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Chapter 3 : Aisa Yapin -Bounty Hunter
Areiminita brought them inside the Light Of Shiantar. Obi-Wan's eyes wandered around the room. The inside of the building was far more beautiful than the outside. The blue walls were carved with elaborate designs. The stairs to their left were made out of a shiny , blue crystal. The air smelled cool and fresh. In the center of the room stood a fountain made from the same crysal as the stairs. Behind the fountain was the door to the Mayor's ofiice and where Areiminita led them.
Obi-Wan looked behind him where Siri and Bant followed. He could feel how uncomfortable the two felt around each other. He didn't understand why they felt that way towards each other. During the trip to Shiantar the three of them talked in Obi-Wan's quarters. Maybe because Obi-Wan was around they felt more comfortable around each other. But now Obi-Wan had to stay beside his master and the two would observe from a distance which meant they would have to stay close together.
Obi-Wan had that feeling again as they approached the mayor's office. Something was definately wrong. But what was wrong? His questions were answered when they entered the Mayor's office. **************************************************************************** ****
Qui-Gon looked around the empty office. The mayor was not here where he should be. The office looked like it hadn't been occupied in days. But the mayor was here today , awaiting their arrival. Qui-Gon approached the desk where a holo-projector lay. He turned it on and was alarmed at what he saw.
Aan image of a woman with dark brown hair appeared. Her eyes were covered with a helmet but her nose and mouth were clearly visible. Her skin was light and pale. Qui-Gon recognized her as one of the most dangerous Bounty Hunter's that roamed the Republic ; Aisa Yapin . Beside her image was the image of a chubby man who was no doubt a Shiantarian because of the blue mark on his forehead. Qui-Gon assumed that the chubby Shiantarian was the mayor.
Aisa began to speak. "Your mayor here poses a great threat to my client. He fears that if he agrees to join the Republic , the planet might gain more power. He has ordered me to kill him , but I have other plans. If you can bring me the treaure of Shiantar , The Orb of Understanding , your mayor will be spared. Send whoever you wish. You may send Jedi even , but in order for your mayor to live you must bring The Orb of Understanding to me." That was the end of the message.
**************************************************************************** ****** Aisa Yanip was one of the most feared bounty hunters in the galaxy. In her entire career she had killed at four Jedi. In her weapon collection she kept a Wookie Bowcaster , a stun baton , and a pack of Thermal detonators. Her most favorite weapon was the lightsabers she had stolen from the fallen Jedi.
People often mistook her for a Jedi. She killed anyone that made that mistake. She despised Jedi and wanted to kill them all off , but there were too many of them. Two of the Jedi she killed were only Padawans. The other two were Knights. Without her thermal detonators she probably would never have defeated those Jedi.
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Chapter 3 : Aisa Yapin -Bounty Hunter
Areiminita brought them inside the Light Of Shiantar. Obi-Wan's eyes wandered around the room. The inside of the building was far more beautiful than the outside. The blue walls were carved with elaborate designs. The stairs to their left were made out of a shiny , blue crystal. The air smelled cool and fresh. In the center of the room stood a fountain made from the same crysal as the stairs. Behind the fountain was the door to the Mayor's ofiice and where Areiminita led them.
Obi-Wan looked behind him where Siri and Bant followed. He could feel how uncomfortable the two felt around each other. He didn't understand why they felt that way towards each other. During the trip to Shiantar the three of them talked in Obi-Wan's quarters. Maybe because Obi-Wan was around they felt more comfortable around each other. But now Obi-Wan had to stay beside his master and the two would observe from a distance which meant they would have to stay close together.
Obi-Wan had that feeling again as they approached the mayor's office. Something was definately wrong. But what was wrong? His questions were answered when they entered the Mayor's office. **************************************************************************** ****
Qui-Gon looked around the empty office. The mayor was not here where he should be. The office looked like it hadn't been occupied in days. But the mayor was here today , awaiting their arrival. Qui-Gon approached the desk where a holo-projector lay. He turned it on and was alarmed at what he saw.
Aan image of a woman with dark brown hair appeared. Her eyes were covered with a helmet but her nose and mouth were clearly visible. Her skin was light and pale. Qui-Gon recognized her as one of the most dangerous Bounty Hunter's that roamed the Republic ; Aisa Yapin . Beside her image was the image of a chubby man who was no doubt a Shiantarian because of the blue mark on his forehead. Qui-Gon assumed that the chubby Shiantarian was the mayor.
Aisa began to speak. "Your mayor here poses a great threat to my client. He fears that if he agrees to join the Republic , the planet might gain more power. He has ordered me to kill him , but I have other plans. If you can bring me the treaure of Shiantar , The Orb of Understanding , your mayor will be spared. Send whoever you wish. You may send Jedi even , but in order for your mayor to live you must bring The Orb of Understanding to me." That was the end of the message.
**************************************************************************** ****** Aisa Yanip was one of the most feared bounty hunters in the galaxy. In her entire career she had killed at four Jedi. In her weapon collection she kept a Wookie Bowcaster , a stun baton , and a pack of Thermal detonators. Her most favorite weapon was the lightsabers she had stolen from the fallen Jedi.
People often mistook her for a Jedi. She killed anyone that made that mistake. She despised Jedi and wanted to kill them all off , but there were too many of them. Two of the Jedi she killed were only Padawans. The other two were Knights. Without her thermal detonators she probably would never have defeated those Jedi.
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