Title: Perfection's Mess
Name: Roxanne B. Hadchity
Email: rbhcanac@hotmail.com
Summary: When Lorelai goes away for the weekend, Jess unleashes Rory's Wild side.
Pairing: R/J
Rating: PG-13.I think
Disclaimer: You know the drill. I don't own the Gilmore Girls or anything Affiliated with The Gilmore Girls, the WB and Amy Sherman Palladino do.
A/N=Big shout-out to "Jamie" who helped me figure out what "the right Word is" and to Amy for always being there! You all rock! Thanks to those of you who have reviewed, you all also rock! And Thanks to all of you who read my story, you all also rock! Want to find out if you guessed right about "Venom"???.Read on!!!
-Enjoy, (and plz review) Rox.
(Plz send me some feedback, otherwise, it's not worth writing)
Part 4: How you shine.
Lorelai walked into the house and made her way into Rory's room only to find her standing in front of the mirror pinning large hoop-earrings to her ears.
Rory turned around, her dark-blue, tight-fitting jeans clinging to her body and observed the woman sitting on her bed, waiting for her to talk.
Lorelai began to slightly fidget.
"What'cha doin'?" she asked while slightly bouncing on the bed.
Rory adjusted the straps of her pale-blue plunging v-neck tank top and turned back towards the mirror.
"Getting dressed," she stated.
Lorelai looked around the room.
"Right, right.why?" she asked, crossing her legs.
Rory took her lipstick out from her drawer.
"Because I'm going out." Lorelai jumped up from the bed, all excited and went to her daughter's side. She stared into the mirror, looking back at Rory, and said:
"With Dean.huh. huh?" She started, nudging Rory in the ribs, "You guys going to the movi.what happened to your wrist?"
Lorelai's face grew somber.
"Nothing! Its ok, really. do you think I should wear my hair up or down?" she asked, grabbing her hair and gathering it at the top of her head.
Lorelai grabbed her elbow and pulled her arms down to get her attention.
"Rory, you have a huge bruise on your wrist, and I want to know how it got there!!!" she yelled.
Rory started to head for the door.
"Mom, just leave it, ok?"
Lorelai was mad. Rory never withheld information from her. Never!
"Why?. It was Jess wasn't it!!! He hurt you, that little." she accused.
Rory turned to face her.
"It wasn't Jess, mom, Ok? It was Dean."
And with that, Rory left her mom standing there, too shocked for words.
* * *
Jess sat in his car; he's been there for a good 10 minutes but figured he'd give her a little more prep time.
When he finally worked up the courage, he walked up to the front door and rang the doorbell.
He heard people moving around within the house.
* * * Lorelai heard the doorbell, yes, she did, but she didn't move. She simply Stood there, analyzing all the information her daughter had just given her.
Dean?. Dean?!?. But he was always so nice, polite, and well behaved.
That's when it occurred to her: Dean could be at the door right then and there trying to hurt her baby!
Lorelai stormed into the living room, only to see that Rory had already opened the door to a rather stunned Jess.
'God! She's gorgeous' Jess thought to himself, eyeing the woman in front of him.
He loved the way her blue form-fitting top made her curvaceous body look. He loved to be able to see her slender shoulders and most of all, he was loved that she looked happy to see him.
Rory blushed. The way Jess looked at her made her feel naked, exposed and she liked it.
"Hey" he said, leaning against the doorframe, his eyes still roaming over her body.
"Hey, I'm almost ready to go, let me just grab my coat."
And with that, she left the house, no 'Ill be back by 10', no 'Bye mom', not even a 'Don't wait up'.
* * * After about an hour of driving in relative silence, Jess pulled over and parked on the side of a secluded Hartford street.
"Is this it?" Rory asked, getting out of the car.
She wrapped her arms around her coat in an effort to protect herself from the cold fall air, and looked around.
It was night, but even through the darkness she could see trees. they were near a forest.
Jess grabbed her hand and directed her onto the sidewalk.
"Sorry we had to park so far, but finding a parking-space in down-town Hartford is practically impossible."
When they finally got to a more populated place, it was the first thing Rory saw:
A big pink neon sign that eloquently spelled the word "Venom"
* * * Lorelai solemnly trudged into "Luke's".
Totally demoralized, she sat at the counter and laid her head on the surface.
"Coffee?" Luke asked, drink in hand.
Lorelai looked up long enough to say:
"No thanks" and laid her head back down, as if sitting up was a chore.
Luke simply walked away.
Lorelai sat up quickly.
"That's it?" she asked.
"What's it?" inquired Luke.
"I walk in here, turn down coffee and you don't even want to know what's wrong?!?"
Luke set the coffee pot down.
"You didn't give me a chance Lorelai!, what's wrong?"
She put her head back down on the counter.
"Dean hurt Rory"
"What do you mean he 'hurt' Rory?"
Lorelai slowly got up and sighed.
"He hurt her.Physically"
Luke was silent for about the time it took him to pour Lorelai a cup of coffee, as if analyzing the information, then yelled: "What?!?"
"She had a HUGE bruise on her wrist and when I kindda accused Jess, she told me that Dean, Perfect Dean, did it!"
Luke really looked confused.
"Jess would never do that!" he loves Rory.how could you think that?"
Lorelai took a sip of the coffee Luke had just served her.
"Umm. Luke, I think you're missing the BIG picture here! Dean."
And with that, she broke down and cried.
"She didn't even feel like she could tell me, Luke.I miss the way things were. I miss the times where we would stay up late and she would tell me everything about Dean and school and I would tell her about how Sookie set the kitchen on fire .I miss the old Rory."
Luke just held her.
* * *
They stood in line for a good half-hour or so, Rory gaping at the spectacular-looking patrons when finally, Jess said:
"Take off your coat" he ordered, looking around, avoiding Rory's questioning eyes.
"Why?" she asked, gripping the suede of her jacket tightly.
"Just. Take it off"
Jess waved his hand in a vague motion and Rory did as she was told.
Jess still avoided her gaze.
"Jess, I'm cold" Rory complained.
Quickly, in one swift movement, Jess wrapped his muscular arm around her practically bare mid-rift.
Rory gasped but quickly silenced when she saw the bouncer.
This rather robust, squinty-eyed man demanded identification and Jess quickly handed him what was, Rory knew, a fake I.D.
The bouncer looked at the card, looked at Jess for a sec, then shifted his gaze to Rory.
He blatantly starred at her for about a minute then waved them in.
"Do you think he ever speaks, or communicates only in sign language?" Rory whispered into Jess's ear.
Once inside, Rory was amazed.
The lights were flashing: Pink, blue, green, yellow, black light, pink, blue, green, yellow, black light.repeat.
It was mesmerizing. Loud, bass-filled music boomed through the speakers; the DJ seemed popular.
Off to the left of the club, she spotted the bar. What looked like hundreds of different bottles lined the walls and as Rory took in her surroundings, Jess yelled slightly so as to be heard over the music:
"I'm gonna go get us some drinks"
Rory just looked around.
That's when she saw 'him'.
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A/N=LOL!!! Cliffhanger!!! Soo.I'm guessing you wanna know who 'him' is! Well. that's for me to know, and you all to probably guess!!! Anyway, congrats to those of you who guessed that "Venom" was a club. you guys rock! Well, I hope y'all liked part 4! Plz review! And While your at it, tell me who you think 'him' is!
Peace! And plz review, but remember, ***NO FLAMES*** -Rox
Name: Roxanne B. Hadchity
Email: rbhcanac@hotmail.com
Summary: When Lorelai goes away for the weekend, Jess unleashes Rory's Wild side.
Pairing: R/J
Rating: PG-13.I think
Disclaimer: You know the drill. I don't own the Gilmore Girls or anything Affiliated with The Gilmore Girls, the WB and Amy Sherman Palladino do.
A/N=Big shout-out to "Jamie" who helped me figure out what "the right Word is" and to Amy for always being there! You all rock! Thanks to those of you who have reviewed, you all also rock! And Thanks to all of you who read my story, you all also rock! Want to find out if you guessed right about "Venom"???.Read on!!!
-Enjoy, (and plz review) Rox.
(Plz send me some feedback, otherwise, it's not worth writing)
Part 4: How you shine.
Lorelai walked into the house and made her way into Rory's room only to find her standing in front of the mirror pinning large hoop-earrings to her ears.
Rory turned around, her dark-blue, tight-fitting jeans clinging to her body and observed the woman sitting on her bed, waiting for her to talk.
Lorelai began to slightly fidget.
"What'cha doin'?" she asked while slightly bouncing on the bed.
Rory adjusted the straps of her pale-blue plunging v-neck tank top and turned back towards the mirror.
"Getting dressed," she stated.
Lorelai looked around the room.
"Right, right.why?" she asked, crossing her legs.
Rory took her lipstick out from her drawer.
"Because I'm going out." Lorelai jumped up from the bed, all excited and went to her daughter's side. She stared into the mirror, looking back at Rory, and said:
"With Dean.huh. huh?" She started, nudging Rory in the ribs, "You guys going to the movi.what happened to your wrist?"
Lorelai's face grew somber.
"Nothing! Its ok, really. do you think I should wear my hair up or down?" she asked, grabbing her hair and gathering it at the top of her head.
Lorelai grabbed her elbow and pulled her arms down to get her attention.
"Rory, you have a huge bruise on your wrist, and I want to know how it got there!!!" she yelled.
Rory started to head for the door.
"Mom, just leave it, ok?"
Lorelai was mad. Rory never withheld information from her. Never!
"Why?. It was Jess wasn't it!!! He hurt you, that little." she accused.
Rory turned to face her.
"It wasn't Jess, mom, Ok? It was Dean."
And with that, Rory left her mom standing there, too shocked for words.
* * *
Jess sat in his car; he's been there for a good 10 minutes but figured he'd give her a little more prep time.
When he finally worked up the courage, he walked up to the front door and rang the doorbell.
He heard people moving around within the house.
* * * Lorelai heard the doorbell, yes, she did, but she didn't move. She simply Stood there, analyzing all the information her daughter had just given her.
Dean?. Dean?!?. But he was always so nice, polite, and well behaved.
That's when it occurred to her: Dean could be at the door right then and there trying to hurt her baby!
Lorelai stormed into the living room, only to see that Rory had already opened the door to a rather stunned Jess.
'God! She's gorgeous' Jess thought to himself, eyeing the woman in front of him.
He loved the way her blue form-fitting top made her curvaceous body look. He loved to be able to see her slender shoulders and most of all, he was loved that she looked happy to see him.
Rory blushed. The way Jess looked at her made her feel naked, exposed and she liked it.
"Hey" he said, leaning against the doorframe, his eyes still roaming over her body.
"Hey, I'm almost ready to go, let me just grab my coat."
And with that, she left the house, no 'Ill be back by 10', no 'Bye mom', not even a 'Don't wait up'.
* * * After about an hour of driving in relative silence, Jess pulled over and parked on the side of a secluded Hartford street.
"Is this it?" Rory asked, getting out of the car.
She wrapped her arms around her coat in an effort to protect herself from the cold fall air, and looked around.
It was night, but even through the darkness she could see trees. they were near a forest.
Jess grabbed her hand and directed her onto the sidewalk.
"Sorry we had to park so far, but finding a parking-space in down-town Hartford is practically impossible."
When they finally got to a more populated place, it was the first thing Rory saw:
A big pink neon sign that eloquently spelled the word "Venom"
* * * Lorelai solemnly trudged into "Luke's".
Totally demoralized, she sat at the counter and laid her head on the surface.
"Coffee?" Luke asked, drink in hand.
Lorelai looked up long enough to say:
"No thanks" and laid her head back down, as if sitting up was a chore.
Luke simply walked away.
Lorelai sat up quickly.
"That's it?" she asked.
"What's it?" inquired Luke.
"I walk in here, turn down coffee and you don't even want to know what's wrong?!?"
Luke set the coffee pot down.
"You didn't give me a chance Lorelai!, what's wrong?"
She put her head back down on the counter.
"Dean hurt Rory"
"What do you mean he 'hurt' Rory?"
Lorelai slowly got up and sighed.
"He hurt her.Physically"
Luke was silent for about the time it took him to pour Lorelai a cup of coffee, as if analyzing the information, then yelled: "What?!?"
"She had a HUGE bruise on her wrist and when I kindda accused Jess, she told me that Dean, Perfect Dean, did it!"
Luke really looked confused.
"Jess would never do that!" he loves Rory.how could you think that?"
Lorelai took a sip of the coffee Luke had just served her.
"Umm. Luke, I think you're missing the BIG picture here! Dean."
And with that, she broke down and cried.
"She didn't even feel like she could tell me, Luke.I miss the way things were. I miss the times where we would stay up late and she would tell me everything about Dean and school and I would tell her about how Sookie set the kitchen on fire .I miss the old Rory."
Luke just held her.
* * *
They stood in line for a good half-hour or so, Rory gaping at the spectacular-looking patrons when finally, Jess said:
"Take off your coat" he ordered, looking around, avoiding Rory's questioning eyes.
"Why?" she asked, gripping the suede of her jacket tightly.
"Just. Take it off"
Jess waved his hand in a vague motion and Rory did as she was told.
Jess still avoided her gaze.
"Jess, I'm cold" Rory complained.
Quickly, in one swift movement, Jess wrapped his muscular arm around her practically bare mid-rift.
Rory gasped but quickly silenced when she saw the bouncer.
This rather robust, squinty-eyed man demanded identification and Jess quickly handed him what was, Rory knew, a fake I.D.
The bouncer looked at the card, looked at Jess for a sec, then shifted his gaze to Rory.
He blatantly starred at her for about a minute then waved them in.
"Do you think he ever speaks, or communicates only in sign language?" Rory whispered into Jess's ear.
Once inside, Rory was amazed.
The lights were flashing: Pink, blue, green, yellow, black light, pink, blue, green, yellow, black light.repeat.
It was mesmerizing. Loud, bass-filled music boomed through the speakers; the DJ seemed popular.
Off to the left of the club, she spotted the bar. What looked like hundreds of different bottles lined the walls and as Rory took in her surroundings, Jess yelled slightly so as to be heard over the music:
"I'm gonna go get us some drinks"
Rory just looked around.
That's when she saw 'him'.
*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*
A/N=LOL!!! Cliffhanger!!! Soo.I'm guessing you wanna know who 'him' is! Well. that's for me to know, and you all to probably guess!!! Anyway, congrats to those of you who guessed that "Venom" was a club. you guys rock! Well, I hope y'all liked part 4! Plz review! And While your at it, tell me who you think 'him' is!
Peace! And plz review, but remember, ***NO FLAMES*** -Rox