Gundam Dawn: The Fall and Rise of Dommon
By:Otakuman4 Rated: Pg 13 Anime: G-Gundam
Dommon Kasshu of Neo Japan was now the number one Gundam champ. He loved Rain and all his friends a lot but he loved his Gundam even more. Dommon had nothing more in his life to complete but he had one love Rain.
"I'm sorry but I must go."
"Why Dommon?" Rain asked in a very soft cold voice
"I must move on in the world." Dommon screamed
Dommon and Rain stood in the snow of Neo China's Hong Kong. They were staying at a very cheap wood motel. Mr.Kasshu had just left Rain in front of the snowy motel. Dommon hoped he could make it to Neo Japan by morning but his hope was to be broken. Dommon started down the stone street and passed by a noodle store.
"I would like a cup of noodles please."
"You must be Dommon, oh well heres some free noodles. On the house." A large man with an apron said very nicely
Dommon stepped one more step away from the noodle stand and suddenly a huge boom came from the heart of the city.
BOOOOM BOOM BOOOOOOOOOM BBBOOOM
Dommon scrambled to his feet while watching the city burning in flames.
People were running and kids were crying. Dommon screamed and suddenly thought about Rain.
"I have left her only because I'm afraid to settle in."
Dommon got back to his senses and ran away from the middle of the street. By minuites Dommon could feel the city Burning before himself. The sharp cry of a man stopped his lazyness and Dommon ran to the shoreline. "Shining Gundam!"
Dommon's Gundam appeared right before him.
"If I can get inside my Gundam, maybe I can see what's causing this chaos."
Dommon was inside his Gundam. He looked around and to his shock he saw the whole city burning and millions of dead boddies. He tilted his Gundam to the left and noticed another Gundam. It was Neo America's Gundam. But it was shooting fire and shards of metal all over.
"Chibadee?" Dommon exclaimed
The Maxter Gundam stopped blowing up the city and peered to its right. It noticed Shining Gundam and soon was running after it. The Gundam fought Dommon's Gundam and lost. Dommon got out of his Gundam and jumped on Maxter's leg. He pulled out Chibadee and soon found out.he was in acoma.
CHAPTER 2----------------------THE DAY AFTER
Dommon was getting blamed for the destruction of the city even though Dommon saw Maxter do everything. Dommon was placed in Jail and Chibadee in acoma. They were blaming Dommon for starting fires and blowing up 60% of the city.
Dommon sat in his cell and thought about how he could have been framed.
Suddenly a huge hole was blown in Dommon's cell. Argo Gulski of Neo Russia was right beside the hole.
"Thanks Argo" Dommon said in a nice manner
"No Problem" Argo replyed
Dommon and Argo jumped into Argo's Gundam wich was outside of the very cheap jail. Dommon however jumped out and ran to the Gundam Hold Number 5. Dommon got into his Gundam and ran (in his gundam) away into the forests of China. Argo and Dommon met there and started talking.
"Evryone saw me beat Maxter.who was destroying the town. So why I'm a getting chased?"
"Happened to me too." Argo said madly
"George was destroying France when I was there and I had to beat him. I got out of Jail and saw that you had been put into Jail." Argo claimed
Dommon and Argo now on theyre own, had to figure out what had happened and if the dark gundam was back.
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Dommon Kasshu of Neo Japan was now the number one Gundam champ. He loved Rain and all his friends a lot but he loved his Gundam even more. Dommon had nothing more in his life to complete but he had one love Rain.
"I'm sorry but I must go."
"Why Dommon?" Rain asked in a very soft cold voice
"I must move on in the world." Dommon screamed
Dommon and Rain stood in the snow of Neo China's Hong Kong. They were staying at a very cheap wood motel. Mr.Kasshu had just left Rain in front of the snowy motel. Dommon hoped he could make it to Neo Japan by morning but his hope was to be broken. Dommon started down the stone street and passed by a noodle store.
"I would like a cup of noodles please."
"You must be Dommon, oh well heres some free noodles. On the house." A large man with an apron said very nicely
Dommon stepped one more step away from the noodle stand and suddenly a huge boom came from the heart of the city.
BOOOOM BOOM BOOOOOOOOOM BBBOOOM
Dommon scrambled to his feet while watching the city burning in flames.
People were running and kids were crying. Dommon screamed and suddenly thought about Rain.
"I have left her only because I'm afraid to settle in."
Dommon got back to his senses and ran away from the middle of the street. By minuites Dommon could feel the city Burning before himself. The sharp cry of a man stopped his lazyness and Dommon ran to the shoreline. "Shining Gundam!"
Dommon's Gundam appeared right before him.
"If I can get inside my Gundam, maybe I can see what's causing this chaos."
Dommon was inside his Gundam. He looked around and to his shock he saw the whole city burning and millions of dead boddies. He tilted his Gundam to the left and noticed another Gundam. It was Neo America's Gundam. But it was shooting fire and shards of metal all over.
"Chibadee?" Dommon exclaimed
The Maxter Gundam stopped blowing up the city and peered to its right. It noticed Shining Gundam and soon was running after it. The Gundam fought Dommon's Gundam and lost. Dommon got out of his Gundam and jumped on Maxter's leg. He pulled out Chibadee and soon found out.he was in acoma.
CHAPTER 2----------------------THE DAY AFTER
Dommon was getting blamed for the destruction of the city even though Dommon saw Maxter do everything. Dommon was placed in Jail and Chibadee in acoma. They were blaming Dommon for starting fires and blowing up 60% of the city.
Dommon sat in his cell and thought about how he could have been framed.
Suddenly a huge hole was blown in Dommon's cell. Argo Gulski of Neo Russia was right beside the hole.
"Thanks Argo" Dommon said in a nice manner
"No Problem" Argo replyed
Dommon and Argo jumped into Argo's Gundam wich was outside of the very cheap jail. Dommon however jumped out and ran to the Gundam Hold Number 5. Dommon got into his Gundam and ran (in his gundam) away into the forests of China. Argo and Dommon met there and started talking.
"Evryone saw me beat Maxter.who was destroying the town. So why I'm a getting chased?"
"Happened to me too." Argo said madly
"George was destroying France when I was there and I had to beat him. I got out of Jail and saw that you had been put into Jail." Argo claimed
Dommon and Argo now on theyre own, had to figure out what had happened and if the dark gundam was back.
E-MAIL ME IF YOU WOULD LIKE TO HEAR PT. 3
Coopster180@lycos.com