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Chapter 5.
Epiphany watched as the young man made his way down the ramshackle steps into his basement where she had sat for almost a week only being untied every 4 or 5 hours to go to a bathroom in a steel bucket, with "him" watching. He carried something in his arms; a bundle. It was a white stained towel.
"What's that for?" she pointed at it
A smile crossed his face as he tossed it at her feet.
"What..what are you doing?"
He untied but kept a firm grip on her arms.
"I'm going to let you shower, your stench is beginning to get overwhelming."
She bit her lower lip and kicked the towel up into her grip.
"Your not going to umm watch me are you?"
He chuckled and shook his head "no"
"Aren't you worried I'll you know get out?" she raised an eyebrow.
He laughed out again
"No! Of course not, the windows are nailed shut and they are boarded over, and I have the key to the door, so unless you flush yourself down the toilet I don't think you will get out"
She sighed a followed him up the stairs. An old cracked wooden door came into sight; behind it was a small dirty bathroom with a tiny ceramic bathtub.
"There you go"
She felt is hands move onto her back as he shoved her into the room; the lock clicked behind her. Sighing she walked over to the tub and turned on the water. She looked at herself in the foggy mirror.
"Damn"
Her eyes had deep purple circles under them and her arms were bruised. She waited until the water in the tub was almost filled to the brim before she got in. the hot water felt good against her skin; it had been days sense her last bath, and she was extremely grateful for this one. She tipped her head back sinking under the surface of the water, letting the water fill in her facial orifices. Finally she raised above the water taking a large breath of air; muffled voices echoed in from the next room.
"What the?" Epiphany thought
She stepped out of the bath and wrapped the filthy towel around herself. She peered through the keyhole to see whom he was talking to.
"This is it Shmee, he'll pay for everything! Let's just hope he found my little letter"
Epiphany saw what it was he was talking to, it was an old stained teddy bear, it was missing an ear and looked as if a dog had mangled it.
"Tonight, when Johnny comes to the rescue I think he'll be in for a big surprise; Shmee, tonight is the night Johnny dies!"
Epiphany's eyes widened with terror.
~MORE SOON!!~
A/N- some one e-mailed me asking me how to pronounce the name Epiphany so here it is, E-pif-ann-ie, say it like that ok?
Chapter 5.
Epiphany watched as the young man made his way down the ramshackle steps into his basement where she had sat for almost a week only being untied every 4 or 5 hours to go to a bathroom in a steel bucket, with "him" watching. He carried something in his arms; a bundle. It was a white stained towel.
"What's that for?" she pointed at it
A smile crossed his face as he tossed it at her feet.
"What..what are you doing?"
He untied but kept a firm grip on her arms.
"I'm going to let you shower, your stench is beginning to get overwhelming."
She bit her lower lip and kicked the towel up into her grip.
"Your not going to umm watch me are you?"
He chuckled and shook his head "no"
"Aren't you worried I'll you know get out?" she raised an eyebrow.
He laughed out again
"No! Of course not, the windows are nailed shut and they are boarded over, and I have the key to the door, so unless you flush yourself down the toilet I don't think you will get out"
She sighed a followed him up the stairs. An old cracked wooden door came into sight; behind it was a small dirty bathroom with a tiny ceramic bathtub.
"There you go"
She felt is hands move onto her back as he shoved her into the room; the lock clicked behind her. Sighing she walked over to the tub and turned on the water. She looked at herself in the foggy mirror.
"Damn"
Her eyes had deep purple circles under them and her arms were bruised. She waited until the water in the tub was almost filled to the brim before she got in. the hot water felt good against her skin; it had been days sense her last bath, and she was extremely grateful for this one. She tipped her head back sinking under the surface of the water, letting the water fill in her facial orifices. Finally she raised above the water taking a large breath of air; muffled voices echoed in from the next room.
"What the?" Epiphany thought
She stepped out of the bath and wrapped the filthy towel around herself. She peered through the keyhole to see whom he was talking to.
"This is it Shmee, he'll pay for everything! Let's just hope he found my little letter"
Epiphany saw what it was he was talking to, it was an old stained teddy bear, it was missing an ear and looked as if a dog had mangled it.
"Tonight, when Johnny comes to the rescue I think he'll be in for a big surprise; Shmee, tonight is the night Johnny dies!"
Epiphany's eyes widened with terror.
~MORE SOON!!~
A/N- some one e-mailed me asking me how to pronounce the name Epiphany so here it is, E-pif-ann-ie, say it like that ok?