Looks like a beautiful day in Neverland. Sparkling waters with mermaids, rainbows and colors everywhere, the indian point, Even the tree world of the lost boys.
And, The pirate ship.
"Smee, get over here" Captain James Hook's voice can be heard as we enter the loft of the ship
"Yes, Captain?" Smee says
"What are you doing" Hook asks
"Looking for Pan Captain"
"No,... no smee" Captain Hook says in his calm voice. He takes smee by the shirt and drags him to a telescope. Smee was looking out the window before.
"He's been gone for a while, maybe he's surrendered"
"I highly doubt that Smee, Pan will never surrender" Captain hook said
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"Ah.... Isn't it wonderful, Neverland" says Peter
Peter, Stephanie, Micheal, and Jason are standing on the top of a cliff
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" There he is captain! Pan, with some new lost boys" Smee exclaimed
"WHAT!" Captain Hook yelled as he pushed Smee out of the way and looked through the telescope.
"Blasted! your right! who are they!!" Captain yelled again
"Uh, uh new lost boys?" Smee said a little uneasy
Captain Hook took Smee again by his shirt using his 'Hook' and brought him over to the telescope.
"Does she look like a Lost Boy you blithering idiot! Captain screamed
"Ring the bell!! Captain ordered
Smee went out on the deck and rang a large warning bell. All pirates on the ship look up to smee suddenly
"Peter Pan's back, get the cannon! captain orders!" Smee yelled out
Everyone scattered doing what they needed to do.
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" Oh look a big boat!" Micheal said
"A pirate ship Micheal, Pirates!!" Jason said calmly at first until he relized pirates.
"What are we going to do? are they after us?" Stephanie said a bit worried
"Haha, don't worry, i'll protect you. Good ole' Captain Hook is a wuss! Hey I'll introduce you all to the lost boys my men"
"You men?" askes Jason
"My acomplices" Peter said
Peter fly off, as Stephanie, Jason and Micheal followed. Peter and Tink were fly at the speed of light as Stephanie, Jason, and Micheal fly down. They were lost. They lost track of Peter and Tinkerbelle.
"Peter?" Stephanie called out
"GOOOOOOOO!!!!!!" Somewhere screamed as the three children jerked there heads upward as kids here and there were flying jumping out of trees on strings and other devices. There were all around the 3 children and about to tie them up when suddenly....
"Stop!" Peter shouted and him and Tink flew out.
"What's the matter with you!?!?!" Peter yelled
"Well, Tink said it was a monster!" One of the boys, a portly one said.
"What?, Tink said what? Tinkerbelle! come here
Tink flew down as she was creeping away before.
"Why would you say that?"
"These kids don't belong in Neverland and I'm glad to hurt them!" Tink said as Stephanie, Jason and Micheal looked at eachother amazed that she talks!
"Tinkerbelle!"
Tink just ignored him and went in her little house.
"Urg! Boys, do they look like monsters to you?!"
"Well, maybe that one" one of them pointed to Stephanie
"what, why?" Peter asked
"Shes's a girl!" All the lost boys said in unison
"So is tink" Stephanie said getting her way in the convosation
"Thats different" A knew face face said as everyone turned around and aw a new lost boy with a red mowhawk.
"Know its not!" Stephanie argued
Stephanie and the new face stepped closer to one another
"Ok, ok, Rufio, stop it. all of you! You should be ashamed of yourself! these are our friends! Stephanie, Jason, and Micheal.
lost boys just looked at eachother ashamed. Rufio was still a little bit hot-headed.
"Were all together" no more fighting Peter demanded
All the boys agreed as a chorus of 'I'm sorry's and ok's' went through. as Rufio his arms crossed.
"Rufio..." Peter waited
"Fine" he said
"Welcome to our home!" another little lost boy said. The boys surrounded the children as smiled and exchanged greetings as they welcomed them. Peter smiled
" Thats better!"
Rufio also went over there. but still wasn't thrilled with them being in Neverland, along with Tinkerbelle
AN: OK! dats chapter 6! R/R! As you can probably tell, this chapter doesn't really relate much to the original Peter Pan, but this is my story! :) I'm trying to pit things in here from the original story too.
I love the feedback guys! to anwser a few questions people have asked in the reviews
First, Yes, I have read the original book Peter Pan and watched the movie Hook. I love the movie Hook, thats why a lot of stuff seems to be from Hook. Since my story in live action. I automatically think of Hook and stuff. I guess i'm not very imaginative. But I like my story. and I hope others still do. Like I said, the sequel might be entirely based on Hook. except theres no grownup peter or anything like that. you jus have to wait and see what in store!
secondly, a reader suggested Stephanie should be more of 15/16. She will be 16 in the sequel which take place 4 or 5 yrs. later. Hey, isn't that Peter's age? hehe.
Also, I have a screenplay called Fly Away. It's about a troubled teen girl who learns lessons of, love, life, trust, and friendship. But something terrible then happens. If you would like to read it and review. it is in the Misc section, then go to Screenplays: "Fly Away"
The main charecter's name is Stephanie also. I always use that name in my stories. The chrecters can be completly different. I jus always use that name for some reason. I just like it! well R/R for both!!!!!