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Epiphany's eyes slowly opened, it was late afternoon. The stench of the garbage filled her nostrils and made her wince. She promptly sat up from where she had slept, with a sore body she pushed herself off the cold ground.
"Ha! I guess this is better than school." She thought to herself.
She crept out from the ally and onto the street, her journey to revenge was far from over.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Johnny and Devi stood over Epiphany's empty bed.
"I just don't get that girl!" Devi growled
Johnny begun to search through her closet, pushing away boxes and clothes.
"Damn it Johnny! She's not in there!" the hysterical women screamed.
His eye twitched a bit as he clenched his teeth, it was still hard for him to control his anger. Most of the time he was able to shake it off, but the few times he couldn't he would go out onto the nearest fire escape a scream.
"Stop acting like a lunatic! She couldn't have gotten far!" he shot back at her.
She balled her fists trying not to deck him in the jaw. Red faced she headed for the door.
"Where the hell are you going!?" he questioned.
"To find my kid so I can kick her ass!" Devi said slamming the door behind her.
Johnny rolled his eyes and followed her.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Epiphany walked along the sidewalk, the people surrounding her sent a chill down her spine. On the steps of a run down apartment stood a girl about 15 or 16, and was about 8 or 9 months pregnant. As she walked on a drunken man laid on his side covered in his own vomit, she tried her hardest not to look at him. She walked on for a few more blocks, when another young woman this one around 19 stood half clothed. Her hair was primped up and her face done with a gallon of make up.
"Hey there girlie your looking mighty nice today" the woman said as she passed by.
Epiphany made a disgusted face and walked a bit faster. She kept walking until her stomach forced her to stop, it groaned from hunger. She stopped in a nearby ally and pulled a few bills out from her pocket. The sudden tapping of shoes sounded from the pavement.
"Hello?" she called out
But it was too late; an arm wrapped tightly around her waits lifted her body off the ground. She went to scream but a gloved hand blocked her mouth. She flailed her body it every attempt to escape but it was no use, they were too strong. The grip loosened as a canvas sack slid over her head and shoulders. She dropped to the ground but before she even had time to move her attacker was back on her. They bound her wrists and ankles together and picked her squirming body tossing it over their shoulders like a sake of potatoes.
Hot tears flooded her eyes, and her head throbbed. She was slammed down into the trunk of a car and a few seconds later was speeding off.
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Epiphany's eyes slowly opened, it was late afternoon. The stench of the garbage filled her nostrils and made her wince. She promptly sat up from where she had slept, with a sore body she pushed herself off the cold ground.
"Ha! I guess this is better than school." She thought to herself.
She crept out from the ally and onto the street, her journey to revenge was far from over.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Johnny and Devi stood over Epiphany's empty bed.
"I just don't get that girl!" Devi growled
Johnny begun to search through her closet, pushing away boxes and clothes.
"Damn it Johnny! She's not in there!" the hysterical women screamed.
His eye twitched a bit as he clenched his teeth, it was still hard for him to control his anger. Most of the time he was able to shake it off, but the few times he couldn't he would go out onto the nearest fire escape a scream.
"Stop acting like a lunatic! She couldn't have gotten far!" he shot back at her.
She balled her fists trying not to deck him in the jaw. Red faced she headed for the door.
"Where the hell are you going!?" he questioned.
"To find my kid so I can kick her ass!" Devi said slamming the door behind her.
Johnny rolled his eyes and followed her.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Epiphany walked along the sidewalk, the people surrounding her sent a chill down her spine. On the steps of a run down apartment stood a girl about 15 or 16, and was about 8 or 9 months pregnant. As she walked on a drunken man laid on his side covered in his own vomit, she tried her hardest not to look at him. She walked on for a few more blocks, when another young woman this one around 19 stood half clothed. Her hair was primped up and her face done with a gallon of make up.
"Hey there girlie your looking mighty nice today" the woman said as she passed by.
Epiphany made a disgusted face and walked a bit faster. She kept walking until her stomach forced her to stop, it groaned from hunger. She stopped in a nearby ally and pulled a few bills out from her pocket. The sudden tapping of shoes sounded from the pavement.
"Hello?" she called out
But it was too late; an arm wrapped tightly around her waits lifted her body off the ground. She went to scream but a gloved hand blocked her mouth. She flailed her body it every attempt to escape but it was no use, they were too strong. The grip loosened as a canvas sack slid over her head and shoulders. She dropped to the ground but before she even had time to move her attacker was back on her. They bound her wrists and ankles together and picked her squirming body tossing it over their shoulders like a sake of potatoes.
Hot tears flooded her eyes, and her head throbbed. She was slammed down into the trunk of a car and a few seconds later was speeding off.
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