Love Hina
The Waves of Love
By: Belldandy'sKeiichi
Note: [any text in here is a thought text]
Please review so I know that you want to read more. I'm not sure if it's a good story idea or not…
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Prologue
[It all started on Tuesday morning. Naru and I were walking home just from the market when we ran into a couple. I don't know what they saw in us, but they offered two tickets to us…dunno why…but I really doesn't matter…we got tickets to a luxurious cruise line. Thirteen floors, it's own casino, three pools, and it's own theater. This was big time! Maybe I can use this in order to get close with Naru…]
Reality
"Wow…this is great!" Naru exclaimed as she looked out from the front of the ship. Keitaro watches her from a distance. [Naru really is enjoying herself…nice of her to actually go on this boat with someone like me through…. Funny how it cost me a punch to the face and a flying kick to make her agree to go…] Naru turned around. "Hey Keitaro, you did tell everyone that we're on this boat right?" "Don't worry about it Naru, I told them…hehe…" "And what's that suppose to mean?" Naru asked.
Back at the Hinata House
Shinobu peeks in Naru's room and see cardboard cutouts of Keitaro and Naru, badly drawn. "O I'm sorry, didn't know you were studying…." She leaves the room and walks down the hall.
Back at the ship
"Yup! I took care of them, they know where we are." Naru walks back to the front of the boat. "Well at lease they know where we are…we don't want that scene again where they think we are eloping or committing mass suicide…Come on Keitaro! Let's explore the boat! We still have 7 more floors to go to!" They both walked together while singing, "Fancy livin' here we come! LA LA LA LA!" "Don't touch me!" Naru yelled, punching him when Keitaro tripped and used her as support.
"Is this thing on? It is? Holy…um…hi! This is the captain speaking, if you will, meet on dock 3 for emergency procedures. Thank you." Naru and Keitaro looked at each other. "I wonder what is going on?" "Beats me…but we better do what the captain tells us." They got to dock 3 where a lot of people, also are standing. "Now, we will go through safety procedures just incase the boat sinks and…" "Sinks?!?!?" Naru got worried. "Naru, calm down it's just a…" "We have life boats that can only carry 25 people and…" "AHHH! THE BOAT IS SINKING AND ONLY 25 PEOPLE CAN SURVIVE! SAVE THE WOMEN AND CHILDREN!" Naru running around screaming. "N-N-Naru!" Keitaro tried to calm her down. "It's just a safety drill and….AHHH!" Naru just knocked Keitaro right off the rail and into the ocean. "AHHHH! SALTY!!!!!"
"I'm sorry Keitaro…" Naru trying to apologize. "Great….I always wonder what the Sea of Japan taste like…good thing all of us were wearing a life vest and were able to fish me out…literally." Keitaro, wearing a blanket with his head hanging in shame. "This is going to be a long week…" Naru brought him hot chocolate. "You ok? I'm sooooo sorry for the way I acted…" "It's ok Naru…lets just go to our room and see what it looks like ok?" "Ok" They both got up and walked to there room. "Are you sure it's this way Keitaro?" Naru asked. They were walking in long hallways. "I'm pretty sure…5448...5450...5452.…" "What's our number?" "Um, ah…5453..." "YOU IDIOT! WE ARE ON THE EVEN END OF THE HALWAY! WE ARE SUPPOSE TO BE ON THE OTHER SIDE!" Naru yelled at him. They finally got to their room to see two small beds that are put together as one. "So Naru…where are you going to sleep?" "What the hell does that mean! That's my bed! You're sleeping on the floor! "Hey…I'm not sleeping on the floor!" "Well there is no chance I'm letting you sleep with me!" Keitaro looked around to see a compartment. "Hey…look! A pull down bed! Cool! Keitaro jumped into the bed. "Hey, this is comfy…wanna come up here with me? Erk…I didn't mean it like that!" Naru, mad and pissed walked over to the levitating compartment bed and pushed it back into the ceiling. "No…wait! Naru!" Naru calmly turned around and used the telephone. "Hello? Hi, it seems like my friend has gotten himself stuck in the compartment bed and…yeah, I know he's dumb but can you re-open it? Ok, thanks…" She hung up the phone. "What an dumb ass…well Keitaro, I'm going out to explore some more…see you back here at 5..." "Wait Naru!" Keitaro's voice coming from the ceiling. "Help me out!…Hey, a pillow mint…"
End of the Prologue
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Sure…not long, but I just want to know if it's a good idea or not. They are on a boat together for seven days and this is just the beginning of the first day. I'll continue the story in three days or so due to vacation. Send reviews so I know you like the idea.
The Waves of Love
By: Belldandy'sKeiichi
Note: [any text in here is a thought text]
Please review so I know that you want to read more. I'm not sure if it's a good story idea or not…
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Prologue
[It all started on Tuesday morning. Naru and I were walking home just from the market when we ran into a couple. I don't know what they saw in us, but they offered two tickets to us…dunno why…but I really doesn't matter…we got tickets to a luxurious cruise line. Thirteen floors, it's own casino, three pools, and it's own theater. This was big time! Maybe I can use this in order to get close with Naru…]
Reality
"Wow…this is great!" Naru exclaimed as she looked out from the front of the ship. Keitaro watches her from a distance. [Naru really is enjoying herself…nice of her to actually go on this boat with someone like me through…. Funny how it cost me a punch to the face and a flying kick to make her agree to go…] Naru turned around. "Hey Keitaro, you did tell everyone that we're on this boat right?" "Don't worry about it Naru, I told them…hehe…" "And what's that suppose to mean?" Naru asked.
Back at the Hinata House
Shinobu peeks in Naru's room and see cardboard cutouts of Keitaro and Naru, badly drawn. "O I'm sorry, didn't know you were studying…." She leaves the room and walks down the hall.
Back at the ship
"Yup! I took care of them, they know where we are." Naru walks back to the front of the boat. "Well at lease they know where we are…we don't want that scene again where they think we are eloping or committing mass suicide…Come on Keitaro! Let's explore the boat! We still have 7 more floors to go to!" They both walked together while singing, "Fancy livin' here we come! LA LA LA LA!" "Don't touch me!" Naru yelled, punching him when Keitaro tripped and used her as support.
"Is this thing on? It is? Holy…um…hi! This is the captain speaking, if you will, meet on dock 3 for emergency procedures. Thank you." Naru and Keitaro looked at each other. "I wonder what is going on?" "Beats me…but we better do what the captain tells us." They got to dock 3 where a lot of people, also are standing. "Now, we will go through safety procedures just incase the boat sinks and…" "Sinks?!?!?" Naru got worried. "Naru, calm down it's just a…" "We have life boats that can only carry 25 people and…" "AHHH! THE BOAT IS SINKING AND ONLY 25 PEOPLE CAN SURVIVE! SAVE THE WOMEN AND CHILDREN!" Naru running around screaming. "N-N-Naru!" Keitaro tried to calm her down. "It's just a safety drill and….AHHH!" Naru just knocked Keitaro right off the rail and into the ocean. "AHHHH! SALTY!!!!!"
"I'm sorry Keitaro…" Naru trying to apologize. "Great….I always wonder what the Sea of Japan taste like…good thing all of us were wearing a life vest and were able to fish me out…literally." Keitaro, wearing a blanket with his head hanging in shame. "This is going to be a long week…" Naru brought him hot chocolate. "You ok? I'm sooooo sorry for the way I acted…" "It's ok Naru…lets just go to our room and see what it looks like ok?" "Ok" They both got up and walked to there room. "Are you sure it's this way Keitaro?" Naru asked. They were walking in long hallways. "I'm pretty sure…5448...5450...5452.…" "What's our number?" "Um, ah…5453..." "YOU IDIOT! WE ARE ON THE EVEN END OF THE HALWAY! WE ARE SUPPOSE TO BE ON THE OTHER SIDE!" Naru yelled at him. They finally got to their room to see two small beds that are put together as one. "So Naru…where are you going to sleep?" "What the hell does that mean! That's my bed! You're sleeping on the floor! "Hey…I'm not sleeping on the floor!" "Well there is no chance I'm letting you sleep with me!" Keitaro looked around to see a compartment. "Hey…look! A pull down bed! Cool! Keitaro jumped into the bed. "Hey, this is comfy…wanna come up here with me? Erk…I didn't mean it like that!" Naru, mad and pissed walked over to the levitating compartment bed and pushed it back into the ceiling. "No…wait! Naru!" Naru calmly turned around and used the telephone. "Hello? Hi, it seems like my friend has gotten himself stuck in the compartment bed and…yeah, I know he's dumb but can you re-open it? Ok, thanks…" She hung up the phone. "What an dumb ass…well Keitaro, I'm going out to explore some more…see you back here at 5..." "Wait Naru!" Keitaro's voice coming from the ceiling. "Help me out!…Hey, a pillow mint…"
End of the Prologue
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Sure…not long, but I just want to know if it's a good idea or not. They are on a boat together for seven days and this is just the beginning of the first day. I'll continue the story in three days or so due to vacation. Send reviews so I know you like the idea.