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When the bell rings, Laura and Jake go to their lockers and meet outside school. Laura came out 2 minutes after Jake.
Laura: Did I keep you waiting?
Jake: Not for long, just 2 minutes.
Laura: Oh ok, let's head for home then.
Jake: Can we go by the park first? I want to see how beautiful it looks.
Laura: Umm. ok, sure.
Jake: Great!
They walk towards the park as Hamtaro and Tipsy run for their houses. When they finally reached Jakes house, Tipsy turns and faces Hamtaro.
Tipsy: I had a great time today. (Kisses Hamtaro on the cheek.) Thanks.
Hamtaro: (blushing) No problem.
Tipsy: Bye.
Hamtaro: Bye.
Tipsy jumps up and goes through the mail slot. Hamtaro runs home, goes in his cage, and chills. On the other hand, Jake and Laura are sitting on a park bench by a water fountain.
Jake: Can this get more beautiful?
Laura: Well it's what you think of it.
Jake: Well I love it. Just like you.
Laura: (shocked) What?
Jake: The Park is beautiful just like you, and I love the park as well as you.
Laura: (blushing) That was very sweet of you to say.
Jake: Hold on. I'll be right back.
Jake walks off in any direction. Laura sits looking down at the ground. " Why would he love me?" she wonders. All of a sudden she hears him coming back. When she looks up, Jake has a red rose in his hand. Laura is so surprised. She's even speechless.
Jake: (down on one knee) I picked this for you. I know it's not like a bouquet or anything, but I thought it would be prefect for you.
Laura: Oh! Thank you sooo much Jake! I love it.
Jake: I also have a question for you. (Still down on one knee) Will you be my girlfriend?
Laura: (surprised) Yes!! I will!! Yes!!
Laura hugs him.
Jake: Let's go now.
Laura: Ok.
They walk home hand in hand. Jake walks Laura to her door. He gives her his number and e-mail address.
Laura: Thanks.
Jake kisses her on the cheek.
Jake: See you tomorrow.
Laura: Same time?
Jake: Yep.
Laura: Ok, tomorrow then.
Jake: Bye.
Laura: Bye.
Laura runs to her room, shuts the door, and whips out her journal.
Dear Journal,
You won't believe what happened today! Jake gave me a red rose and asked me out! I'm so happy. I hope that Jake and me will be together forever! He's such a sweet kid. Very nice, smart, and did I mention HOTT!!! Well that's all for now. Laura
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* That's where my story will end. I know it's a quick one, but I'll try and make it up to you in the next chapter. Till then!
-Celtic Angel (aka Jade Dragon (Chinese fighting name (Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon), Jade Kenobi (Star Wars name, Obi-Wan Kenobi's wife and head of the women's Jedi council), Erin Lynch (real name), Fifi (only my cousin Stace will know this), Snookie, and all sorts of nicknames!)
When the bell rings, Laura and Jake go to their lockers and meet outside school. Laura came out 2 minutes after Jake.
Laura: Did I keep you waiting?
Jake: Not for long, just 2 minutes.
Laura: Oh ok, let's head for home then.
Jake: Can we go by the park first? I want to see how beautiful it looks.
Laura: Umm. ok, sure.
Jake: Great!
They walk towards the park as Hamtaro and Tipsy run for their houses. When they finally reached Jakes house, Tipsy turns and faces Hamtaro.
Tipsy: I had a great time today. (Kisses Hamtaro on the cheek.) Thanks.
Hamtaro: (blushing) No problem.
Tipsy: Bye.
Hamtaro: Bye.
Tipsy jumps up and goes through the mail slot. Hamtaro runs home, goes in his cage, and chills. On the other hand, Jake and Laura are sitting on a park bench by a water fountain.
Jake: Can this get more beautiful?
Laura: Well it's what you think of it.
Jake: Well I love it. Just like you.
Laura: (shocked) What?
Jake: The Park is beautiful just like you, and I love the park as well as you.
Laura: (blushing) That was very sweet of you to say.
Jake: Hold on. I'll be right back.
Jake walks off in any direction. Laura sits looking down at the ground. " Why would he love me?" she wonders. All of a sudden she hears him coming back. When she looks up, Jake has a red rose in his hand. Laura is so surprised. She's even speechless.
Jake: (down on one knee) I picked this for you. I know it's not like a bouquet or anything, but I thought it would be prefect for you.
Laura: Oh! Thank you sooo much Jake! I love it.
Jake: I also have a question for you. (Still down on one knee) Will you be my girlfriend?
Laura: (surprised) Yes!! I will!! Yes!!
Laura hugs him.
Jake: Let's go now.
Laura: Ok.
They walk home hand in hand. Jake walks Laura to her door. He gives her his number and e-mail address.
Laura: Thanks.
Jake kisses her on the cheek.
Jake: See you tomorrow.
Laura: Same time?
Jake: Yep.
Laura: Ok, tomorrow then.
Jake: Bye.
Laura: Bye.
Laura runs to her room, shuts the door, and whips out her journal.
Dear Journal,
You won't believe what happened today! Jake gave me a red rose and asked me out! I'm so happy. I hope that Jake and me will be together forever! He's such a sweet kid. Very nice, smart, and did I mention HOTT!!! Well that's all for now. Laura
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* That's where my story will end. I know it's a quick one, but I'll try and make it up to you in the next chapter. Till then!
-Celtic Angel (aka Jade Dragon (Chinese fighting name (Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon), Jade Kenobi (Star Wars name, Obi-Wan Kenobi's wife and head of the women's Jedi council), Erin Lynch (real name), Fifi (only my cousin Stace will know this), Snookie, and all sorts of nicknames!)