Authors Note: Sorry its been so long guys but my mom got a computer from
her friend and then moved the old one in my room so I have one in my room.
The only problem: I don't have aol in here (grrr) so I can write but my
mom has to switch the cords around before I can send in the story. Then
I was really busy watching the 54th Annual Emmy Awards on NBC(so I couldn't post
it yesterday). Anyway Thanks for reading and reviewing, Can ya do it again now?
Thoughts are in ` `
12/1/02- Re-edited
Disclaimer: I think not!
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Chapter 3: :Cabin:
As soon as the three reached the door a small brown haired girl stuck
her head out.
"Tinga, look who I found." Zane said looking to his left where Max and
Zack stood, waiting to be let in.
"Zane!" She yelled pushing him out of the way to let the two freezing
X5's come it. "Syl found a blanket, its over there." Tinga pointed to a
blanket stretched over several of the others.
Max scanned the room and slightly smiled.
"What?" Zack asked.
"There are more then six." Max said looking upon each face.
"Oh yeah, at first there were only six that made it out, then the ones
who were caught again, they escaped a second time,most of them at least,
and then some that were lost met up and then there were way more then six!"
Tinga said happily, right now nobody wanted to think about all of thoughs
who were lost or never made it out, like Eva and Jack.
"Make room, we found Max and Zack!" Zane said happily putting himself
under the blanket comfortably. Max and Zack sat themselves next to Ben
and Jondy and could already feel the body heat and blanket warmth
warming them up.
That night, well... morning, nobody had any after thoughts yet of the big
escape because they all slept like rocks. They dreamed vivid dreams of
what the outside world was like and what they hoped it was like and they
slept all day the next day many of them had used their enhance healing
speed to heal themselves while others slept. The ones in the worst shape
were already healing fast too. Max's body heat had returned, though she
had a runny nose, and Zack rested, he still had several broken bones,
cracked or bruised.
~~~
Max sat in the window beside Jondy, both silent taking in what happened.
"So how do you feel?" Jondy asked looking to her sister.
"I don't know. You know that feeling you get when you dream and the
guards and instructors and everyone else can't get in your way?" Max
asked, she smiled lightly.
"Yes."
"Thats how I feel." Max said looking back at her brothers and sisters
sprawled out around the cabin.
"Me too."
"So what are you two talking about?" Raven asked coming up from behind
them.
"Nothing in particular. I heard you coughing yesterday, you feel better?"
Max asked looking back out of the window.
"Oh yeah, I'm fine now, just had a little cold. Hey Jondy are you busy?"
Raven asked looking to Jondy.
"No, why?" She asked rubbing her hands together for warmth.
" Oh, just wondering if you two are busy because me, Lana and Cin just
started a game but each part says a different part of a story and we
take turns to form a whole one. Ben taught us, its fun."
"Ok, Be right there. Are you coming Max?" Jondy asked but Max was still
looking at the sky.
"No, I need time to think." The girls walked away but Max sat silently
in the window in deep thought.
`I wonder what's going to happen next? Hope tomorrow we're moving out,
I'm starting to get hungry.`
She paused and looked down to Zack who was surrounded by others sleeping
soundly. Then back to the white sky. It was beautiful, with shades of
blue and moon had arrived early.
`I wish I could fly. Zack would say that was silly if he heard that, I
know he would like to fly too though. That way we can all be higher than
the enemy and fly far away from here.`
Suddenly Max had an idea. She mischievously looked to her sleeping
brothers and sisters, then to Lana, Cin, Raven and Jondy who where
playing in the corner.
Quietly with out notice she slipped outside and looked around.
`Hmmm, lets see ....`
Authors Note: Review, It keeps me going!
Please forgive any grammar or spelling mistakes, I went over it alot
but you know, sometimes pass right by ya and you never notice.
Since this chapter is short and doesn't have any action or fancy whatever
I'll write another one day in 2 days and put it on there, so people will
have time to review this chapter. Thanks.
her friend and then moved the old one in my room so I have one in my room.
The only problem: I don't have aol in here (grrr) so I can write but my
mom has to switch the cords around before I can send in the story. Then
I was really busy watching the 54th Annual Emmy Awards on NBC(so I couldn't post
it yesterday). Anyway Thanks for reading and reviewing, Can ya do it again now?
Thoughts are in ` `
12/1/02- Re-edited
Disclaimer: I think not!
~~~~~~~~~~~~
Chapter 3: :Cabin:
As soon as the three reached the door a small brown haired girl stuck
her head out.
"Tinga, look who I found." Zane said looking to his left where Max and
Zack stood, waiting to be let in.
"Zane!" She yelled pushing him out of the way to let the two freezing
X5's come it. "Syl found a blanket, its over there." Tinga pointed to a
blanket stretched over several of the others.
Max scanned the room and slightly smiled.
"What?" Zack asked.
"There are more then six." Max said looking upon each face.
"Oh yeah, at first there were only six that made it out, then the ones
who were caught again, they escaped a second time,most of them at least,
and then some that were lost met up and then there were way more then six!"
Tinga said happily, right now nobody wanted to think about all of thoughs
who were lost or never made it out, like Eva and Jack.
"Make room, we found Max and Zack!" Zane said happily putting himself
under the blanket comfortably. Max and Zack sat themselves next to Ben
and Jondy and could already feel the body heat and blanket warmth
warming them up.
That night, well... morning, nobody had any after thoughts yet of the big
escape because they all slept like rocks. They dreamed vivid dreams of
what the outside world was like and what they hoped it was like and they
slept all day the next day many of them had used their enhance healing
speed to heal themselves while others slept. The ones in the worst shape
were already healing fast too. Max's body heat had returned, though she
had a runny nose, and Zack rested, he still had several broken bones,
cracked or bruised.
~~~
Max sat in the window beside Jondy, both silent taking in what happened.
"So how do you feel?" Jondy asked looking to her sister.
"I don't know. You know that feeling you get when you dream and the
guards and instructors and everyone else can't get in your way?" Max
asked, she smiled lightly.
"Yes."
"Thats how I feel." Max said looking back at her brothers and sisters
sprawled out around the cabin.
"Me too."
"So what are you two talking about?" Raven asked coming up from behind
them.
"Nothing in particular. I heard you coughing yesterday, you feel better?"
Max asked looking back out of the window.
"Oh yeah, I'm fine now, just had a little cold. Hey Jondy are you busy?"
Raven asked looking to Jondy.
"No, why?" She asked rubbing her hands together for warmth.
" Oh, just wondering if you two are busy because me, Lana and Cin just
started a game but each part says a different part of a story and we
take turns to form a whole one. Ben taught us, its fun."
"Ok, Be right there. Are you coming Max?" Jondy asked but Max was still
looking at the sky.
"No, I need time to think." The girls walked away but Max sat silently
in the window in deep thought.
`I wonder what's going to happen next? Hope tomorrow we're moving out,
I'm starting to get hungry.`
She paused and looked down to Zack who was surrounded by others sleeping
soundly. Then back to the white sky. It was beautiful, with shades of
blue and moon had arrived early.
`I wish I could fly. Zack would say that was silly if he heard that, I
know he would like to fly too though. That way we can all be higher than
the enemy and fly far away from here.`
Suddenly Max had an idea. She mischievously looked to her sleeping
brothers and sisters, then to Lana, Cin, Raven and Jondy who where
playing in the corner.
Quietly with out notice she slipped outside and looked around.
`Hmmm, lets see ....`
Authors Note: Review, It keeps me going!
Please forgive any grammar or spelling mistakes, I went over it alot
but you know, sometimes pass right by ya and you never notice.
Since this chapter is short and doesn't have any action or fancy whatever
I'll write another one day in 2 days and put it on there, so people will
have time to review this chapter. Thanks.