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Chapter 6.
Devi stomped up to her front door and turned to Johnny.
"6 hours of walking in the city and nothing!" she growled
Johnny's eyes narrowed and his teeth clenched. He had enough of her bitching. He reached out his arms and slammed her against the wall as hard as he could.
"That's it! I can't stand it any more! Your constant bitching and whining is not going to find her any faster! So just shut the hell up!"
He paused to catch his breath his face was bright red and the vain on his forehead was bulging out. Devi looked at him not saying anything; she didn't know what to say to that.
"Fine, you know what just fine" she pushed him away from her
She turned and opened the door to her apartment, noticing a small piece of paper on the floor by her left foot.
"What the hell is this?"
She picked up the folded paper and read it aloud:
Johnny-
I have darling little Epiphany, she is quite the girl, she reminds me so much of you. Don't worry I'm taking good care of her, free from perversion to your pleasure, but my friend I'm starting to feel temptation get the best of me, if you wish to keep Epiphany's innocence come and get her, I'm waiting. House #779
Yours truly,
Todd
"That bastard!"
Devi crumpled the paper into a ball and slammed it against the door. Hot tears ran down her face, and her teeth grid.
"No psychopath is gonna stick their dick up inside my baby!"
Johnny's eyes grew in amazement. Could it really be who he thought it was? He unfolded the paper, and sure enough it was, little Todd Castle.
"Come on let's go get that sick son of a bitch" Devi said making a fist.
~*~*~*~*~*~
Epiphany sat on the cold wood floor looking around; her wrists and ankles were tied together. The man walked up to her with a pleased smile on his face.
"Ah see my dear, you're much more tolerable now, and needless to say desirable"
Epiphany spit in his face, and inched away from him.
"Man, just my luck, a crazy dude wants to bang me, maybe if he weren't so damn creepy he'd be kinda cute" she thought to herself.
He chuckled a bit and nodded to himself.
"You think I'm crazy, yes?"
Epiphany just nodded.
"You can thank Johnny for that one, you see, love, that empty lot next door, lot number 777, well a long time ago, oh say about 15 years ago, he lived there. I was only 6 or 7 at the time, but he had already ruined my life. The things I saw you would not imagine! Because of him I was locked up in an insane asylum! I stayed there until I was 14! But the damage he had provided me never left! And this is why he must pay! For ruining my childhood! And my life!"
Tears ran down the mans face, and for the first time, he no longer looked like a man, he looked like a child, a frightened little child. Epiphany almost felt bad for him all those wasted years.
"You see, I've been watching you, for a while, waiting for a good time to talk to you, I never meant for any of this to ever happen."
Epiphany raised an eyebrow "ummm what?"
"I suppose I should start from the begging, well, about 4 months ago, I saw you walking I of course thought you were much older than you were. Being the lovely girl you are, I admit I was attracted, and so I followed you; and that's when I saw you with him, and it hit me, you were his girl, and I thought of the perfect way to get two things I wanted, the death of him, and you. It wasn't until a few days ago when I first picked you p that I realized you were so young. But none of that matters now, because soon, mommy and daddy will be running here to save you and BAM! Good bye Johnny, your mother we'll tie up in the basement, and me and you? We have a 9:00 flight to Russia in the morning, that shall be our new home."
Epiphany tried her hardest to block out the horrible story that was being told to her, but she could not escape. He went to speak when a loud banging cut him off.
"Looks like the party's here! Its show time!" he said pulling out a pistol
~MORE SOON~
Chapter 6.
Devi stomped up to her front door and turned to Johnny.
"6 hours of walking in the city and nothing!" she growled
Johnny's eyes narrowed and his teeth clenched. He had enough of her bitching. He reached out his arms and slammed her against the wall as hard as he could.
"That's it! I can't stand it any more! Your constant bitching and whining is not going to find her any faster! So just shut the hell up!"
He paused to catch his breath his face was bright red and the vain on his forehead was bulging out. Devi looked at him not saying anything; she didn't know what to say to that.
"Fine, you know what just fine" she pushed him away from her
She turned and opened the door to her apartment, noticing a small piece of paper on the floor by her left foot.
"What the hell is this?"
She picked up the folded paper and read it aloud:
Johnny-
I have darling little Epiphany, she is quite the girl, she reminds me so much of you. Don't worry I'm taking good care of her, free from perversion to your pleasure, but my friend I'm starting to feel temptation get the best of me, if you wish to keep Epiphany's innocence come and get her, I'm waiting. House #779
Yours truly,
Todd
"That bastard!"
Devi crumpled the paper into a ball and slammed it against the door. Hot tears ran down her face, and her teeth grid.
"No psychopath is gonna stick their dick up inside my baby!"
Johnny's eyes grew in amazement. Could it really be who he thought it was? He unfolded the paper, and sure enough it was, little Todd Castle.
"Come on let's go get that sick son of a bitch" Devi said making a fist.
~*~*~*~*~*~
Epiphany sat on the cold wood floor looking around; her wrists and ankles were tied together. The man walked up to her with a pleased smile on his face.
"Ah see my dear, you're much more tolerable now, and needless to say desirable"
Epiphany spit in his face, and inched away from him.
"Man, just my luck, a crazy dude wants to bang me, maybe if he weren't so damn creepy he'd be kinda cute" she thought to herself.
He chuckled a bit and nodded to himself.
"You think I'm crazy, yes?"
Epiphany just nodded.
"You can thank Johnny for that one, you see, love, that empty lot next door, lot number 777, well a long time ago, oh say about 15 years ago, he lived there. I was only 6 or 7 at the time, but he had already ruined my life. The things I saw you would not imagine! Because of him I was locked up in an insane asylum! I stayed there until I was 14! But the damage he had provided me never left! And this is why he must pay! For ruining my childhood! And my life!"
Tears ran down the mans face, and for the first time, he no longer looked like a man, he looked like a child, a frightened little child. Epiphany almost felt bad for him all those wasted years.
"You see, I've been watching you, for a while, waiting for a good time to talk to you, I never meant for any of this to ever happen."
Epiphany raised an eyebrow "ummm what?"
"I suppose I should start from the begging, well, about 4 months ago, I saw you walking I of course thought you were much older than you were. Being the lovely girl you are, I admit I was attracted, and so I followed you; and that's when I saw you with him, and it hit me, you were his girl, and I thought of the perfect way to get two things I wanted, the death of him, and you. It wasn't until a few days ago when I first picked you p that I realized you were so young. But none of that matters now, because soon, mommy and daddy will be running here to save you and BAM! Good bye Johnny, your mother we'll tie up in the basement, and me and you? We have a 9:00 flight to Russia in the morning, that shall be our new home."
Epiphany tried her hardest to block out the horrible story that was being told to her, but she could not escape. He went to speak when a loud banging cut him off.
"Looks like the party's here! Its show time!" he said pulling out a pistol
~MORE SOON~