I got good reviews, so here's the second chapter. I 'm going for three chapters now. The next one will hopefully be the final one.
As always if you like R/R!
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SO unprepared. So, okay, me and Jackie, we get into her car, a Lincoln Continental, leather. A pretty nice ride. She gave me the keys and told me to drive it, 'cause she knew I liked driving that car since the day I took her out of pity to prom. Anyways, we both get in, and, I just had to do it, I revved the engine and you know, I felt the whole car kinda like trembling under me. Man, that's a great feeling. It was like the car was alive man! So yeah, after I revved it, I turned around, and I grinned, actually grinned to Jackie. Man, I must be getting soft in my young age. And the hot-as-hell-flames vixen looked at me and smiled.
"Oh Steven, our first date!"
The five words she said totally killed the car-revving joy I was in. I looked at her, and noticed how hot she was. I know I said this already, but she is hot! No wonder Kelso always wanted to get in her pants, or skirt on this occasion. Kelso, what an idiot. He had this totally hot chick in his hands, and what did he do? He went and slept with the devil man. I mean, yeah, ok, Laurie's hot too, if you like such cheap sluts, which, you know can suit me fine for a night or two, but she was born with a tail man! I wouldn't sleep with that man, ever! Except if I'm too drunk to realize or too high to care. But anyway, back to Jackie. You know, Jackie's the kind of chick you would be happy just holding in your arms at night. Especially since she would stop talking. 'Cause you know, all that talk about shampoos and conditioners really annoy me. But you know, I looked well at her hair while I was in the car, and it's so shiny! Man, I was itching to touch it to make sure it was as soft as I imagined it. Man, all those thoughts were in my head in like a second. Then, you know, I kinda cursed myself for being such a wuss. The chick definitely has some weird power over me. I cursed at myself, and I kinda woke up back to reality. Man, I was daydreaming!
Jackie was still looking at me man, and she asked me:
"Where are we going Steven? This has to be special."
Man, she was already starting to get on my nerves. I thought of a cool place we could hang out at, and I just told her:
"Jackie how about we just grab a soda, and then we go to the "Point"? It's cool, we can just hang there a while."
I saw disappointment cross Jackie's face. What did she expect? A freakin' Opera? Her Zen side, the side I had brought out in her, kinda kicked out and she replied it was cool. I smiled. She was definitely coming along nicely. But you know, I'd never tell her that to her face. She'd start blabbering again.
I drove up to Fatso Burger, and the guy, his name's Ricky, you know the guy that interviewed us when we wanted to get jobs in that place, he opened the drive through window and looked at me like I was gonna point a gun to his head and blow his brains out. I looked at him and smiled. He just looked back at me, afraid. Then, Jackie had to do it, she leaned over me and poked her head out. She ruined my fun man!
"Hey Ricky."
"Ms. Burkhardt, what are you doing.... here? Does your father know?"
He actually wanted to ask her if her father knew she was with me, he just omitted the "with this guy" after the what are you doing. Bastard.
She looked at me and smiled.
"Whatever, can you please take our orders?"
"Of course."
Ricky man, he looked like someone punched his face in. Hehehe. What a pinhead. So, yeah, I ordered an extra-large pop. She just ordered a small diet pop. So the guy gives us our stuff in two separate bags, and Jackie tells him to put it on her account and told me to leave. Man, that pissed me. I mean, sure, you can buy me boots every once in a while, but on a date, I pay. I looked at the guy, and I brought my hand to my jacket's front pocket. Man, that guy, he was hysterical. He thought I was gonna get out a gun or something. Man, I so need to go there more often. I got out a couple of bills and paid for the soda myself. He looked at me funny. I waved, and I drove away. Jackie looked at me in that half worshipping stare.
"Aww Steven, you paid for our drinks! That's so gentlemanly!"
Man, I knew she was gonna get all "oh my god, and Steeven!", but you know, I kinda like her calling me that.
So, we get to "The Point".
We get out, and we sit down on the car's tail. So, we're sitting there, and Jackie is taking big sips of her soda and I start looking at her profile in the moonlight. Man, that girl is ... stunning. Yeah, stunning is a good word, not too sissy. So, she finishes her drink, throws the cup in the woods and she just looks at the sky. I look up, and see why she's looking at the sky. Man, it's like every star in the world came out tonight. I take an occasional sip at my soda, but it's far from empty. We just stay there, each of us looking for the good thing to say until we actually forget about the small talk, and we just relax in the silence.
As always if you like R/R!
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SO unprepared. So, okay, me and Jackie, we get into her car, a Lincoln Continental, leather. A pretty nice ride. She gave me the keys and told me to drive it, 'cause she knew I liked driving that car since the day I took her out of pity to prom. Anyways, we both get in, and, I just had to do it, I revved the engine and you know, I felt the whole car kinda like trembling under me. Man, that's a great feeling. It was like the car was alive man! So yeah, after I revved it, I turned around, and I grinned, actually grinned to Jackie. Man, I must be getting soft in my young age. And the hot-as-hell-flames vixen looked at me and smiled.
"Oh Steven, our first date!"
The five words she said totally killed the car-revving joy I was in. I looked at her, and noticed how hot she was. I know I said this already, but she is hot! No wonder Kelso always wanted to get in her pants, or skirt on this occasion. Kelso, what an idiot. He had this totally hot chick in his hands, and what did he do? He went and slept with the devil man. I mean, yeah, ok, Laurie's hot too, if you like such cheap sluts, which, you know can suit me fine for a night or two, but she was born with a tail man! I wouldn't sleep with that man, ever! Except if I'm too drunk to realize or too high to care. But anyway, back to Jackie. You know, Jackie's the kind of chick you would be happy just holding in your arms at night. Especially since she would stop talking. 'Cause you know, all that talk about shampoos and conditioners really annoy me. But you know, I looked well at her hair while I was in the car, and it's so shiny! Man, I was itching to touch it to make sure it was as soft as I imagined it. Man, all those thoughts were in my head in like a second. Then, you know, I kinda cursed myself for being such a wuss. The chick definitely has some weird power over me. I cursed at myself, and I kinda woke up back to reality. Man, I was daydreaming!
Jackie was still looking at me man, and she asked me:
"Where are we going Steven? This has to be special."
Man, she was already starting to get on my nerves. I thought of a cool place we could hang out at, and I just told her:
"Jackie how about we just grab a soda, and then we go to the "Point"? It's cool, we can just hang there a while."
I saw disappointment cross Jackie's face. What did she expect? A freakin' Opera? Her Zen side, the side I had brought out in her, kinda kicked out and she replied it was cool. I smiled. She was definitely coming along nicely. But you know, I'd never tell her that to her face. She'd start blabbering again.
I drove up to Fatso Burger, and the guy, his name's Ricky, you know the guy that interviewed us when we wanted to get jobs in that place, he opened the drive through window and looked at me like I was gonna point a gun to his head and blow his brains out. I looked at him and smiled. He just looked back at me, afraid. Then, Jackie had to do it, she leaned over me and poked her head out. She ruined my fun man!
"Hey Ricky."
"Ms. Burkhardt, what are you doing.... here? Does your father know?"
He actually wanted to ask her if her father knew she was with me, he just omitted the "with this guy" after the what are you doing. Bastard.
She looked at me and smiled.
"Whatever, can you please take our orders?"
"Of course."
Ricky man, he looked like someone punched his face in. Hehehe. What a pinhead. So, yeah, I ordered an extra-large pop. She just ordered a small diet pop. So the guy gives us our stuff in two separate bags, and Jackie tells him to put it on her account and told me to leave. Man, that pissed me. I mean, sure, you can buy me boots every once in a while, but on a date, I pay. I looked at the guy, and I brought my hand to my jacket's front pocket. Man, that guy, he was hysterical. He thought I was gonna get out a gun or something. Man, I so need to go there more often. I got out a couple of bills and paid for the soda myself. He looked at me funny. I waved, and I drove away. Jackie looked at me in that half worshipping stare.
"Aww Steven, you paid for our drinks! That's so gentlemanly!"
Man, I knew she was gonna get all "oh my god, and Steeven!", but you know, I kinda like her calling me that.
So, we get to "The Point".
We get out, and we sit down on the car's tail. So, we're sitting there, and Jackie is taking big sips of her soda and I start looking at her profile in the moonlight. Man, that girl is ... stunning. Yeah, stunning is a good word, not too sissy. So, she finishes her drink, throws the cup in the woods and she just looks at the sky. I look up, and see why she's looking at the sky. Man, it's like every star in the world came out tonight. I take an occasional sip at my soda, but it's far from empty. We just stay there, each of us looking for the good thing to say until we actually forget about the small talk, and we just relax in the silence.