Well this is my first fanfic so please tell me the truly truth. I'm not a
native speaker so any grammar or spelling mistake please tell me , and I
don't know if this would be what you call a Mary-Sue (actually because I
don't have the certainty of what that means anyway if someone could
explain.) Well, know to the story .
Intro This is the story of a girl named Edhelwen she really doesn't know how her past was , she grew at the Shire until she was 10. There she lived with her mom and dad (by the way her mom was a kind of hobbit but was a bit taller and her dad was an elf). In the Shire she lived happily with her friends Frodo, Pippin, Merry and sometimes Sam (but he thought she had something wrong because no hobbit would talk to her family only does guys who were friendly with almost everyone). She moved from there because her mother was killed by a shadow and short after her dad took her to Rivendell when her grandpa lived (Elrond) , but, after a few years later her dad died of an infinite sadness because Lily didn't lived anymore , years passed an there's where our story begins.
One morning Edhelwen was in her room in Rivendell thinking about the Shire her friends and all that she have been missing when Legolas entered
"I have seen you thinking a lot in what were you thinking?, in fact I have a surprise for you" ,
"It doesn't matter Legolas is nonsense I was just thinking about my happy childhood days",
"and don't you want to know the surprise?"
"I don't think it would make my life happier but, come on tell me"
"Well, your biggest dream will come true"
"Frodo is coming?,"
"yeah indeed "
"! Don't believe it, but why are they here ?,, you know I used to think of Frodo as my childhood love"
It didn't fell quite fine for him because he founded her so lovely and sometimes felt he loved her.
"Well it's a very big story, one day you'll know, they are here for the council"
She just kept thinking when she heard some voices of the halflings coming
"it must be Frodo" she thought, so she ran and saw that it was true she was breathless Frodo had become a cute hobbit , she started shouting "Frodo, Frodo" he stared at her and saw that it was Edhelwen the girl he haven't seen in almost 20 years . They started telling their stories of 20 years it wasn't much for an elf but it felled like eternity . When they catched up , he finally told her why he was there in Rivendell ,
"You know Edhelwen Bilbo had a ring and know it's mine, I have to take it to Mordor and destroy it "
"You have the one ring?"
"yeah I guess so"
"I'll go with you if you ask me , I couldn't live thinking I have just lose you for the rest of my life"
He felt a little shocked she was actually telling him that she felt something for him?, he have always thought of her as his love of his life.
"So, answer me Frodo, I don't mind if the quest claims my life"
"Ask Elrond or Gandalf I can't decide"
Arwen came and interrupted them "hey it's dinner time ", So they went.
Intro This is the story of a girl named Edhelwen she really doesn't know how her past was , she grew at the Shire until she was 10. There she lived with her mom and dad (by the way her mom was a kind of hobbit but was a bit taller and her dad was an elf). In the Shire she lived happily with her friends Frodo, Pippin, Merry and sometimes Sam (but he thought she had something wrong because no hobbit would talk to her family only does guys who were friendly with almost everyone). She moved from there because her mother was killed by a shadow and short after her dad took her to Rivendell when her grandpa lived (Elrond) , but, after a few years later her dad died of an infinite sadness because Lily didn't lived anymore , years passed an there's where our story begins.
One morning Edhelwen was in her room in Rivendell thinking about the Shire her friends and all that she have been missing when Legolas entered
"I have seen you thinking a lot in what were you thinking?, in fact I have a surprise for you" ,
"It doesn't matter Legolas is nonsense I was just thinking about my happy childhood days",
"and don't you want to know the surprise?"
"I don't think it would make my life happier but, come on tell me"
"Well, your biggest dream will come true"
"Frodo is coming?,"
"yeah indeed "
"! Don't believe it, but why are they here ?,, you know I used to think of Frodo as my childhood love"
It didn't fell quite fine for him because he founded her so lovely and sometimes felt he loved her.
"Well it's a very big story, one day you'll know, they are here for the council"
She just kept thinking when she heard some voices of the halflings coming
"it must be Frodo" she thought, so she ran and saw that it was true she was breathless Frodo had become a cute hobbit , she started shouting "Frodo, Frodo" he stared at her and saw that it was Edhelwen the girl he haven't seen in almost 20 years . They started telling their stories of 20 years it wasn't much for an elf but it felled like eternity . When they catched up , he finally told her why he was there in Rivendell ,
"You know Edhelwen Bilbo had a ring and know it's mine, I have to take it to Mordor and destroy it "
"You have the one ring?"
"yeah I guess so"
"I'll go with you if you ask me , I couldn't live thinking I have just lose you for the rest of my life"
He felt a little shocked she was actually telling him that she felt something for him?, he have always thought of her as his love of his life.
"So, answer me Frodo, I don't mind if the quest claims my life"
"Ask Elrond or Gandalf I can't decide"
Arwen came and interrupted them "hey it's dinner time ", So they went.