This is my 2nd attempted fanfic. My last on bombed. No reviews but if
someone reads this review please I need it. I worked on this one for about
a month. The mushy Romantic stuff happens in chap .. Well a later chapter
K? Well enjoy.
Disclaimer: I don't own zoids or the chaotic century characters but I do own Dragoness and the doom liger (my version.)
It starts out on a foggy night when Raven and his Geno-Breaker were going through a thick forest.
"Shadow what's wrong with you I need more power. Don't tell me we need to spend the night out here. We need to find what Prozen wants so I can get on with my life: Raven. Raven said in a sly yet angry tone. The scanners started flipping out and were saying something was right in front of them. Then a girl about Ravens age and height jumped onto the head of the Geno- Breaker. Also with a big grin as wide as a Banana.
"Get off there now!!! Shadows get her off! Shadow gave out a big organoid roar and went after her. She looked up and all of a sudden Shadow was on the ground lifeless. She turned to Raven with an angry glare.
"I didn't kill him. He just needs a nights rest or so." The little jungle girl.
Then the little girl went off into the woods. Ravens snickered because what she didn't know was that he set out traps all over his camp. Also around the forest.
Ahhhhh,"a sudden scream from the forest shook up the birds.
Gotcha lil' girl", said Raven in a deep and satisfied tone.
The "jungle girl" was struggling to get out of the trap but the barbwire was wrapped around her leg. It was causing to much pain for her to bare. She heard something rustling in the bushes. She saw Ravens face and her vision got blurry. The jungle girl blacked out.
A/N: Please tell me if I should continue because I really want to know what you guys think. I know it wasn't much of a cliffhanger but the next chapter is filled with excitement but I think there is one little tearjerker only if you're really sensitive.
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Disclaimer: I don't own zoids or the chaotic century characters but I do own Dragoness and the doom liger (my version.)
It starts out on a foggy night when Raven and his Geno-Breaker were going through a thick forest.
"Shadow what's wrong with you I need more power. Don't tell me we need to spend the night out here. We need to find what Prozen wants so I can get on with my life: Raven. Raven said in a sly yet angry tone. The scanners started flipping out and were saying something was right in front of them. Then a girl about Ravens age and height jumped onto the head of the Geno- Breaker. Also with a big grin as wide as a Banana.
"Get off there now!!! Shadows get her off! Shadow gave out a big organoid roar and went after her. She looked up and all of a sudden Shadow was on the ground lifeless. She turned to Raven with an angry glare.
"I didn't kill him. He just needs a nights rest or so." The little jungle girl.
Then the little girl went off into the woods. Ravens snickered because what she didn't know was that he set out traps all over his camp. Also around the forest.
Ahhhhh,"a sudden scream from the forest shook up the birds.
Gotcha lil' girl", said Raven in a deep and satisfied tone.
The "jungle girl" was struggling to get out of the trap but the barbwire was wrapped around her leg. It was causing to much pain for her to bare. She heard something rustling in the bushes. She saw Ravens face and her vision got blurry. The jungle girl blacked out.
A/N: Please tell me if I should continue because I really want to know what you guys think. I know it wasn't much of a cliffhanger but the next chapter is filled with excitement but I think there is one little tearjerker only if you're really sensitive.
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