Thanks once again, my same two reviewers.
WarriorOfAvalon: I'm glad you think it's better. And I will continue, if more people are good like you and review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ella Lee: The first time I made a mistake and put the whole story I had written so far instead of just the first chapter. I hope you still like it!
On with the story…
"Good morning, my little Pelma! Have a nice sleep?" Samantha, our cook asked. She spoke with a heavy Kerain accent, and Pelma, in Kerainish, means 'blossoming flower'.
"Khah!" I replied, saying 'hello,' 'goodbye,' and 'yes.' "I will be eating in the garden." I grabbed a plate loaded with eggs, sausage, bread, and bacon and headed out the back door. I heard the scrabble of claws on marble and looked down to see Fritzy panting at my feet. I handed him a scrap of bacon and a pat on the head.
"Good boy," I murmured. I walked to the gardens and sat on a stone bench. I ate my delicious breakfast in silence, listening to the birds chirp. I finished and spread the scraps on the ground. Immediately, a deer, a fox, and three birds appeared and ate it. I did this everyday. It took a long time for them to fianally trust me. But now they almost rely on me. I knelt down and scooped up the fox. He licked me gently on the ear. I hugged him and set him back on the ground. Next, I hugged the deer, which nuzzled me in return. I blew a kiss to each of the birds, and they settled on my shoulders. I turned and walked through the maze of roses, glistening with sweet dew, the animals at my heels. As I was wondering through, I met up with my fairy godmother, Yolinda. She gently planted a kiss on top of my head.
"Hello, sweet child. How does your morning fare?" she asked in a voice as sweet as honey.
"Wonderful. You are looking quite lovely today, as you always do." It was true. Her shimmering wings bathed her in a rainbow light. Her wavy blonde hair pulsed radiance around her perfectly made-up face. There were roses entwined in her hair, which completed her dazzling appearance. She laid a long fingered hand on my head.
"Ah, but I sense a something is going to happen to you," she mused. "Something, I don't know what, but it will be exciting, frightening, and nerve-racking."
'What will that be?' I wondered as my wandering footsteps brought me to the Royal Stables. I decided to go for a ride on my centaur, Nesses. He saw me coming and ran to go get his saddle. He came back with it clutched in his muscular arms. I smiled at him and gave him an apple. He was jumping with excitement as I tried to fasten his girth. He loves going for rides.
"Stop moving," I yelled at him. He stopped and looked at me with such sorrowful eyes that I laughed and gave him a carrot stick from my skirt pocket. "Oh, that reminds me, I need to go change so I can ride!" I yelped. "Sorry, be back in a bit!" And I ran off towards the castle.
Like it any better? Please keep on reviewing. I have a lot of more chapters waiting. But I am waiting for atleast 2 reveiws for each chapter to go on. C'mon, I saw some stories with over a thousand reviews!
Luv, Kat