Hi Everyone. I have a few things to say regarding some reviews I have received.
The Good Reviews.
Thank you for giving me such wonderful reviews and I do plan on writing more as soon as I can. I am very pleased that you, the readers, are enjoying my story. I also hope those that don't review but still read my story have also enjoyed what I have written thus far. Please continue reading in the future.
BubblyOne.
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The Bad/Straight to the point reviews.
Thank you for the reviews you have sent me. I am glad that I do have people giving me both types of reviews.
Now I have been getting wonderful reviews like I said earlier, but there are some who think this story is a cliché`, and it very well may be. Personally I don't really care if it is. I am writing this type of story because I want to know what people think of the BASIC IDEA of the story. Now to compared to many stories that involve a new enemy, a character the writer made up, etc., my story is similar to those but still holds its' own uniqueness.
In most Gundam Wing stories, not all, when a new character is introduced they become a gundam pilot. I haven't done that. The whole reason Anita is in the story is because she may become important further along in the story. In some stories the new character immediately hits it off with everyone. Come on she only hit it off with three. Wufei respects her, but doesn't quite trust her. Then there is Heero. He doesn't even trust her at all. If he did trust her he wouldn't have asked for information about her.
In my story I do a lot of character interaction. I am trying to establish Anita so that you the readers can see how she is and get to know her better. Most people know who the pilots are but know one knows Anita. Now that she is establish in the group things will pick up.
People I am making this up as I go. I have no outline or plan. I just have a general idea of what I want. I first wrote this story on paper, but as I started to type it completely changed from what I had written down. If I was to write what I wrote down it would be completely different from the story line I have going right at this moment.
Now as for the enemy, all you really know about the enemy's objectives is that they want to kill Relena. Do you even wonder why? How do you know that is their true objective? You don't all you can do is assume that because my story is similar to others that the enemies objectives are the same. People lets' not jump the gun here ok. The only way you are going to know the objectives is to continue reading or e-mailing me saying you just want to know what their objectives are because you don't plan on reading the story.
Another factor that I put in is that there are some people with gifts. Take the scene with Quatre. Quatre is sensitive to people's emotions, empathy to be exact. It is rare but there are people in my story like that. So Anita can fight, note the little history in the last chapter, this helps her get along with the pilots a little more. Come on even in the series you saw how Relena was. She didn't scream or cry when Heero's gun was pointed at her. So why would I have Anita do otherwise? Its important that they (Gundam Pilots) know why she was able to fight like that, and why she is even attending Relena's school. So before you say this is a cliché` wait to the story is complete. When the story is complete and you still think it is cliché` then say so in the reviews but not before hand.
The Good Reviews.
Thank you for giving me such wonderful reviews and I do plan on writing more as soon as I can. I am very pleased that you, the readers, are enjoying my story. I also hope those that don't review but still read my story have also enjoyed what I have written thus far. Please continue reading in the future.
BubblyOne.
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The Bad/Straight to the point reviews.
Thank you for the reviews you have sent me. I am glad that I do have people giving me both types of reviews.
Now I have been getting wonderful reviews like I said earlier, but there are some who think this story is a cliché`, and it very well may be. Personally I don't really care if it is. I am writing this type of story because I want to know what people think of the BASIC IDEA of the story. Now to compared to many stories that involve a new enemy, a character the writer made up, etc., my story is similar to those but still holds its' own uniqueness.
In most Gundam Wing stories, not all, when a new character is introduced they become a gundam pilot. I haven't done that. The whole reason Anita is in the story is because she may become important further along in the story. In some stories the new character immediately hits it off with everyone. Come on she only hit it off with three. Wufei respects her, but doesn't quite trust her. Then there is Heero. He doesn't even trust her at all. If he did trust her he wouldn't have asked for information about her.
In my story I do a lot of character interaction. I am trying to establish Anita so that you the readers can see how she is and get to know her better. Most people know who the pilots are but know one knows Anita. Now that she is establish in the group things will pick up.
People I am making this up as I go. I have no outline or plan. I just have a general idea of what I want. I first wrote this story on paper, but as I started to type it completely changed from what I had written down. If I was to write what I wrote down it would be completely different from the story line I have going right at this moment.
Now as for the enemy, all you really know about the enemy's objectives is that they want to kill Relena. Do you even wonder why? How do you know that is their true objective? You don't all you can do is assume that because my story is similar to others that the enemies objectives are the same. People lets' not jump the gun here ok. The only way you are going to know the objectives is to continue reading or e-mailing me saying you just want to know what their objectives are because you don't plan on reading the story.
Another factor that I put in is that there are some people with gifts. Take the scene with Quatre. Quatre is sensitive to people's emotions, empathy to be exact. It is rare but there are people in my story like that. So Anita can fight, note the little history in the last chapter, this helps her get along with the pilots a little more. Come on even in the series you saw how Relena was. She didn't scream or cry when Heero's gun was pointed at her. So why would I have Anita do otherwise? Its important that they (Gundam Pilots) know why she was able to fight like that, and why she is even attending Relena's school. So before you say this is a cliché` wait to the story is complete. When the story is complete and you still think it is cliché` then say so in the reviews but not before hand.