The New Spider-Man
Chapter 1: The Black Suit
It was a terrible day for Max Lerdin, He was fired from his job and his girlfriend played him and then dumped him. He was walking home from his old job and the rain just started to come down followed by lightning.
He walked through the park and saw some kind of pool of oil. Max carefully walked over to and knelt down to examine it. It latched at him; Max fell back in terror as it quickly engulfed him. "Get it off help, anyone!" Max screamed out. But it was too late It was all over him. Max opened his eyes to find out he can see 10 times better than he could before.
He checked him self out, it was black all over except for the white spider signs on his chest and back. Then all of a sudden a lighting bolt hit a tree cutting the tree in half. The tree fell towards him, but for Alex everything was in slow-motion. "Wow" Max thought. But he wasn't out of danger yet the tree was still coming down. Max jumped out of the way but Max realized something; He was like 20 feet in the air. But he was jumping right to a building. Max outstretched his hands so they can take the blow but none came. "What, Where's all the pain?" Max thought to himself. He opened his eyes; his body was sticking to the wall. "Sweet like the real Spider-Man!" said Max.
"Wait, This black stuff is from spider-man but Spider-man is a comic book so how did this black stuff get here?" Max asked himself. "Wait, Maybe I can shoot web just like him" Max wondered. Max put his fingers like what spider-man does to shoot web and it worked, a white web shot out of his wrist. "Ok let's try this one step at a time" Max thought.
He then climbed a building then he had to work on his aim he looked at a advertisement sign on a top of a building with a crane what put It there 20 feet above it. He shot his web at the top of the crane; he missed a couple of times than he got the hang of it and got a hold. He then jumped 10 feet into the air then went forward on the web. " Ah crap, how am I going to stop" Max thought. Max then slammed right into the board. "Ow" said Max.
End of Chapter 1
I don't own Spider-Man or the black suit so don't sue me..
I WANT SOME REVIEWS PLZ!!!
Chapter 1: The Black Suit
It was a terrible day for Max Lerdin, He was fired from his job and his girlfriend played him and then dumped him. He was walking home from his old job and the rain just started to come down followed by lightning.
He walked through the park and saw some kind of pool of oil. Max carefully walked over to and knelt down to examine it. It latched at him; Max fell back in terror as it quickly engulfed him. "Get it off help, anyone!" Max screamed out. But it was too late It was all over him. Max opened his eyes to find out he can see 10 times better than he could before.
He checked him self out, it was black all over except for the white spider signs on his chest and back. Then all of a sudden a lighting bolt hit a tree cutting the tree in half. The tree fell towards him, but for Alex everything was in slow-motion. "Wow" Max thought. But he wasn't out of danger yet the tree was still coming down. Max jumped out of the way but Max realized something; He was like 20 feet in the air. But he was jumping right to a building. Max outstretched his hands so they can take the blow but none came. "What, Where's all the pain?" Max thought to himself. He opened his eyes; his body was sticking to the wall. "Sweet like the real Spider-Man!" said Max.
"Wait, This black stuff is from spider-man but Spider-man is a comic book so how did this black stuff get here?" Max asked himself. "Wait, Maybe I can shoot web just like him" Max wondered. Max put his fingers like what spider-man does to shoot web and it worked, a white web shot out of his wrist. "Ok let's try this one step at a time" Max thought.
He then climbed a building then he had to work on his aim he looked at a advertisement sign on a top of a building with a crane what put It there 20 feet above it. He shot his web at the top of the crane; he missed a couple of times than he got the hang of it and got a hold. He then jumped 10 feet into the air then went forward on the web. " Ah crap, how am I going to stop" Max thought. Max then slammed right into the board. "Ow" said Max.
End of Chapter 1
I don't own Spider-Man or the black suit so don't sue me..
I WANT SOME REVIEWS PLZ!!!