Title: Perfection's Mess
Name: Roxanne B. Hadchity
Email: rbhcanac@hotmail.com
Summary: When Lorelai goes away for the weekend, Jess unleashes Rory's Wild side.
Pairing: R/J and slight L/L
Rating: PG-13.I think
Disclaimer: You know the drill. I don't own the Gilmore Girls or anything Affiliated with The Gilmore Girls, the WB and Amy Sherman Palladino do.
(Plz send me some feedback, otherwise, it's not worth writing)
AN: Ok, well, I FINALLY finished part 3.I know, I know, it took me like 2 months, but still, don't worry, I already wrote part 4 and will post it in a week! Ok, a small warning: This chapter isn't really for Dean- lovers.Its not that I hate Dean, in fact, I actually like him, but I
needed to get him out of the way, so plz, PLZ, don't take offense to
this. Ok, on to more important stuff.I would like to thank Jewls (AKA "Jewls13") for all her help and advice, Amy, for getting me over my
writers block, Amanda (AKA "Skaterbabe") for helping me with "Personal Problems", Green-eve for talking to me and finally, last but not least, Ashlyn (AKA "Desire") for just being herself. You all Rock!
Enjoy, (and review.but remember.***NO FLAMES***) -Rox.
Part 3-How you sparkle.
'Why is there a goddess in my bed?' Jess asked himself, still in awe.
Just as he was about to walk into the apartment to wake the sleeping beauty, he heard a strong male voice booming from behind him:
"Rory?" the very tall person Jess knew was Dean, Rory's boyfriend asked looking strangely at Jess then into the apartment. When he saw her sprawled out on the bed, he pushed Jess aside and yelled a little louder so as to wake Rory:
"What's going on here?!?" he asked as Rory slowly awoke from her peaceful slumber.
Once she had found her bearings, she quickly got up and out of bed. As she stood there caught, like a dear in headlights, her eyes flickering from Jess to Dean, Jess to Dean, Dean said softly:
"Rory, why were you in Jess's bed?"
When she didn't answer, he grabbed her left wrist hard and twisted it slightly.
"Answer me Rory! Tell me why you were in his bed!!!" he yelled
"Dean, you're hurting me." she said, quietly whimpering.
Jess couldn't take it any more! Nobody hurt his Rory and got away with it! Dean didn't let go. If anything, he tightened his grip.
"What the hell is wrong with you?!!? Let her go!" Jess ordered, shoving him slightly.
Dean turned around, dropping Rory's hand. She immediately clutched her wrist in pain.
"Me???.You want to know what's wrong with me?" Dean asked sarcastically.
"Ya! What kind of loser would hurt a girl?"
Rory was sitting on the bed crying.
"What's wrong with you that you can't see that hurting a girl.ESPECIALLY Rory, is just not something you do!" Jess paused; Looked at Rory then yelled, "Get out!" While pushing Dean out the door.
"This isn't over Rory.Not by a long shot!!!" Dean screamed on the way out.
Rory simply sat on the bed crying. Jess closed the apartment door and went to sit on the bed next to Rory.
"Are you ok?" he asked her, genuinely concerned for her well-being.
All Rory could do was cry and hold her arm. It wasn't so much that it hurt; it was more that she was shocked. In all the time she had been with Dean, he had never laid a hand on her, even if at times she deserved it. Sure he yelled, but it never went any further than that.
Jess repeated his question. "Rory, are you ok?.Let me see your arm"
Ok?. OK?!?!. How could she be ok?
Rory got up. She wiped her tears with her right hand while trying to hide her other arm.
"I have to go." she said.
Rory ran downstairs, past Luke who had a perplexed look on his face and dashed out the door, with only the soft clanging of bells to remind them of her presence.
* * *
A few minutes later, Jess came down the stairs looking for Rory. He had to make sure she was ok.
"Jess?" Luke said, "What's going on.why did Rory run out of here crying? And why did Dean look so mad?"
Luke's questions came pouring in.
"I'm out" Jess said while grabbing his coat.
* * *
Rory sat on one of the many benches inside the white, spotless gazebo, and thought about how scared she was of Dean, the concerned look Jess's face and the horrible pain she felt when Dean twisted her wrist.
Rory was so caught up in her thoughts that she didn't even notice Dean approaching her.
"Rory, I'm sorry. I never meant to hurt you." he said softly.
Rory looked up at him, confused.
"Do you see this Dean?" she asked while lifting the sleeve of her white blouse to reveal a huge purple bruise around her wrist.
"Nothing you can say will take this back Dean. Nothing!"
"But. Rory." he stuttered.
"You know what Dean?. Stop it!, Ok?, Just stop it!" she yelled. "I've had enough. I've had enough of your yelling, I've had enough of your not trusting me. I've had enough. Were over!"
Dean was shell-shocked.
"You can't do this Rory, I love you!!!"
Rory looked away from him in disgust.
"Do you?. Is that what you do to people you love, Dean? She asked while showing him her wrist.
"Is It?. IS IT?!?"
How dare he tell her he loved her after what he had done? The insolence!!!. The moxy!!!
When he didn't answer, she got up and slapped him hard across the face with her right hand and walked away.
* * * Smoke escaped from Jess's lips as his feet dangled, inches from the water below. Once again, he found himself on the bridge, thinking about her. It seemed to have become somewhat of a ritual for him. As he contently enjoyed the silence that surrounded him, his thoughts couldn't help but return to one thing and one thing only: Rory crying. He hated to see her cry. It meant someone had hurt her, weather it was physically or emotionally, it didn't matter; no one had a right to do that! All he wanted was to see her happy. All she deserved was the best.
He heard her; he knew she was there. Even though he was staring into the blue depths of the lake, she could feel her presence.
Rory took her place beside him on the bridge and watched him smoke. His angular jaw was clenched. Something was wrong.
When finally the silence became unbearable, Jess threw his cigarette into the lake and spoke.
"He would have hit you, ya know."
Rory was silent.
Jess reached for her left arm and raised it up to see her wrist, but Rory quickly jerked it away. She was ashamed.
"I dumped Dean. " She admitted, looking him straight in the eyes.
Jess looked away, but Rory saw the smile playing on his lips.
"And now your sad?" he asked, hoping she would say no.
"What do you think?" she asked, showing him her wrist
Jess was silent. Rory moved closer to him.
"Thank you" she said quietly.
Jess looked up from the water.
"For what?" he asked.
"For saving me, for kicking Dean out. For making me realize that I don't always have to do what's right all the time, please everyone but myself.for being you."
Jess smiled and got up, pulling Rory with him.
"Ya, well. how about I walk you home?" he offered.
"Lead the way" Rory said, looping her arm into Jess's.
* * *
Lorelai walked into the surprisingly empty diner and took her place at the counter.
"Luke, Coffee!!!" she yelled while banging the counter ferociously with her clenched fists.
Second later, the flannel-clad man poured her a cup of coffee, protest- free, which worried Lorelai immensely.
"Hey, have you talked to Rory lately?" he asked.
"Well, ya!. she's my daughter Luke, I kindda have to talk to her." she started to babble. "Ya, but I mean.is she ok?" he asked, concerned.
"Of course she's ok, why wouldn't she be ok?" she panicked.
"I don't know.she left the diner crying, I just figured you knew why" he stated.
"I gotta go".
He filled Taylor's coffee cup, while watching her leave the diner.
* * *
After having walked in silence for a while, Jess got an idea.
"Hey, how about we go out tonight to celebrate." He said.
She stopped walking and let go of his arm.
"Celebrate what?" she asked, confused.
"Why your new found freedom of course!"
They started to walk again.
"Alright, count me in".
Jess couldn't suppress a smile.
"Be ready by 8" he told her.
"Why? Were are we going?" she asked him.
One simple yet exciting word was all that Jess spoke:
"Venom"
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A/N= ok, well, I hope you all liked it! You wanna know what "Venom" is?.Well, you'll need to stay tuned to find out, or you can just figure it out for yourself, either way!. PLZ!!! Review, but remember.***ABSOLUTELY NO FLAMES****
Thanks,
Rox
Name: Roxanne B. Hadchity
Email: rbhcanac@hotmail.com
Summary: When Lorelai goes away for the weekend, Jess unleashes Rory's Wild side.
Pairing: R/J and slight L/L
Rating: PG-13.I think
Disclaimer: You know the drill. I don't own the Gilmore Girls or anything Affiliated with The Gilmore Girls, the WB and Amy Sherman Palladino do.
(Plz send me some feedback, otherwise, it's not worth writing)
AN: Ok, well, I FINALLY finished part 3.I know, I know, it took me like 2 months, but still, don't worry, I already wrote part 4 and will post it in a week! Ok, a small warning: This chapter isn't really for Dean- lovers.Its not that I hate Dean, in fact, I actually like him, but I
needed to get him out of the way, so plz, PLZ, don't take offense to
this. Ok, on to more important stuff.I would like to thank Jewls (AKA "Jewls13") for all her help and advice, Amy, for getting me over my
writers block, Amanda (AKA "Skaterbabe") for helping me with "Personal Problems", Green-eve for talking to me and finally, last but not least, Ashlyn (AKA "Desire") for just being herself. You all Rock!
Enjoy, (and review.but remember.***NO FLAMES***) -Rox.
Part 3-How you sparkle.
'Why is there a goddess in my bed?' Jess asked himself, still in awe.
Just as he was about to walk into the apartment to wake the sleeping beauty, he heard a strong male voice booming from behind him:
"Rory?" the very tall person Jess knew was Dean, Rory's boyfriend asked looking strangely at Jess then into the apartment. When he saw her sprawled out on the bed, he pushed Jess aside and yelled a little louder so as to wake Rory:
"What's going on here?!?" he asked as Rory slowly awoke from her peaceful slumber.
Once she had found her bearings, she quickly got up and out of bed. As she stood there caught, like a dear in headlights, her eyes flickering from Jess to Dean, Jess to Dean, Dean said softly:
"Rory, why were you in Jess's bed?"
When she didn't answer, he grabbed her left wrist hard and twisted it slightly.
"Answer me Rory! Tell me why you were in his bed!!!" he yelled
"Dean, you're hurting me." she said, quietly whimpering.
Jess couldn't take it any more! Nobody hurt his Rory and got away with it! Dean didn't let go. If anything, he tightened his grip.
"What the hell is wrong with you?!!? Let her go!" Jess ordered, shoving him slightly.
Dean turned around, dropping Rory's hand. She immediately clutched her wrist in pain.
"Me???.You want to know what's wrong with me?" Dean asked sarcastically.
"Ya! What kind of loser would hurt a girl?"
Rory was sitting on the bed crying.
"What's wrong with you that you can't see that hurting a girl.ESPECIALLY Rory, is just not something you do!" Jess paused; Looked at Rory then yelled, "Get out!" While pushing Dean out the door.
"This isn't over Rory.Not by a long shot!!!" Dean screamed on the way out.
Rory simply sat on the bed crying. Jess closed the apartment door and went to sit on the bed next to Rory.
"Are you ok?" he asked her, genuinely concerned for her well-being.
All Rory could do was cry and hold her arm. It wasn't so much that it hurt; it was more that she was shocked. In all the time she had been with Dean, he had never laid a hand on her, even if at times she deserved it. Sure he yelled, but it never went any further than that.
Jess repeated his question. "Rory, are you ok?.Let me see your arm"
Ok?. OK?!?!. How could she be ok?
Rory got up. She wiped her tears with her right hand while trying to hide her other arm.
"I have to go." she said.
Rory ran downstairs, past Luke who had a perplexed look on his face and dashed out the door, with only the soft clanging of bells to remind them of her presence.
* * *
A few minutes later, Jess came down the stairs looking for Rory. He had to make sure she was ok.
"Jess?" Luke said, "What's going on.why did Rory run out of here crying? And why did Dean look so mad?"
Luke's questions came pouring in.
"I'm out" Jess said while grabbing his coat.
* * *
Rory sat on one of the many benches inside the white, spotless gazebo, and thought about how scared she was of Dean, the concerned look Jess's face and the horrible pain she felt when Dean twisted her wrist.
Rory was so caught up in her thoughts that she didn't even notice Dean approaching her.
"Rory, I'm sorry. I never meant to hurt you." he said softly.
Rory looked up at him, confused.
"Do you see this Dean?" she asked while lifting the sleeve of her white blouse to reveal a huge purple bruise around her wrist.
"Nothing you can say will take this back Dean. Nothing!"
"But. Rory." he stuttered.
"You know what Dean?. Stop it!, Ok?, Just stop it!" she yelled. "I've had enough. I've had enough of your yelling, I've had enough of your not trusting me. I've had enough. Were over!"
Dean was shell-shocked.
"You can't do this Rory, I love you!!!"
Rory looked away from him in disgust.
"Do you?. Is that what you do to people you love, Dean? She asked while showing him her wrist.
"Is It?. IS IT?!?"
How dare he tell her he loved her after what he had done? The insolence!!!. The moxy!!!
When he didn't answer, she got up and slapped him hard across the face with her right hand and walked away.
* * * Smoke escaped from Jess's lips as his feet dangled, inches from the water below. Once again, he found himself on the bridge, thinking about her. It seemed to have become somewhat of a ritual for him. As he contently enjoyed the silence that surrounded him, his thoughts couldn't help but return to one thing and one thing only: Rory crying. He hated to see her cry. It meant someone had hurt her, weather it was physically or emotionally, it didn't matter; no one had a right to do that! All he wanted was to see her happy. All she deserved was the best.
He heard her; he knew she was there. Even though he was staring into the blue depths of the lake, she could feel her presence.
Rory took her place beside him on the bridge and watched him smoke. His angular jaw was clenched. Something was wrong.
When finally the silence became unbearable, Jess threw his cigarette into the lake and spoke.
"He would have hit you, ya know."
Rory was silent.
Jess reached for her left arm and raised it up to see her wrist, but Rory quickly jerked it away. She was ashamed.
"I dumped Dean. " She admitted, looking him straight in the eyes.
Jess looked away, but Rory saw the smile playing on his lips.
"And now your sad?" he asked, hoping she would say no.
"What do you think?" she asked, showing him her wrist
Jess was silent. Rory moved closer to him.
"Thank you" she said quietly.
Jess looked up from the water.
"For what?" he asked.
"For saving me, for kicking Dean out. For making me realize that I don't always have to do what's right all the time, please everyone but myself.for being you."
Jess smiled and got up, pulling Rory with him.
"Ya, well. how about I walk you home?" he offered.
"Lead the way" Rory said, looping her arm into Jess's.
* * *
Lorelai walked into the surprisingly empty diner and took her place at the counter.
"Luke, Coffee!!!" she yelled while banging the counter ferociously with her clenched fists.
Second later, the flannel-clad man poured her a cup of coffee, protest- free, which worried Lorelai immensely.
"Hey, have you talked to Rory lately?" he asked.
"Well, ya!. she's my daughter Luke, I kindda have to talk to her." she started to babble. "Ya, but I mean.is she ok?" he asked, concerned.
"Of course she's ok, why wouldn't she be ok?" she panicked.
"I don't know.she left the diner crying, I just figured you knew why" he stated.
"I gotta go".
He filled Taylor's coffee cup, while watching her leave the diner.
* * *
After having walked in silence for a while, Jess got an idea.
"Hey, how about we go out tonight to celebrate." He said.
She stopped walking and let go of his arm.
"Celebrate what?" she asked, confused.
"Why your new found freedom of course!"
They started to walk again.
"Alright, count me in".
Jess couldn't suppress a smile.
"Be ready by 8" he told her.
"Why? Were are we going?" she asked him.
One simple yet exciting word was all that Jess spoke:
"Venom"
**************************************************************************** *****
A/N= ok, well, I hope you all liked it! You wanna know what "Venom" is?.Well, you'll need to stay tuned to find out, or you can just figure it out for yourself, either way!. PLZ!!! Review, but remember.***ABSOLUTELY NO FLAMES****
Thanks,
Rox