I was never human never will be and he is going to die because of me. I looked down at the little girl who was sucking blood out of a human's arm. This was a vampire colony.
I use to live in one just like that little girl. But I fled. I started remembering my past life and looked down at Syaoran. The elder had knocked him down to the ground and the elder's teeth now had came out.
He was going to kill him.
The elder placed the sword to Syaoran's heart. The sword was silver and would surly kill him.
Before he could take the last blow I jumped down and the elder cut my arm.
"Don't touch him." I said getting angry.
"Move out of the way human girl you will be next."
"I don't think so." I said glaring at him.
He looked at my and smirked and then tried to stab me with the sword but I jumped out of the way.
Syaoran's arm was bleeding and all the vampires were looking at him with pleading eyes but none of them moved because the lady was standing there telling them no not yet.
I would not let him die.
Syaoran watched as I jumped away from the sword, which was covered by blood.
"Little girl you are playing with death."
"No I am death!" I yelled and hit him in the side.
All of the vampires stood there in shock.
"You have a lot of strength for a little human girl." He said jumping out of the way.
"One thing you should know I am not a little human girl!" I said showing him teeth as I knocked him down to the ground. He looked at his bleeding arm and then at me.
"You are a vampire?" he asked in shock at his mistake.
Sakura stood by Syaoran's side and helped him out.
"Your a vampire?" he looked at me with wondering eyes.
All the vampires looked at me.
That's the end of this chapter!!! I hoped you like it!! So what is going to happen to our two little vampires?!!! What are the elders going to say now? Hahahaha Sakura beat the elders' butt!!!! Please R+R!!!!