Before I post this Chapter 1 had Paragraphs and stuff it just got posted
messed up and I'll try and make sure it doesn't happen to this chapter, but
really what do you think of the actual story?
Chapter 2: A Discovery
"Ugh.Where am I? How did I get here?" Tanner had asked hoping someone would answer. He was pretty much nowhere he didn't know if it was a dream or not, but he was surrounded by complete blankness he didn't know if it was a dream or not. There was another person in the blank area with him. Actually there were 2 people they were fighting. There was a man with a weird haircut and a weird guy with three black horns coming out of his chin. The guy with the weird haircut had seemed to be beaten, but then he came out of nowhere and had formed a giant ball above him, somehow Tanner had known that the name of this ball was called the spirit bomb. Tanner didn't know how he knew the name of this strange ball it was somewhere in the back of his mind. Then the guy with the weird haircut threw the giant ball at the weird guy and blew him away. Then he had found out that the name of the guy with the weird haircut was Goku because someone had yelled out his name. Then Goku and some other people were standing in front of a large dragon. The dragon was known to give wishes but the dragon would not for another hundred years. Goku had asked to trade his life for one wish, to bring back everybody that had died during the Shenron's rage. Then Goku had flown away on the dragon's head and all these strange balls were sucked into his body. Tanner woke up in a cold sweat. "Phew it was only a dream thank go." Tanner's sentence was cut off because he found out he was in a room on a nice comfy bed. "Hello? Is anybody there? Where am I?" Tanner had asked out loud. Just then a green man with antennae came into the room the short guy that Tanner had seen before was following him. "Ah you're awake. Sorry about knocking you out like that, but we had to get you up here someway." The green man said smiling "Who are you? Where am I? What's this all about you know this is considered kidnap!" Tanner yelled "Oh right I haven't properly introduced myself. My name is Dende, The guardian of something called the dragonballs. Oh yeah by the way I really doubt that this would be considered kidnap because you have no parents no friends and no house." Dende replied. "Oh yeah! Well.Hey wait a minute how did you know that about me?" Tanner asked "Well I have been keeping an eye on you for about 4 years now. You are the world's only hope. Tanner have you ever had strange things happen to you.things you couldn't explain?" Tanner asked curiously "Well sure, but I don't think they are too strange. I mean I'm probably sick or something. Nothing a little medicine can't fix.right?" Tanner asked "Wrong Tanner there is a lot more you have to learn about yourself a lot more things that you could ever know. Now let me tell you the story about a man named Goku. Goku was a great man, also one of the strongest; He had fought many enemies such as androids, armies, aliens, dragons, ninjas, demons, magicians, and many other great evils. Until one day when it just went to far. He had given his life for the revival of earth now he is gone forever.or so we had thought. We had figured out that you are our chance to bring back Goku and you and him can defeat the next great evil that is walking the earth unnoticed." Dende explained "Wait a minute I had a dream about that man named Goku he was taken away by a dragon. How do you expect me to get him back from a dragon and don't you need something called the dragonballs? That was also in the dream." Tanner asked Krillin had decided to get included in this conversation. "Well you see Tanner you are the stepson of the great saiyan, Goku. We know that you were adopted because of the fact that you are not a normal saiyan. All research has lead us to the fact that you are a race of saiyan called a Neo Saiyan. We also found out that a Neo Saiyan does not need the dragonballs to raise the Eternal Dragon. a Neo Saiyan can just raise the dragon with a very special power that they have. The problem is that you will need about half a day to power up this technique. So Dende and I will be training you in your quest to bring back the great warrior Goku." Tanner had nodded signaling that he had understood even though he was still a bit confused. Krillin and Dende had brought Tanner outside and that was when Tanner had noticed he was in a large type of lookout tower that was high above the clouds. "First you must learn how to fly. This shouldn't be hard for you seeing that you are a Neo Saiyan. For a regular saiyan it takes about 2 days for you it should take about half of one day. Okay now you take all of the power from your stomach and try to bring it down to your legs and the next thing you know you should." Krillin was speechless when he ad seen that Tanner was already in the air with no strain. "Wow Hey! Look at me I'm flying. I can't believe it, and it wasn't even that hard." Tanner celebrated. He was doing little flips in the air, but the he landed and asked Krillin "Okay what next?" "Well now you must learn how to fire a beam, but not here I must take you to a place far from here. Follow me." Krillin began to fly away Tanner close behind him. They had been flying for about 25 minutes now when they had landed in a large field, but some unexpected company greeted them.
Chapter 2: A Discovery
"Ugh.Where am I? How did I get here?" Tanner had asked hoping someone would answer. He was pretty much nowhere he didn't know if it was a dream or not, but he was surrounded by complete blankness he didn't know if it was a dream or not. There was another person in the blank area with him. Actually there were 2 people they were fighting. There was a man with a weird haircut and a weird guy with three black horns coming out of his chin. The guy with the weird haircut had seemed to be beaten, but then he came out of nowhere and had formed a giant ball above him, somehow Tanner had known that the name of this ball was called the spirit bomb. Tanner didn't know how he knew the name of this strange ball it was somewhere in the back of his mind. Then the guy with the weird haircut threw the giant ball at the weird guy and blew him away. Then he had found out that the name of the guy with the weird haircut was Goku because someone had yelled out his name. Then Goku and some other people were standing in front of a large dragon. The dragon was known to give wishes but the dragon would not for another hundred years. Goku had asked to trade his life for one wish, to bring back everybody that had died during the Shenron's rage. Then Goku had flown away on the dragon's head and all these strange balls were sucked into his body. Tanner woke up in a cold sweat. "Phew it was only a dream thank go." Tanner's sentence was cut off because he found out he was in a room on a nice comfy bed. "Hello? Is anybody there? Where am I?" Tanner had asked out loud. Just then a green man with antennae came into the room the short guy that Tanner had seen before was following him. "Ah you're awake. Sorry about knocking you out like that, but we had to get you up here someway." The green man said smiling "Who are you? Where am I? What's this all about you know this is considered kidnap!" Tanner yelled "Oh right I haven't properly introduced myself. My name is Dende, The guardian of something called the dragonballs. Oh yeah by the way I really doubt that this would be considered kidnap because you have no parents no friends and no house." Dende replied. "Oh yeah! Well.Hey wait a minute how did you know that about me?" Tanner asked "Well I have been keeping an eye on you for about 4 years now. You are the world's only hope. Tanner have you ever had strange things happen to you.things you couldn't explain?" Tanner asked curiously "Well sure, but I don't think they are too strange. I mean I'm probably sick or something. Nothing a little medicine can't fix.right?" Tanner asked "Wrong Tanner there is a lot more you have to learn about yourself a lot more things that you could ever know. Now let me tell you the story about a man named Goku. Goku was a great man, also one of the strongest; He had fought many enemies such as androids, armies, aliens, dragons, ninjas, demons, magicians, and many other great evils. Until one day when it just went to far. He had given his life for the revival of earth now he is gone forever.or so we had thought. We had figured out that you are our chance to bring back Goku and you and him can defeat the next great evil that is walking the earth unnoticed." Dende explained "Wait a minute I had a dream about that man named Goku he was taken away by a dragon. How do you expect me to get him back from a dragon and don't you need something called the dragonballs? That was also in the dream." Tanner asked Krillin had decided to get included in this conversation. "Well you see Tanner you are the stepson of the great saiyan, Goku. We know that you were adopted because of the fact that you are not a normal saiyan. All research has lead us to the fact that you are a race of saiyan called a Neo Saiyan. We also found out that a Neo Saiyan does not need the dragonballs to raise the Eternal Dragon. a Neo Saiyan can just raise the dragon with a very special power that they have. The problem is that you will need about half a day to power up this technique. So Dende and I will be training you in your quest to bring back the great warrior Goku." Tanner had nodded signaling that he had understood even though he was still a bit confused. Krillin and Dende had brought Tanner outside and that was when Tanner had noticed he was in a large type of lookout tower that was high above the clouds. "First you must learn how to fly. This shouldn't be hard for you seeing that you are a Neo Saiyan. For a regular saiyan it takes about 2 days for you it should take about half of one day. Okay now you take all of the power from your stomach and try to bring it down to your legs and the next thing you know you should." Krillin was speechless when he ad seen that Tanner was already in the air with no strain. "Wow Hey! Look at me I'm flying. I can't believe it, and it wasn't even that hard." Tanner celebrated. He was doing little flips in the air, but the he landed and asked Krillin "Okay what next?" "Well now you must learn how to fire a beam, but not here I must take you to a place far from here. Follow me." Krillin began to fly away Tanner close behind him. They had been flying for about 25 minutes now when they had landed in a large field, but some unexpected company greeted them.