For the one who think my other poem 'Good-bye' was harsh so i made it down. I let down a tot.
~Good-bye-(Less harsher)
It started with you
it ended with me
why can't you see
i don't like you

don't you start with me
I don't like you
so i say good-bye
you're in the blue

You say no
I say bye
I don't like you
You made me cry
for the first time

I just think that
you should move on
'cause it's not me
I think you should be gone

Don't lie
Don't try
just say good-bye

You say no
I say bye
I don't like you
You made me cry
for the first time so
I say good-bye...
~The end~
I hope this is a less harsh than the other poem called 'Good-bye' Plz Review and tell me what do you think