Eowyn's Song
A/N Eowyn's thought on Aragorn. Warning...perhaps a little Aragorn bashing. Not much cause I think he's cool, but this mainly reflects some of his personality in the movies, cause he really annoyed me the way he seemed to almost lead Eowyn on. It was really sickening for me to watch that, knowing that she couldn't have him. If you disagree with my opinions, that's fine, but don't cuss me out about because you don't agree. This will be extremely free styled, meaning very little correct poetry formating. Go ahead and review please everyone, you don't have to like it!!! Now onto the fic!!!
Tears stream down my face
You left me. I feel so disgraced
I feel so used, so tormented, so destroyed
You knew I loved you, so you were kind
We laughed and shared happy memories together
But they ended when you left
Before you had been so nice
But you turned cold hearted
Your chilled eyes pierced through me
Like the blade, that I know I could use so well
Yet still I am turned away
Not only in love, but also in war
I feel useless and unimportant
Knowing that I will never be allowed to help
Or perhaps even to love
You led me on
Acting so loving and caring,
When you would just turn me away in the end
But I guess it's my fault
For falling so deep and fast for you
But you led the dance of frost
My dance of death, hate, and bitter cold
So I stand here, knee deep in my own heart
Pierced by your gaze,
Blood pours from my wounds
Tears well up in my eyes
Of bitter sorrow
Of anger
Of despise
Of love which I cannot have
I imagine how it would feel to be her
The elven princess who recieves your love
The tears start to pour
I feel so weak, bended and hurt
Death would be sweet and welcome
A/N I know...it totally sux. This one I truly think isn't that great, but sometimes I can't come up with a decently written fic that really expresses my feelings, so I get one of these. Please tell me what YOU think of it, whether good or bad.
A/N Eowyn's thought on Aragorn. Warning...perhaps a little Aragorn bashing. Not much cause I think he's cool, but this mainly reflects some of his personality in the movies, cause he really annoyed me the way he seemed to almost lead Eowyn on. It was really sickening for me to watch that, knowing that she couldn't have him. If you disagree with my opinions, that's fine, but don't cuss me out about because you don't agree. This will be extremely free styled, meaning very little correct poetry formating. Go ahead and review please everyone, you don't have to like it!!! Now onto the fic!!!
Tears stream down my face
You left me. I feel so disgraced
I feel so used, so tormented, so destroyed
You knew I loved you, so you were kind
We laughed and shared happy memories together
But they ended when you left
Before you had been so nice
But you turned cold hearted
Your chilled eyes pierced through me
Like the blade, that I know I could use so well
Yet still I am turned away
Not only in love, but also in war
I feel useless and unimportant
Knowing that I will never be allowed to help
Or perhaps even to love
You led me on
Acting so loving and caring,
When you would just turn me away in the end
But I guess it's my fault
For falling so deep and fast for you
But you led the dance of frost
My dance of death, hate, and bitter cold
So I stand here, knee deep in my own heart
Pierced by your gaze,
Blood pours from my wounds
Tears well up in my eyes
Of bitter sorrow
Of anger
Of despise
Of love which I cannot have
I imagine how it would feel to be her
The elven princess who recieves your love
The tears start to pour
I feel so weak, bended and hurt
Death would be sweet and welcome
A/N I know...it totally sux. This one I truly think isn't that great, but sometimes I can't come up with a decently written fic that really expresses my feelings, so I get one of these. Please tell me what YOU think of it, whether good or bad.