A.N.- "hey, I decided to edit out kane, but this chapter will start out very similar to that third chapter if u've read it before I removed it. oh, and I think I've been spelling kyia Kira I'm sorry."
Yane- " Yup, hope this chapter is to your liking!" *snikers*
A.N. - "That's my line, oh well. I know many ppl don't like my writting but I luv to write so thaey can get over it. please R&R."
Story key:
"talking"
*actions*
~thoughts~
(author add-ins)
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They woke with the sun rise the next day. After a quick breakfast they walked for a half a dat to get to the castle. (they sort of ditched troop 666) After they were about a mile outside the castle gates they stoped to rest until night fall.
Kuwabara - "Why are we stoping?"
Yane - "It will be easier to sneek into the castle if it's dark out."
Kuwabara - "Well what are we supose to do until then?! we have about five hours until it gets dark."
Yane - "I don't care as long as you keep your ki masked."
Kuwabara - "Fine, then your saying we might as well sleep for five hours?"
Yane - "Yup."
Kuwabara - "Hey Yusuke, can you belive that we have nothing to do but sleep?!?!"
Yusuke - *already asleep*
Kuwabara - 0.o; "Well I guess I could use some beauty sleep."
Yane - "We only have five hours not five years."
Kuwabara - "What did you say!?!?!?!"
Yane - "You heard me."
Kuwabara - " I'm to tired to argue with you right now." *lies down to go to sleep*
Yane - "I thought you were complaing about having to go to sleep?"
Kuwabara - *snoring*
Yane - 0.o; "ok........Yo Hiei. If Kurama comes backand wonders where I am tell him I went walking."
(Hiei's been there the whole time, and Kurama went to go get some fire wood.)
Hiei - "Hn."
Yane - "Well Hn. to you too." *leaves*
----------------an hour latter----------
Kurama has just gotten back to the camp site.
Kurama - "Where's Yane?"
Hiei - "Walking."
Kurama - "How long has she been gone?"
Hiei - "over an hour."
Kurama - "Pretty long walk if you ask me..... I needed to tell her that someone was looking for her."
Hiei - *jumps down from his tree branch* "Who?!"
Kurama - "Some guy named damen why?"
Hiei - "Just wondering..... I'm going to see how gaurded the castle is." *disaperes*
------------Elsewhere-------------
Yane was about a half a mile away from the campsite when Damen droped by to say 'high'. After fighting for about ten minutes you could tell Yane wasn't doing to well. She had managed to give him a black eye, but he was using her bad arm to his advantage.
Yane - "I'm not losing this time!!!"
Damen - "HA! We'll see about that!"
The fighting continued until Damen pins Yane to the ground.
Damen - "so what now, huh?"
Yane - *makes a gun shape with her hands, puts them up against his chest, and starts to chat.*
Damen doesn't know what she's doing but decided he dosen't like it. He takes a poet knife out of his back pocket.
Damen - "Whatever you're doing stop or I'll kill you right now!"
Yane - *glare at him but contiues to chant.*
Damen - *stabs her in the stomache*
Yane - *winces but contiues till she's finished* "Buh-bye."
After finishing her chant she lets it go. sence Damen still has her pinned he takes a direct blow.
Hiei gets to the place where yane and Damen are. He runs over them and pushes Damen off of Yane"
Hiei - "Yane?!? Yane, wake up!'
Yane - *moans then opens her eyes* "Hiei? What the hell are you doing here?"
Hiei -" Looking for you baka."
Yane - "oh... Hey I killed Damen."
Hiei - "I noticed."
Yane - "Yeah all by myself too." *she bearly got the sentence out befor she fell unconsience.*
Hiei - "YANE?!?! Shit, don't die on me now!"
(Right now hiei's wearing his black pants and over coat with a black mucle shirt under his coat, and Yane has blue jeans with a black workout shirt that ends below her ribcage on.)
Hiei takes off his over coat and ties it around Yane's stomache. He then pickes her up and carries her to the campsite. When he gets there only a note is waiting for him.
Hiei - *reading* ~We got tired of waiting and went ahead to the castle. Catch up with us when you get this. if Hiei is the reading this Kurama wants you to make sure Yane's ok. c'ya latter, Yusuke.~ " Damn it! Hell of a good time to get impatient!"
Yane - *starts coughing* "where is everybody?"
Hiei - "They left with out us. You should get some rest."
Yane - "No, I'm fine. I'm not going to let them fight all those demon alone." *stands up but when she tries to walk she falls backwards.*
Hiei - *catches her* "What was that about being fine?"
Yane - "Shut up."
Hiei - *sets her down* "We're in a good mood arn't we."
Yane - "Very funny. Damn stomache. I have to go help and you're not going to stop me!" *start to get up but fails. holds on to her stomache and winces*
Hiei - "Stop getting over excited you're only going to make it worse!"
Yane - "Yes mother."
Hiei - "Just give it up your not going anywhere. And thats final."
Hiei jumps up into a tree and yane lays down. They don't talk for the next hour until Kurama, Yusuke, and Kuwabara get back. They said that there were to many demons and that they just killed the ones that saw them and left. When Kurama saw Yane he bout jumped down Hiei's throught. Hiei just said that some of the demons jumped her when she was walking. They rested for about three more days until Yane could fight agian.
Kurama - "We'll head out tomorrow. Yusuke and Kuwabara you guys handle the gaurds outside of thae castle and Hiei, Yane and I will handle the ones inside."
Yusuke - "Ok.
Kuwabara - "That works."
Yane - "Fine by me."
Hiei - "Hn.
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Ayane - "That's the chapter I'll try to get the next one by monday."
Hiei - "Hn."
Yane - "If you say Hn one more time I'm going to kill you."
Hiei - "HN!"
Yane - "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH"
Ayane - 0.o;;;;; "Please R&R."
Yane- " Yup, hope this chapter is to your liking!" *snikers*
A.N. - "That's my line, oh well. I know many ppl don't like my writting but I luv to write so thaey can get over it. please R&R."
Story key:
"talking"
*actions*
~thoughts~
(author add-ins)
-----------------------------------
They woke with the sun rise the next day. After a quick breakfast they walked for a half a dat to get to the castle. (they sort of ditched troop 666) After they were about a mile outside the castle gates they stoped to rest until night fall.
Kuwabara - "Why are we stoping?"
Yane - "It will be easier to sneek into the castle if it's dark out."
Kuwabara - "Well what are we supose to do until then?! we have about five hours until it gets dark."
Yane - "I don't care as long as you keep your ki masked."
Kuwabara - "Fine, then your saying we might as well sleep for five hours?"
Yane - "Yup."
Kuwabara - "Hey Yusuke, can you belive that we have nothing to do but sleep?!?!"
Yusuke - *already asleep*
Kuwabara - 0.o; "Well I guess I could use some beauty sleep."
Yane - "We only have five hours not five years."
Kuwabara - "What did you say!?!?!?!"
Yane - "You heard me."
Kuwabara - " I'm to tired to argue with you right now." *lies down to go to sleep*
Yane - "I thought you were complaing about having to go to sleep?"
Kuwabara - *snoring*
Yane - 0.o; "ok........Yo Hiei. If Kurama comes backand wonders where I am tell him I went walking."
(Hiei's been there the whole time, and Kurama went to go get some fire wood.)
Hiei - "Hn."
Yane - "Well Hn. to you too." *leaves*
----------------an hour latter----------
Kurama has just gotten back to the camp site.
Kurama - "Where's Yane?"
Hiei - "Walking."
Kurama - "How long has she been gone?"
Hiei - "over an hour."
Kurama - "Pretty long walk if you ask me..... I needed to tell her that someone was looking for her."
Hiei - *jumps down from his tree branch* "Who?!"
Kurama - "Some guy named damen why?"
Hiei - "Just wondering..... I'm going to see how gaurded the castle is." *disaperes*
------------Elsewhere-------------
Yane was about a half a mile away from the campsite when Damen droped by to say 'high'. After fighting for about ten minutes you could tell Yane wasn't doing to well. She had managed to give him a black eye, but he was using her bad arm to his advantage.
Yane - "I'm not losing this time!!!"
Damen - "HA! We'll see about that!"
The fighting continued until Damen pins Yane to the ground.
Damen - "so what now, huh?"
Yane - *makes a gun shape with her hands, puts them up against his chest, and starts to chat.*
Damen doesn't know what she's doing but decided he dosen't like it. He takes a poet knife out of his back pocket.
Damen - "Whatever you're doing stop or I'll kill you right now!"
Yane - *glare at him but contiues to chant.*
Damen - *stabs her in the stomache*
Yane - *winces but contiues till she's finished* "Buh-bye."
After finishing her chant she lets it go. sence Damen still has her pinned he takes a direct blow.
Hiei gets to the place where yane and Damen are. He runs over them and pushes Damen off of Yane"
Hiei - "Yane?!? Yane, wake up!'
Yane - *moans then opens her eyes* "Hiei? What the hell are you doing here?"
Hiei -" Looking for you baka."
Yane - "oh... Hey I killed Damen."
Hiei - "I noticed."
Yane - "Yeah all by myself too." *she bearly got the sentence out befor she fell unconsience.*
Hiei - "YANE?!?! Shit, don't die on me now!"
(Right now hiei's wearing his black pants and over coat with a black mucle shirt under his coat, and Yane has blue jeans with a black workout shirt that ends below her ribcage on.)
Hiei takes off his over coat and ties it around Yane's stomache. He then pickes her up and carries her to the campsite. When he gets there only a note is waiting for him.
Hiei - *reading* ~We got tired of waiting and went ahead to the castle. Catch up with us when you get this. if Hiei is the reading this Kurama wants you to make sure Yane's ok. c'ya latter, Yusuke.~ " Damn it! Hell of a good time to get impatient!"
Yane - *starts coughing* "where is everybody?"
Hiei - "They left with out us. You should get some rest."
Yane - "No, I'm fine. I'm not going to let them fight all those demon alone." *stands up but when she tries to walk she falls backwards.*
Hiei - *catches her* "What was that about being fine?"
Yane - "Shut up."
Hiei - *sets her down* "We're in a good mood arn't we."
Yane - "Very funny. Damn stomache. I have to go help and you're not going to stop me!" *start to get up but fails. holds on to her stomache and winces*
Hiei - "Stop getting over excited you're only going to make it worse!"
Yane - "Yes mother."
Hiei - "Just give it up your not going anywhere. And thats final."
Hiei jumps up into a tree and yane lays down. They don't talk for the next hour until Kurama, Yusuke, and Kuwabara get back. They said that there were to many demons and that they just killed the ones that saw them and left. When Kurama saw Yane he bout jumped down Hiei's throught. Hiei just said that some of the demons jumped her when she was walking. They rested for about three more days until Yane could fight agian.
Kurama - "We'll head out tomorrow. Yusuke and Kuwabara you guys handle the gaurds outside of thae castle and Hiei, Yane and I will handle the ones inside."
Yusuke - "Ok.
Kuwabara - "That works."
Yane - "Fine by me."
Hiei - "Hn.
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Ayane - "That's the chapter I'll try to get the next one by monday."
Hiei - "Hn."
Yane - "If you say Hn one more time I'm going to kill you."
Hiei - "HN!"
Yane - "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH"
Ayane - 0.o;;;;; "Please R&R."