The Touched
Part 6
Notes: I'm currently extremely pissed off as I
had just finished this part and was very happy with it as it was the best part I
had written so far and my f***ing computer just went and lost the entire f***ing
thing even though I'd saved it...I'm gutted. So I apologize if this part is
terrible as I'll be trying to make it what it was and will no doubt fail
miserably (I'm very annoyed at the minute...sorry for
rambling)
Aaaaaaaaanyway...on with the story...
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Sam groaned as
the pain coursed through her entire body, the constant ache pulsing through her
every fiber. Her head was throbbing in pain, the tingling agony playing with her
consciousness. She knew she couldn't be dead, she was in far too much pain for
that. Attempting to swallow, much to the dismay of her dry, raw throat, she
slowly opened her eyes, the disjointed images slowly merging to form the face of
her smiling CO.
She offered him
a small smile. Reaching out, he traced the outline of her face, his warm hand
sending a heated shiver through her body. She closed her eyes and leaned into
the warmth, smiling as his fingers traced her cheek. She slowly opened her eyes
and stared at him, watching as he leaned closer to her.
"Don't you ever
scare me like that again, Major." He whispered gently, his breath brushing her
face, "Is that understood?"
"Yes Sir." She
whispered hoarsely. Jack pulled away and picked a glass of water from the
trolley that Janet had left by her bedside before helped her to drink a little.
Closing her eyes, she lay back onto the bed, pulling the blankets around her.
Looking at him again, she stared into his eyes, watching him stare at her with a
deep concern.
She smiled, "Is
Daniel here as well?"
"Isn't he
always." Jack replied, smiling down at her. His eyes darkened momentarily and
she found herself drawn into their depths. He was no longer masking his
feelings, she could read his eyes. She saw the relief, the pain, the aching
sadness. He had lost so much already and now he had almost lost
her.
Sam closed her
eyes, unable to hold off the darkness that was begging for her presence. The
rhythm of her breathing slowed as she tried to ignore the gentle pain. She felt
a warmth against her cheek and she struggled to open her eyes. Jack leaned
towards her again, bringing himself down to eye level. He stroked her cheek and
Sam took a sharp in take of breath at the feelings that simple gesture provoked.
His thumb brushed her lips, touching them gently and she held her breath before
an agonizing cry left her lips.
"Doc!" Jack
watched as Sam clutched her stomach and legs, pulling herself into a fetal
position, unable to stand the excruciating pain streaming through her body. A
fire ravaged her senses, scalding every inch of her skin as everything
threatened to fade into nothingness. The darkness beckoned her. And then it
stopped.
Slowly sitting
up, Sam looked around the room, oblivious to the confused and worried looks on
her friends' faces, instead, following a definite instinct that she was being
watched. Glancing at her surroundings, everything seemed sharper, clearer, more
defined. She glanced around the room with an intense clarity as everything was
brought to an urgent focus.
She found
herself focusing on the erratic trace of a nearby oscilloscope. The disjointed
sounds around her were muffled by the dropping of water in her drip, slowly
causing everything to fade into silence, deafened by the gentle noise. Her stare
drifted across the room, the colors and textures jumping out at her until her
gaze finally resting on the silent figure.
The woman stood
in the far corner of the room, smiling happily, a ghostly shadow of what she
once was. Raising her arm, Nilke's mouth moved in a silent motion, her gentle
whisper brushing past, "Kly ne Manat'maha". And then she was
gone.
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"Sir, I don't
even know what happened," Jack sighed leaning back, his gaze drifting from the
doodles on his pad to the two empty chairs. Teal'c, sensing Jack's reluctance to
continue, proceeded to inform General Hammond of the details of their mission.
Jack's mind drifted, he had almost lost her. It might not have been the first
time, but this was the only time he had allowed her to do it to herself.
"I'm fine,
Sir." The familiarity of the gentle voice brought him back to the present as he
looked up into Sam's face.
"What the hell
do you think you're doing here?"
Sam frowned,
looking a little hurt, "I'm here for the debriefing."
"You should be
resting in the infirmary."
"I'm
fine."
"OK, people,"
General Hammond looked back and forth between the two before turning to Sam,
"Major Carter, has Doctor Fraiser cleared you for duty?"
"Yes, Sir. She
can find nothing wrong and all the tests were clear. She plans to keep a close
eye on me but I'm allowed to return to duty."
Hammond nodded
and cleared his throat, "In that case, I see no reason to stop
you..."
"Sir!"
"...on the
condition," Hammond turned to Jack, frowning, "that you take care of yourself
and take every opportunity to rest."
"Yes
Sir."
The General
nodded indicating to Teal'c that he should continue as Sam continued to glare at
Jack.
"...placing SG1
on stand down for a week..."
"Sir, I'm
fine."
"That may be
Major, but Doctor Jackson is not."
"Yes Sir," Sam
averted her gaze and looked at her hands, embarrassed that she had forgotten
Daniel was hurt, having been unconscious at the time.
"...dismissed."
Sam breathed a
sigh of relief. Standing up, she turned to the door and walked straight into
Jack.
"Collect your
stuff and I'll take you home."
Sam gritted her
teeth, "Sir, I am perfectly capable of driving myself..."
"Doctor's
orders." Sam frowned at Janet as she walked towards them and stood next to Jack,
"No driving." She turned to Jack and handed him a small bottle of tablets, "If
she's in a lot of pain you give her one of these and call me, OK?" Jack nodded
and Janet said a quick goodbye before leaving the room.
"I'll take
those." Sam reached for the bottle but Jack quickly with drew his hand,
"Sir?"
"You're coming
home with me until I'm sure you're OK."
"I am perfectly
capable of looking after myself, Sir."
"Well I'm not so sure. Not even the Doc knows what was
wrong with you and until I'm satisfied that you're OK, I am not letting you out
of my sight." Sam opened her mouth to protest but Jack quickly cut her off, "Or
I could always have the Doc confine you to the infirmary." Sam closed her mouth
with an audible snap and stormed down the corridor without a
word.
"Oh boy," Jack
muttered, "This is gonna be fun."
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END OF
PART 5
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upset with my computer and It's still not as good as the original
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