Ok. this is my first fic. Its about Redwall (duh!!!!). I have read everyone
of the series and can't wait for The Angel's Command to come out!!! ^_^
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Prolouge:
It was a calm evening on the night before the great mid spring feast. Lucas sat on the steps before the gate house of Redwall Abbey. He had been up all day watching the dibbuns paddle in the pond. After he had done that he went to the orchard to eat a few plums only to be terrorized by dibbuns covered from head to toe in stawberry juice. After cleaning them. There was a visitor at the gate. He went to see who it was, but no one was there! It had not been his day.
He was joined shortly by a hare by the name of Winston. He was the colonel of the long patrol of the badgers' keepSalamndastron. The Abess came and talked to young Lucas. " Lucas you are of only three seasons I think you are working to hard." said the Abess. " I know, but I promised my father I would do the best I could." replied Lucas.
" I think that Abess Honeysuckle is right young chap. You need to learn to slack off a bit like me. Wot,Wot." said Winston.
Out of no where there was a knock on the gate they turned to go to answer it , when they noticed a bright flicker over by the wicker gate. The Abbey was being broken into!!!
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It was a calm evening on the night before the great mid spring feast. Lucas sat on the steps before the gate house of Redwall Abbey. He had been up all day watching the dibbuns paddle in the pond. After he had done that he went to the orchard to eat a few plums only to be terrorized by dibbuns covered from head to toe in stawberry juice. After cleaning them. There was a visitor at the gate. He went to see who it was, but no one was there! It had not been his day.
He was joined shortly by a hare by the name of Winston. He was the colonel of the long patrol of the badgers' keepSalamndastron. The Abess came and talked to young Lucas. " Lucas you are of only three seasons I think you are working to hard." said the Abess. " I know, but I promised my father I would do the best I could." replied Lucas.
" I think that Abess Honeysuckle is right young chap. You need to learn to slack off a bit like me. Wot,Wot." said Winston.
Out of no where there was a knock on the gate they turned to go to answer it , when they noticed a bright flicker over by the wicker gate. The Abbey was being broken into!!!
~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~ Well hope you liked the prolouge! ^_^ Please review it!!! I won't write another part until I get atleast five reviews from different people! Only one review each! ^_^