Love Hina
The Waves of Love
By: Belldandy'sKeiichi
Note: [any text in here is a thought text]
{Time will be mentioned in this bracket}
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Late at night, Naru got up to write in her diary. She observed Keitaro on the suspended bed and Mutsumi on the couch bellow him. Silently, she got out of bed and took down the thing that made Keitaro reach his bed in the first place…the ladder. [Well…nothing to concern now…] She got back to writing. [Time sure has flown by these pass two days…hmm, but yesterday, they kept on talking about a "special day". Now what the hell do they mean? it'll be like any old day…] She finished her entry and signed the date at the bottom. [Like I said…nothing special…it's just December 24...] Naru tucked herself back into her bed and dosed of. [HUH!]
Day 3: That holy day…
Today, the ship was out to sea all day on Christmas Eve, romantic sunsets, the blue sky, and the waves…nowhere better to be in Christmas Eve…
{10:23 am}
TUD! "Ow! Who the hell removed my ladder!" Keitaro, dreamy-eyed, tried to get out of bed and paid the price. Naru slowly arise, "dammit Keitaro, do you have to shout?" Mutsumi, also awake, "O my, what happen?" "My ladder is suddenly gone…" "O, I must have tripped over it when I had to go to the bathroom…now if you excuse me…I'm going to take a bath. DON'T ENTER!" She warned Keitaro. "She's not the friendliest person in the morning, isn't she Keitaro…" "You're telling me…" Mutsumi walked over the Keitaro. "So Keitaro, did you tell her you love her yet?" "What?" Mutsumi got closer to him. "Come on, you know, profess your love for her." Keitaro started blushing. "Well…um…a…wait, it's non of your business!" She backed away a little. "I know it's not…but you know what today is right?" "Um…yeah, Christmas Eve right?" "That's right…and what better night to tell her! And you're on a cruise also! It can't get any better than this. Of course you got her a present right?" "Um…yeah! Of course!" he lied. He has absolutely nothing to give to her. "Well…what's there to worry about?" Keitaro got worried. "But what happens…o why am I telling you all this…I-I need to go!" Keitaro left the room and brought his jacket with him. "O my…"
[Mutsumi is right though…] Keitaro, leaning against the safety rail on the front of the ship. [Today is Christmas Eve, a very special day…but I have nothing to give her…nor have the gust to tell her that I like her…O man, what am I going to do…] On the opposite end of the boat, Naru was thinking as well. [Today is Christmas Eve…*sigh* Christmas Eve, I tend not to be cheery or jolly during this type of holiday…Never the less, I don't have anything to get to that dork…] "Naru?" Naru jolted back to see Mutsumi behind her. "M-Mutsumi! What are you doing here?" "O nothing, I'm still exploring the boat…brought me to this place…" "O…" Naru turned back at the sea. "What's wrong Naru?" "It's nothing…" Mutsumi stood right next to her. "Come on tell me…" "er…Ihavenothingtogivethatdorkandit'sChristmasEveandiknowit'ssupposetobea"specialday"butireallywantKeitarotobehappyonthisdayand…" "Naru! Calm down! Just breathe why don't you…" Naru took deep breaths. "With all that mumbling and yelling, I happen to catch you say, `I really want Keitaro to be happy'?" "What!" Naru was backing away. [O know! I didn't think she would catch any of that!] "So…I am right, you have feelings for him…" "N-N-No! that's not true! He's a dork and a pervert and a mixed between a monkey and a ape beaten with an ugly stick!" "Wow…" Mutsumi was amazed. "That's about the longs thing you ever said about him." "That's because it's true…" "Well…" Mutsumi leaving. "If you want Keitaro to be happy this year…I'm sure that you can wing it somehow…" She left and made Naru think to herself even more.
Keitaro walks thorough the café and sits down, [man, I really need to gather some cash and buy Naru something…but what…] Just then, he sees Naru passing by. "Hey! Naru!" Naru just walked passed him, without even saying a word. "Huh? Hey Naru! …I guess she didn't hear me…" He got up and followed her. "Hey Naru…over here!" She began to walk faster. "Wait! Naru!" She kept on running until she lost him in the elevator. Keitaro just stood in front of the elevator door. [Naru…what's the matter…]
{1:34 pm}
Keitaro and Mutsumi were sitting next to each other on the deck. "Odd how Naru didn't show up for lunch huh Keitaro." Mutsumi turned her head but Keitaro was just staring out to the ocean. "Is something the matter." "O…it's nothing…never mind." He got up and walked down the stairs. "Where are you going Keitaro?" Mutsumi called. "I'm going back to the room…don't worry about me." Keitaro was out of view. "O Keitaro…but I am…" Keitaro went back to the room and saw a blank piece of paper and a pen. [Hmm…that's it!]
{2:02}
Naru just came back from the spa (yeah…there's a spa). "Ah…nothing like a refreshing bath! Huh?" Naru see a note from Keitaro. [O boy…this could be the booby trap…]
Dear Naru,
At 11 o' clock pm…meet me on deck 10...I have something to tell you.
~Keitaro
[What does Keitaro want????] Naru asked herself…[Could it be that…no…it can't be…can it?] Naru was looking at the note with two sides of emotions: love and fear. [What can that boy be thinking…]
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"Naru…there is something I want to tell you…" Keitaro started. Naru, backing away from him a little. "I-I-I LOVE YOU NARU!" "Waaa!" Keitaro rushed over to her and hugged her. "I can't hold it any longer…I always loved you Naru! Ever since we just met!" "K-K-Keitaro!?" "Naru…Naru…Naru…." "Huh?" Naru was looking around. "NARU!" Naru snapped out of her daydream. [O god, that vision is poison to me!] "Hey Mutsumi! What's up!" "You were smiling about something? What was it?" Naru started panicing. "It's nothing! Really! I'm serious!" "O my Naru, calm down…Huh? What's that note you have?" "Er…it's nothing important!" Naru got up and walked out. "I'll see you later Mutsumi!" "Boy…everyone is acting weird today…"
{3:43}
Keitaro, searching around the ship. "Man, if it has 13 stories, they should have at lease some type of a mall here or something!" He then find it, a whole hallway filled with stores and cloth shop. "Hey! I hit the jackpot!…But what am I going to get her.
"O my god! What am I going to get that idiot! What does he like?" Naru fell silent. "Ha! Tough chance he'll ever get that! Grr…what am I going to do! There is nothing here that Keitaro would be interested in! "Naru!" "EEEEKKK!" Mutsumi again appears in back of her. "A-A-Are you just stalking me today Mutsumi?!" "Why…yes…yes I am!" Naru falls. "Well can you please stop! It's really scaring me…" "Ok!" Mutsumi starts walking away. "O hi Keitaro!" Mutsumi called. [Huh? Keitaro!] Naru quickly ran up the stairs to the higher floors but low enough to listen to them. "So Keitaro, what are you going to give Naru for Christmas?" "Umm,. It's nothing Mutsumi…It's just." Keitaro shows Mutsumi what he got for Naru. Naru is lying down, seeing what Keitaro got for her and trying to stay stealthy. "That's really pretty!" Mutsumi complemented. "Yeah, here!' Keitaro pulled another gift from the bag. "Here's yours!" "Wow! Thank you Keitaro!" Mutsumi plants a kiss on Keitaro's face. Keitaro's face turns red. "That's your present from me to you…" [Grrr….] Naru getting mad. "Ahhh, I-I have to go now…you know…um..to the elevator! Yeah!" Keitaro runs right into the wall. "Ow…" He got into the elevator and left. Mutsumi opened her present. "O me, o my! A watermelon! How did he know…" "Heh…I guess that it isn't that hard to please Mutsumi…" Naru said to herself. "Enough of that…gotta find him a present…"
{7:30}
"That's odd…Keitaro wasn't there for dinner…" Naru said. "Yes, I find that really odd…you don't think that he fell over board…do you?" "I hope not…" [After all…I did find him one thing that we might like…]
The reason that Keitaro wasn't at dinner is because…
"Dammit! This isn't a good time to be stuck in a ELEVATOR!!!!!!" Keitaro, with his luck, was stuck in the elevator for quite some time now…ever since he left Mutsumi. "O man…I hope those people fix the elevator soon…so I can get this present to Naru…" He ran over to the emergency telephone. "Hello! Hello!" "Um…hello?" "yeah I'm still stuck!" "You are? Well I though by now you would have escape…well, our men are going to fix it now…get the monkey wrench…no that's my leg!" Keitaro let go of the receiver and let it drop. "I'm going to be here for awhile…"
{10:59}
"Dammit! Dammit! Dammit! I'm freakin hungry and thirsty! And I'm still in this damn elevator!" Slowly…the doors were opening and then a figure appeared in the light. "What! No! It-it can't be!!!! What the hell are you doing here! Er…never mind that! I have to get to deck 10!" He pushed the man over and quickly jotted up the stairs.
[I can't believe I'm late!] Naru rushing to deck 10 as well. As she got to the top, she see a lot of couples hugging each other and snuggling. "O please…I need to find Keitaro!" She ran through the crowds of people while holing Keitaro's present as close to her as possible. But then, someone rammed into her, making her launch her present overboard. "NOOO! KEITARO'S PRESENT!" Naru yelled as she tries to catch it. At that moment…tears starts streaming down her checks. "Naru?" Her head went down lower. Keitaro just arrived and was right behind her. "Hey Naru! Merry…huh?" Keitaro sees her on her knees while her head is down. "W-What's wrong?" "O Keitaro… Don't look at me…" Keitaro walked around to get a better look. "Naru…your crying…but…" "Keitaro…I wanted this Christmas Eve special…but your…" Keitaro hugged her. "Don't worry about it…you being here is what I really wanted for Christmas, whenever I'm here with you, you make things around her fun…" "Wow…I guess I'm lucky since your gift was knocked overboard… "What?" "O nothing! Nothing…" At a distance… "O my…looks like they are going to me more closer with each other for now on…" "Here Naru," Keitaro hands Naru a long rectangular box. She opened it to see a necklace that has a diamond in the middle. "O my! But Keitaro! I can't accept anything like this! I must have cost a fortune!" "Don't worry about it Naru…just don't worry…" They hugged each other for a long time…and his hands slipped and touched her butt. "Grrr….Not even on Christmas Eve!" Naru screamed and punched him to the other side of the boat. "O my…" Mutsumi watched. "I-I guess they aren't going to get much closer…" "Um…excuse me young lady… "Huh? O me, o my!" "Um…hi! Haven't we met before?" "What are you doing here Seta?"
End of day 3
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I will accept any ideas that you want to contribute.
Preview of day 4: Christmas Day
"*sigh* Another day at sea…and nothing to do but say on the ship…I never though it would get bored in a cruise line…" Keitaro, sitting on the bed, watching T.V. Just then the door knocked. "They Keitaro, get the door please…" Naru told him. Keitaro walked over to the door and opened it. "Sorry but we don't want any…Seta?!"
The Waves of Love
By: Belldandy'sKeiichi
Note: [any text in here is a thought text]
{Time will be mentioned in this bracket}
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Late at night, Naru got up to write in her diary. She observed Keitaro on the suspended bed and Mutsumi on the couch bellow him. Silently, she got out of bed and took down the thing that made Keitaro reach his bed in the first place…the ladder. [Well…nothing to concern now…] She got back to writing. [Time sure has flown by these pass two days…hmm, but yesterday, they kept on talking about a "special day". Now what the hell do they mean? it'll be like any old day…] She finished her entry and signed the date at the bottom. [Like I said…nothing special…it's just December 24...] Naru tucked herself back into her bed and dosed of. [HUH!]
Day 3: That holy day…
Today, the ship was out to sea all day on Christmas Eve, romantic sunsets, the blue sky, and the waves…nowhere better to be in Christmas Eve…
{10:23 am}
TUD! "Ow! Who the hell removed my ladder!" Keitaro, dreamy-eyed, tried to get out of bed and paid the price. Naru slowly arise, "dammit Keitaro, do you have to shout?" Mutsumi, also awake, "O my, what happen?" "My ladder is suddenly gone…" "O, I must have tripped over it when I had to go to the bathroom…now if you excuse me…I'm going to take a bath. DON'T ENTER!" She warned Keitaro. "She's not the friendliest person in the morning, isn't she Keitaro…" "You're telling me…" Mutsumi walked over the Keitaro. "So Keitaro, did you tell her you love her yet?" "What?" Mutsumi got closer to him. "Come on, you know, profess your love for her." Keitaro started blushing. "Well…um…a…wait, it's non of your business!" She backed away a little. "I know it's not…but you know what today is right?" "Um…yeah, Christmas Eve right?" "That's right…and what better night to tell her! And you're on a cruise also! It can't get any better than this. Of course you got her a present right?" "Um…yeah! Of course!" he lied. He has absolutely nothing to give to her. "Well…what's there to worry about?" Keitaro got worried. "But what happens…o why am I telling you all this…I-I need to go!" Keitaro left the room and brought his jacket with him. "O my…"
[Mutsumi is right though…] Keitaro, leaning against the safety rail on the front of the ship. [Today is Christmas Eve, a very special day…but I have nothing to give her…nor have the gust to tell her that I like her…O man, what am I going to do…] On the opposite end of the boat, Naru was thinking as well. [Today is Christmas Eve…*sigh* Christmas Eve, I tend not to be cheery or jolly during this type of holiday…Never the less, I don't have anything to get to that dork…] "Naru?" Naru jolted back to see Mutsumi behind her. "M-Mutsumi! What are you doing here?" "O nothing, I'm still exploring the boat…brought me to this place…" "O…" Naru turned back at the sea. "What's wrong Naru?" "It's nothing…" Mutsumi stood right next to her. "Come on tell me…" "er…Ihavenothingtogivethatdorkandit'sChristmasEveandiknowit'ssupposetobea"specialday"butireallywantKeitarotobehappyonthisdayand…" "Naru! Calm down! Just breathe why don't you…" Naru took deep breaths. "With all that mumbling and yelling, I happen to catch you say, `I really want Keitaro to be happy'?" "What!" Naru was backing away. [O know! I didn't think she would catch any of that!] "So…I am right, you have feelings for him…" "N-N-No! that's not true! He's a dork and a pervert and a mixed between a monkey and a ape beaten with an ugly stick!" "Wow…" Mutsumi was amazed. "That's about the longs thing you ever said about him." "That's because it's true…" "Well…" Mutsumi leaving. "If you want Keitaro to be happy this year…I'm sure that you can wing it somehow…" She left and made Naru think to herself even more.
Keitaro walks thorough the café and sits down, [man, I really need to gather some cash and buy Naru something…but what…] Just then, he sees Naru passing by. "Hey! Naru!" Naru just walked passed him, without even saying a word. "Huh? Hey Naru! …I guess she didn't hear me…" He got up and followed her. "Hey Naru…over here!" She began to walk faster. "Wait! Naru!" She kept on running until she lost him in the elevator. Keitaro just stood in front of the elevator door. [Naru…what's the matter…]
{1:34 pm}
Keitaro and Mutsumi were sitting next to each other on the deck. "Odd how Naru didn't show up for lunch huh Keitaro." Mutsumi turned her head but Keitaro was just staring out to the ocean. "Is something the matter." "O…it's nothing…never mind." He got up and walked down the stairs. "Where are you going Keitaro?" Mutsumi called. "I'm going back to the room…don't worry about me." Keitaro was out of view. "O Keitaro…but I am…" Keitaro went back to the room and saw a blank piece of paper and a pen. [Hmm…that's it!]
{2:02}
Naru just came back from the spa (yeah…there's a spa). "Ah…nothing like a refreshing bath! Huh?" Naru see a note from Keitaro. [O boy…this could be the booby trap…]
Dear Naru,
At 11 o' clock pm…meet me on deck 10...I have something to tell you.
~Keitaro
[What does Keitaro want????] Naru asked herself…[Could it be that…no…it can't be…can it?] Naru was looking at the note with two sides of emotions: love and fear. [What can that boy be thinking…]
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"Naru…there is something I want to tell you…" Keitaro started. Naru, backing away from him a little. "I-I-I LOVE YOU NARU!" "Waaa!" Keitaro rushed over to her and hugged her. "I can't hold it any longer…I always loved you Naru! Ever since we just met!" "K-K-Keitaro!?" "Naru…Naru…Naru…." "Huh?" Naru was looking around. "NARU!" Naru snapped out of her daydream. [O god, that vision is poison to me!] "Hey Mutsumi! What's up!" "You were smiling about something? What was it?" Naru started panicing. "It's nothing! Really! I'm serious!" "O my Naru, calm down…Huh? What's that note you have?" "Er…it's nothing important!" Naru got up and walked out. "I'll see you later Mutsumi!" "Boy…everyone is acting weird today…"
{3:43}
Keitaro, searching around the ship. "Man, if it has 13 stories, they should have at lease some type of a mall here or something!" He then find it, a whole hallway filled with stores and cloth shop. "Hey! I hit the jackpot!…But what am I going to get her.
"O my god! What am I going to get that idiot! What does he like?" Naru fell silent. "Ha! Tough chance he'll ever get that! Grr…what am I going to do! There is nothing here that Keitaro would be interested in! "Naru!" "EEEEKKK!" Mutsumi again appears in back of her. "A-A-Are you just stalking me today Mutsumi?!" "Why…yes…yes I am!" Naru falls. "Well can you please stop! It's really scaring me…" "Ok!" Mutsumi starts walking away. "O hi Keitaro!" Mutsumi called. [Huh? Keitaro!] Naru quickly ran up the stairs to the higher floors but low enough to listen to them. "So Keitaro, what are you going to give Naru for Christmas?" "Umm,. It's nothing Mutsumi…It's just." Keitaro shows Mutsumi what he got for Naru. Naru is lying down, seeing what Keitaro got for her and trying to stay stealthy. "That's really pretty!" Mutsumi complemented. "Yeah, here!' Keitaro pulled another gift from the bag. "Here's yours!" "Wow! Thank you Keitaro!" Mutsumi plants a kiss on Keitaro's face. Keitaro's face turns red. "That's your present from me to you…" [Grrr….] Naru getting mad. "Ahhh, I-I have to go now…you know…um..to the elevator! Yeah!" Keitaro runs right into the wall. "Ow…" He got into the elevator and left. Mutsumi opened her present. "O me, o my! A watermelon! How did he know…" "Heh…I guess that it isn't that hard to please Mutsumi…" Naru said to herself. "Enough of that…gotta find him a present…"
{7:30}
"That's odd…Keitaro wasn't there for dinner…" Naru said. "Yes, I find that really odd…you don't think that he fell over board…do you?" "I hope not…" [After all…I did find him one thing that we might like…]
The reason that Keitaro wasn't at dinner is because…
"Dammit! This isn't a good time to be stuck in a ELEVATOR!!!!!!" Keitaro, with his luck, was stuck in the elevator for quite some time now…ever since he left Mutsumi. "O man…I hope those people fix the elevator soon…so I can get this present to Naru…" He ran over to the emergency telephone. "Hello! Hello!" "Um…hello?" "yeah I'm still stuck!" "You are? Well I though by now you would have escape…well, our men are going to fix it now…get the monkey wrench…no that's my leg!" Keitaro let go of the receiver and let it drop. "I'm going to be here for awhile…"
{10:59}
"Dammit! Dammit! Dammit! I'm freakin hungry and thirsty! And I'm still in this damn elevator!" Slowly…the doors were opening and then a figure appeared in the light. "What! No! It-it can't be!!!! What the hell are you doing here! Er…never mind that! I have to get to deck 10!" He pushed the man over and quickly jotted up the stairs.
[I can't believe I'm late!] Naru rushing to deck 10 as well. As she got to the top, she see a lot of couples hugging each other and snuggling. "O please…I need to find Keitaro!" She ran through the crowds of people while holing Keitaro's present as close to her as possible. But then, someone rammed into her, making her launch her present overboard. "NOOO! KEITARO'S PRESENT!" Naru yelled as she tries to catch it. At that moment…tears starts streaming down her checks. "Naru?" Her head went down lower. Keitaro just arrived and was right behind her. "Hey Naru! Merry…huh?" Keitaro sees her on her knees while her head is down. "W-What's wrong?" "O Keitaro… Don't look at me…" Keitaro walked around to get a better look. "Naru…your crying…but…" "Keitaro…I wanted this Christmas Eve special…but your…" Keitaro hugged her. "Don't worry about it…you being here is what I really wanted for Christmas, whenever I'm here with you, you make things around her fun…" "Wow…I guess I'm lucky since your gift was knocked overboard… "What?" "O nothing! Nothing…" At a distance… "O my…looks like they are going to me more closer with each other for now on…" "Here Naru," Keitaro hands Naru a long rectangular box. She opened it to see a necklace that has a diamond in the middle. "O my! But Keitaro! I can't accept anything like this! I must have cost a fortune!" "Don't worry about it Naru…just don't worry…" They hugged each other for a long time…and his hands slipped and touched her butt. "Grrr….Not even on Christmas Eve!" Naru screamed and punched him to the other side of the boat. "O my…" Mutsumi watched. "I-I guess they aren't going to get much closer…" "Um…excuse me young lady… "Huh? O me, o my!" "Um…hi! Haven't we met before?" "What are you doing here Seta?"
End of day 3
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I will accept any ideas that you want to contribute.
Preview of day 4: Christmas Day
"*sigh* Another day at sea…and nothing to do but say on the ship…I never though it would get bored in a cruise line…" Keitaro, sitting on the bed, watching T.V. Just then the door knocked. "They Keitaro, get the door please…" Naru told him. Keitaro walked over to the door and opened it. "Sorry but we don't want any…Seta?!"