This is the new, more organised version of The Goddess carried on.
1.1 Chapter 1
A man crouched over a fire, coaxing out a flame. The wood was wet but he didn't dare use his Gift in case someone recognised who he really was. He had run away from his home at the age of eight and he was now twenty, going by the name of Sir Peter of King's Cove. He was still always on the lookout. He heard a twig snap and spun around. A tall woman with shining purple eyes was watching him. She was holding the reins of a gleaming white horse with a red tail and main and, like his owner, purple eyes.
" How nice it is to meet you at last, Prince Jonathan the fifth," she said, her eyes sparkling with amusement.
" You must be mistaken," replied Jonathan, his eyes full of amazement, " I'm not a prince!"
"I'm not mistaken. I knew who you really were when I named you my heir to Kings Cove. I must say, it's nice to have finally met you."
"You named me your heir?"
"Of course I did, though I was only nine when I did and studying in Carthak for my black robe. It's quite lucky you came along because I really did need someone to take care of the cove, I was never quite good at keeping house."
"I'm not quite sure I understand."
"I didn't think you would. Sit down and I'll explain." She gestured towards the floor by the fire and sat down.
"Don't interrupt till I've finished, alright"
He nodded.
"My name is Master Sir Elizabeth of Kings Cove and Pirates Swoop. Alanna and George adopted me when I was six but I left them at the age of eight to train to be a Master in the City of the Gods. After six months I passed my ordeal of Mastery and became the youngest ever Master. As you can tell, my grip on my magical powers is much stronger than other peoples. This is how, even though I was so young, I became the Duchess of Kings Cove. I then went to study in Carthak. After a year I got my black robe and returned to Tortall where I started my training as a knight at the age of ten. After four years as a page your father gave me permission to take my Ordeal of Knighthood. Even in my first year I had been better at all my subjects than my teachers. After my Ordeal I used my gift to put a type of memory spell over the whole world, I did not wish to be noticed. I've been wandering ever since." She stopped and looked over at the open mouthed Jon.
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1.1 Chapter 1
A man crouched over a fire, coaxing out a flame. The wood was wet but he didn't dare use his Gift in case someone recognised who he really was. He had run away from his home at the age of eight and he was now twenty, going by the name of Sir Peter of King's Cove. He was still always on the lookout. He heard a twig snap and spun around. A tall woman with shining purple eyes was watching him. She was holding the reins of a gleaming white horse with a red tail and main and, like his owner, purple eyes.
" How nice it is to meet you at last, Prince Jonathan the fifth," she said, her eyes sparkling with amusement.
" You must be mistaken," replied Jonathan, his eyes full of amazement, " I'm not a prince!"
"I'm not mistaken. I knew who you really were when I named you my heir to Kings Cove. I must say, it's nice to have finally met you."
"You named me your heir?"
"Of course I did, though I was only nine when I did and studying in Carthak for my black robe. It's quite lucky you came along because I really did need someone to take care of the cove, I was never quite good at keeping house."
"I'm not quite sure I understand."
"I didn't think you would. Sit down and I'll explain." She gestured towards the floor by the fire and sat down.
"Don't interrupt till I've finished, alright"
He nodded.
"My name is Master Sir Elizabeth of Kings Cove and Pirates Swoop. Alanna and George adopted me when I was six but I left them at the age of eight to train to be a Master in the City of the Gods. After six months I passed my ordeal of Mastery and became the youngest ever Master. As you can tell, my grip on my magical powers is much stronger than other peoples. This is how, even though I was so young, I became the Duchess of Kings Cove. I then went to study in Carthak. After a year I got my black robe and returned to Tortall where I started my training as a knight at the age of ten. After four years as a page your father gave me permission to take my Ordeal of Knighthood. Even in my first year I had been better at all my subjects than my teachers. After my Ordeal I used my gift to put a type of memory spell over the whole world, I did not wish to be noticed. I've been wandering ever since." She stopped and looked over at the open mouthed Jon.
You like it. Read the next chapter if you do.