Well I know the last chapter was short but please stick with me my story
gets a little interesting. A little. Well please review and tell me what
you think
Raven: Like anyone would want to read your story Me: Shut up you do know im the author and I can make you do what ever I want. (grins evilly) Raven: im not scared Bring it on.
Me: its never fun when you do that it takes all the fun out of it.
Anyway on with the chapter.
When the "jungle girl" woke up she saw a black big bold face in hers. Suddenly she screamed. Once she settled down she got up and looked around only to spot Raven. She decided that she must run away or at least get a chance to. She told shadow that Raven needed his help. Shadow ran over to Raven. She then had the perfect chance to run away. She quickly dashed away and never bothered to look back.
"Shadow you let her get away! I should have your head for this! Go find her. Lord Prozen wants her. Now!!!!!!!!!" Raven said.
Shadow let out a great organoid roar and dashed of to complete the assignment that raven had given to him.
~~~~~~~~~~~~Meanwhile.~~~~~~~~~~~(if you guys were wondering when I would stop calling her jungle girl it will be soon. You shall find out her name just be patient)
The jungle girl ran for her life. She was just about to get to a lake and head under cover for a few days when all of a sudden a shimmery, silvery, black figure appeared and knocked her out.
When the girl woke up she was in a moving zoid. Which happened to be a GENOBREAKER!!!
Where am I?" little Jungle girl said with sleepiness and pain barely able to open her eyes.
You're in my zoid. You know you weren't supposed to run away, Raven in a calm angry tone.
WELL HOW WOULD YOU LIKE IT IF A THING WOKE YOU UP AND YOU WERE IN PAIN AND HAVE NO IDEA WHERE YOU ARE AT.HHHMMM. I AM WAITING!!! "The girl said in a loud and angry tone.
Wouldn't like it. And frankly I don't care about your problems. The THING your were talking and babbling on about was my organoid, Shadow. My name is Raven. Yours: Raven
Dragoness.
Well anyways it will take a few days to get to where we are supposed to be going. Someone requested your presence.
But why did you have to take me away from my home I was happy there."
There was no reply from Raven.
"Well if you aren't going to talk then maybe I don't want to talk either." said dragoness. She quickly fell asleep with an angry look on here face muttering something about being a weak-minded fool.
(A/N): im sorry I would have a tearjerker in her but I got one reviewer that wants me continue and this is all that I got before my time was up on the normal day of my life.
Anyway please review I promise the next chapter will have an almost raven/dragoness moment. You'll see in the next chapter.
Please review please review please review and oh now that I have improved on how to work on fanfiction.net all people can review that means everybody
Please review please review please review please review please review please review
I need at least 5 more reviews in order to continue that way I know that some people are actually reading my story.
Flames are always welcome. Please flame do something and if you have any ides that you want me to put in her then email me at a461daughter@aol.com or just review that would be best. But enough of my chit chat till the next chapter ^^Audi
Raven: Like anyone would want to read your story Me: Shut up you do know im the author and I can make you do what ever I want. (grins evilly) Raven: im not scared Bring it on.
Me: its never fun when you do that it takes all the fun out of it.
Anyway on with the chapter.
When the "jungle girl" woke up she saw a black big bold face in hers. Suddenly she screamed. Once she settled down she got up and looked around only to spot Raven. She decided that she must run away or at least get a chance to. She told shadow that Raven needed his help. Shadow ran over to Raven. She then had the perfect chance to run away. She quickly dashed away and never bothered to look back.
"Shadow you let her get away! I should have your head for this! Go find her. Lord Prozen wants her. Now!!!!!!!!!" Raven said.
Shadow let out a great organoid roar and dashed of to complete the assignment that raven had given to him.
~~~~~~~~~~~~Meanwhile.~~~~~~~~~~~(if you guys were wondering when I would stop calling her jungle girl it will be soon. You shall find out her name just be patient)
The jungle girl ran for her life. She was just about to get to a lake and head under cover for a few days when all of a sudden a shimmery, silvery, black figure appeared and knocked her out.
When the girl woke up she was in a moving zoid. Which happened to be a GENOBREAKER!!!
Where am I?" little Jungle girl said with sleepiness and pain barely able to open her eyes.
You're in my zoid. You know you weren't supposed to run away, Raven in a calm angry tone.
WELL HOW WOULD YOU LIKE IT IF A THING WOKE YOU UP AND YOU WERE IN PAIN AND HAVE NO IDEA WHERE YOU ARE AT.HHHMMM. I AM WAITING!!! "The girl said in a loud and angry tone.
Wouldn't like it. And frankly I don't care about your problems. The THING your were talking and babbling on about was my organoid, Shadow. My name is Raven. Yours: Raven
Dragoness.
Well anyways it will take a few days to get to where we are supposed to be going. Someone requested your presence.
But why did you have to take me away from my home I was happy there."
There was no reply from Raven.
"Well if you aren't going to talk then maybe I don't want to talk either." said dragoness. She quickly fell asleep with an angry look on here face muttering something about being a weak-minded fool.
(A/N): im sorry I would have a tearjerker in her but I got one reviewer that wants me continue and this is all that I got before my time was up on the normal day of my life.
Anyway please review I promise the next chapter will have an almost raven/dragoness moment. You'll see in the next chapter.
Please review please review please review and oh now that I have improved on how to work on fanfiction.net all people can review that means everybody
Please review please review please review please review please review please review
I need at least 5 more reviews in order to continue that way I know that some people are actually reading my story.
Flames are always welcome. Please flame do something and if you have any ides that you want me to put in her then email me at a461daughter@aol.com or just review that would be best. But enough of my chit chat till the next chapter ^^Audi