Disclaimer: I think you know this by now, but o well. Characters, not mine,
idea, I thought was mine, but someone else probably beat me to it, exact
story word by word or pretty close to it, MINE!
Author: has anyone else noticed that I name my chapter titles after songs? Or at least I try to. 4th chapter in 1 day, I'm so happy, aren't you? Well, the chapters are short, but I'll make lots. Please tell me if I should continue writing these. I'm still writing for the only reviewer I know of so far, Crown. I'm glad you like my story and please continue to tell me how I'm doing. Ok, now onto the story, because who cares what I write in here?
*~*~*
Kel looked up from her group of friends to see Cleon running at them at top speed.
"Told you guys he was fine." She remarked.
"Oh"-gasp-"my god." Cleon tried to say, but was out of breath.
"Cleon, buddy, if you wanna talk, catch your breath first." Neal said.
Taking a deep breath, Cleon said, "You guys wouldn't believe what I just heard!"
"Aren't we a bit to old for gossip?" asked Lalasa, annoyed.
"It's not like that. Joren is alive." He replied.
"I TOLD YOU!" Kel retorted.
"How do you know this?" Dom asked.
"I was in the garden and I saw something shiny, so I went to see what it was and I heard someone talking, it was him, he said that if he does stuff carefully or something, I don't know, but he was talking to himself and called himself Joren and it has to be him. Wait, Kel said she knows he's alive too?" Cleon said, losing having to catch his breath again.
"She saw him in the ballroom." Owen informed Cleon.
"Just like Cleon, to chase after shiny objects." Laughed Owen. Cleon blushed slightly.
Mimicking a character from one of his favorite cartoons, Neal said, "Well gang, it sounds like we have another mystery on our hands."
Catching on, Cleon replied, "Right, off, to the Mystery Machine!"
"Hold on Scooby Doo, we don't go around solving mysteries, that's what police are for." Kel said. "So, we walk into a police station, tell them we saw Joren Stone walking around and expect them to believe us?" Merric asked.
"Then don't go to the police. We're smart, we can track a dead classmate." Owen said.
"No offense Kel, but I think this is just a load of crap." Lalasa stated.
"I know I saw him, but this is stupid." She said.
"Fine then, we'll just go on with everyday life, pretending we never saw or heard Joren Stone after his obituary was printed?!" asked an annoyed Neal.
*~*~*
Author: Please, especially on this last one, tell me what you think. I know what I think of it, but I won't say on here. Email me suggestions on another story or for this one. Thanx! My computer was being stupid and wouldn't let the whole chapter load, sorry!
Author: has anyone else noticed that I name my chapter titles after songs? Or at least I try to. 4th chapter in 1 day, I'm so happy, aren't you? Well, the chapters are short, but I'll make lots. Please tell me if I should continue writing these. I'm still writing for the only reviewer I know of so far, Crown. I'm glad you like my story and please continue to tell me how I'm doing. Ok, now onto the story, because who cares what I write in here?
*~*~*
Kel looked up from her group of friends to see Cleon running at them at top speed.
"Told you guys he was fine." She remarked.
"Oh"-gasp-"my god." Cleon tried to say, but was out of breath.
"Cleon, buddy, if you wanna talk, catch your breath first." Neal said.
Taking a deep breath, Cleon said, "You guys wouldn't believe what I just heard!"
"Aren't we a bit to old for gossip?" asked Lalasa, annoyed.
"It's not like that. Joren is alive." He replied.
"I TOLD YOU!" Kel retorted.
"How do you know this?" Dom asked.
"I was in the garden and I saw something shiny, so I went to see what it was and I heard someone talking, it was him, he said that if he does stuff carefully or something, I don't know, but he was talking to himself and called himself Joren and it has to be him. Wait, Kel said she knows he's alive too?" Cleon said, losing having to catch his breath again.
"She saw him in the ballroom." Owen informed Cleon.
"Just like Cleon, to chase after shiny objects." Laughed Owen. Cleon blushed slightly.
Mimicking a character from one of his favorite cartoons, Neal said, "Well gang, it sounds like we have another mystery on our hands."
Catching on, Cleon replied, "Right, off, to the Mystery Machine!"
"Hold on Scooby Doo, we don't go around solving mysteries, that's what police are for." Kel said. "So, we walk into a police station, tell them we saw Joren Stone walking around and expect them to believe us?" Merric asked.
"Then don't go to the police. We're smart, we can track a dead classmate." Owen said.
"No offense Kel, but I think this is just a load of crap." Lalasa stated.
"I know I saw him, but this is stupid." She said.
"Fine then, we'll just go on with everyday life, pretending we never saw or heard Joren Stone after his obituary was printed?!" asked an annoyed Neal.
*~*~*
Author: Please, especially on this last one, tell me what you think. I know what I think of it, but I won't say on here. Email me suggestions on another story or for this one. Thanx! My computer was being stupid and wouldn't let the whole chapter load, sorry!