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more enjoyable!! Yuna's thoughts are now in [] brackets. So, here is ch 2.
"Father... Father Zuke?" said Yuna.
"That's my name." [Why does he have to be so informal? He IS a monk.]
"Wha-?" said Tidus, wringing paint out of his hair.
"Tidus, can I speak to Father Zuke alone please?" [Don't worry, Tidus. I'll be okay, just stop smothering me.] Tidus looked from the monk to Yuna and sighed. As soon as he was gone, Father Zuke started.
"You know, you are wanted for Maester Kinoc's murder. Lord Sseymour issued it about four months ago, I just wanted to check that you.."
[Knew? I've known thanks to my good friend Rin, you bald ass kisser] "Yes. I do. Thank you."
"And, being a faithful," he spat the word out like Yuna was a common Bandersnatch. "Member of the Yevon clergy, I should report to your ex- fiancé about your living arrangements."
[No, please, I'm happy. Leave us alone! Leave me in peace!] "How do you know where I live?"
"It was simple. Your friend Rin is very partial to drink you know."
[Rin? Oh no, Rin. What has he done to you?] "You know, being the cousin of my ex-guardian must make you have a little sympathy for me? I will pay you!"
"A bribe now is it?" Father Zuke laughed. "My cousin Lulu is back in Besaid, moping. It wasn't very courteous of you to make this her third failed pilgrimage."
[I thought I'd forgotten but it's hanging over me all the time. Poor Lulu.] "Please send my apologies to her."
"Well, I will." Yuna was on the verge of crying. [No, I'm happy here, please, just, leave me alone. Go away...] She hid her true feelings as she always had done, with her sunny smile. "Yuna, you do have an enchanting smile."
"Thank you, father."
"Maybe... Only maybe, though.. I'll give you a head start. I'll give you a week to get out of here and on your way, before I tell Maester Seymour."
[It's better than nothing.] "Thank you, Father Zuke. I am very grateful." Father Zuke grunted and turned back down the mountain. Yuna ran inside the little house and ran into Tidus. Tidus, only wearing a towel, *for all you Tidus fans* had just had a shower and he was still soaking. Yuna enveloped herself in his arms and breathed in his fresh smell.
"Yuna? What's wrong?" [A lot, my dear friend.]
"We have packing to do."
"Father... Father Zuke?" said Yuna.
"That's my name." [Why does he have to be so informal? He IS a monk.]
"Wha-?" said Tidus, wringing paint out of his hair.
"Tidus, can I speak to Father Zuke alone please?" [Don't worry, Tidus. I'll be okay, just stop smothering me.] Tidus looked from the monk to Yuna and sighed. As soon as he was gone, Father Zuke started.
"You know, you are wanted for Maester Kinoc's murder. Lord Sseymour issued it about four months ago, I just wanted to check that you.."
[Knew? I've known thanks to my good friend Rin, you bald ass kisser] "Yes. I do. Thank you."
"And, being a faithful," he spat the word out like Yuna was a common Bandersnatch. "Member of the Yevon clergy, I should report to your ex- fiancé about your living arrangements."
[No, please, I'm happy. Leave us alone! Leave me in peace!] "How do you know where I live?"
"It was simple. Your friend Rin is very partial to drink you know."
[Rin? Oh no, Rin. What has he done to you?] "You know, being the cousin of my ex-guardian must make you have a little sympathy for me? I will pay you!"
"A bribe now is it?" Father Zuke laughed. "My cousin Lulu is back in Besaid, moping. It wasn't very courteous of you to make this her third failed pilgrimage."
[I thought I'd forgotten but it's hanging over me all the time. Poor Lulu.] "Please send my apologies to her."
"Well, I will." Yuna was on the verge of crying. [No, I'm happy here, please, just, leave me alone. Go away...] She hid her true feelings as she always had done, with her sunny smile. "Yuna, you do have an enchanting smile."
"Thank you, father."
"Maybe... Only maybe, though.. I'll give you a head start. I'll give you a week to get out of here and on your way, before I tell Maester Seymour."
[It's better than nothing.] "Thank you, Father Zuke. I am very grateful." Father Zuke grunted and turned back down the mountain. Yuna ran inside the little house and ran into Tidus. Tidus, only wearing a towel, *for all you Tidus fans* had just had a shower and he was still soaking. Yuna enveloped herself in his arms and breathed in his fresh smell.
"Yuna? What's wrong?" [A lot, my dear friend.]
"We have packing to do."