Ok I got a couple of ideas and I would like to thank them all. One goes by
the name INUGURL and the other one is Veggie Girl. You people shall see why
I am thanking Veggie Girl in this chapter. The reason why I am thanking
INUGURL is for one of her characters in this story. I am still open 4 any
ideas but if they aren't as good as these two ideas I might reconsider. Not
to be mean or anything its just that my last fanfiction thingy I wrote it
really stunk any way here...
(Ok here is the deal for the people who were wondering why people keep asking about dragoness. Prozen sent out a large bounty for her because she has the power either to create or destroy the universe.. So raven and other people want her. So the guardian force wants her that can explain and I might explain more but what fun would that be. Now on wit da fic)
This starts out on a foggy night . A shadow creeps in the mist of the night.A genobreaker comes out and sends out a searching signal. It says that the "someone it is looking for is in a jungle 50 miles away. It suddenly put on its booster on fuul power.
"Shadow once we find her get her in the net and we shall never let her go. Then we head over to prozens and get my money.,"Raven said.
His zoid dashed off.Into the silvery light of the moon.
~~~~~~~~~~At the jungle where dragoness is at~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hey liger lets stay here for the night k?
Her liger gave an understanding roar.
"Well Well what do we have here,"Dragoness looked around only to see raven.
YOU WERENT SUPPOSED TO RUN AWAY!!!", Raven yelled. But what raven did not see,hiding in the shadows and dark mists was her zoid. Dragoness motioned for her zoid to go away without raven noticing.
"Im sorry I thought you left me there do die!!"Dragoness said in a sad and quiet tone.
Raven walked over to her and took her hand and walked her over to his zoid. Then they got in the cockpit.
"Arent you going to kill me? "Dragoness asked.
"No but I was going to capture you in a net and just throw you at prozen. But this is more fun."Raven said in an expressionless (I don't know how to spell.) face.
"Stupid,"Dragoness.
"If you run away again I know someone that will kill you!"Raven mumbled under is breath.
Then all of a sudden they heard a loud roar. It kinda looked like a blade liger.
"it couldn't be. Crys is that you?"Dragoness yelled happily.
"Yo wassup. Hey Raven let her go. Anyways I need the money for her. If you don't I will just take her by force."Crys said.
"CRYS, what has happened to you. I thought you were my friend. Back then."She went into deep thought about a flashback.
~~~~~~~~~FlashBack~~~~~~~~
It was a clear day in a nice meadow. Two little girls playing together. One spoke up.
"Lets make a pat. We will be friends forever,"said the one in a little dress.
"Ok but I was wondering ."there was a big explosion behind them and they ran to the village.
Then the people that were attacking the village grabbed dragoness.
"We got her sir. Now lets go!"The man in a black cloak and black pants on. You could hardly see his face but you could tell that he hadn't taken a bath for a long time.!! =)
"CRYS!!!! WHERE ARE YOOOOOOUUUUU!
"IM RIGHT HERE DRAGONESS.
Then all of a sudden another man just took her and that was the last they ever saw each other.
~~~~~~~~end flashback~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"No that was all a lie. Once you left you never came even to get me. But now I'm happy. Without you.,"said Crys.
"Well im sorry to interrupt but you aint taking her. She's with me and you cant take her!"said raven in his usual tone of voice.
Then they both got into battle positions. The geno breaker started up its charged particle beam. The blade liger was doing something funny. It looked like it was charging up for a...ICE BEAM!!!!
(Whoever made up crys im sorry about this but it will just have to be but you will see what happens to her after this in next chapter)
Then all of a sudden a charged particle beam shot through the blade liger and it was completely destroyed even the cockpit.
"What just happened?"Dragoness asked in a confused tone.
"I don't really know .. Hey look over there!
There was a ...GENO BREAKER coming there way.
"Stop right there. I challenge you to a fight."said a voice in the violet geno breaker.
"Why should I even except. Plus I have someone in here that I cant hurt."said Raven in a confused yet cool tone.
"Because is you don't then that just means youre afraid. Besides I don't think your organoid can stand up to the power of mine."
"Why you little...Fine I EXCEPT BUT JUST TO SHOW YOU THAT I HAVE MUCH MORE POWER THEN YOU COULD EVER IMAGINE. Hey whats your namr anyway?"
"That's for me to know and you to find out. Yeah all bark but no bite."
They got into battle position. It was on.
(a/n):I know this chapter was a little bit short but I decided to put short and make the other half in another chapter. Just to keep you on suspence. Or so I thought! But if I get enough reviewshint hintI might just continue. But if you have more characters I will try to put them in the next chapter or the one after that. But im sorry to whoever made crys I didn't get there name. So all I have to say is PLEASE REVIEW. Oh and Veggie Girl please email me I need more ideas. Only if you want to. Well bye byez.
(Ok here is the deal for the people who were wondering why people keep asking about dragoness. Prozen sent out a large bounty for her because she has the power either to create or destroy the universe.. So raven and other people want her. So the guardian force wants her that can explain and I might explain more but what fun would that be. Now on wit da fic)
This starts out on a foggy night . A shadow creeps in the mist of the night.A genobreaker comes out and sends out a searching signal. It says that the "someone it is looking for is in a jungle 50 miles away. It suddenly put on its booster on fuul power.
"Shadow once we find her get her in the net and we shall never let her go. Then we head over to prozens and get my money.,"Raven said.
His zoid dashed off.Into the silvery light of the moon.
~~~~~~~~~~At the jungle where dragoness is at~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hey liger lets stay here for the night k?
Her liger gave an understanding roar.
"Well Well what do we have here,"Dragoness looked around only to see raven.
YOU WERENT SUPPOSED TO RUN AWAY!!!", Raven yelled. But what raven did not see,hiding in the shadows and dark mists was her zoid. Dragoness motioned for her zoid to go away without raven noticing.
"Im sorry I thought you left me there do die!!"Dragoness said in a sad and quiet tone.
Raven walked over to her and took her hand and walked her over to his zoid. Then they got in the cockpit.
"Arent you going to kill me? "Dragoness asked.
"No but I was going to capture you in a net and just throw you at prozen. But this is more fun."Raven said in an expressionless (I don't know how to spell.) face.
"Stupid,"Dragoness.
"If you run away again I know someone that will kill you!"Raven mumbled under is breath.
Then all of a sudden they heard a loud roar. It kinda looked like a blade liger.
"it couldn't be. Crys is that you?"Dragoness yelled happily.
"Yo wassup. Hey Raven let her go. Anyways I need the money for her. If you don't I will just take her by force."Crys said.
"CRYS, what has happened to you. I thought you were my friend. Back then."She went into deep thought about a flashback.
~~~~~~~~~FlashBack~~~~~~~~
It was a clear day in a nice meadow. Two little girls playing together. One spoke up.
"Lets make a pat. We will be friends forever,"said the one in a little dress.
"Ok but I was wondering ."there was a big explosion behind them and they ran to the village.
Then the people that were attacking the village grabbed dragoness.
"We got her sir. Now lets go!"The man in a black cloak and black pants on. You could hardly see his face but you could tell that he hadn't taken a bath for a long time.!! =)
"CRYS!!!! WHERE ARE YOOOOOOUUUUU!
"IM RIGHT HERE DRAGONESS.
Then all of a sudden another man just took her and that was the last they ever saw each other.
~~~~~~~~end flashback~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"No that was all a lie. Once you left you never came even to get me. But now I'm happy. Without you.,"said Crys.
"Well im sorry to interrupt but you aint taking her. She's with me and you cant take her!"said raven in his usual tone of voice.
Then they both got into battle positions. The geno breaker started up its charged particle beam. The blade liger was doing something funny. It looked like it was charging up for a...ICE BEAM!!!!
(Whoever made up crys im sorry about this but it will just have to be but you will see what happens to her after this in next chapter)
Then all of a sudden a charged particle beam shot through the blade liger and it was completely destroyed even the cockpit.
"What just happened?"Dragoness asked in a confused tone.
"I don't really know .. Hey look over there!
There was a ...GENO BREAKER coming there way.
"Stop right there. I challenge you to a fight."said a voice in the violet geno breaker.
"Why should I even except. Plus I have someone in here that I cant hurt."said Raven in a confused yet cool tone.
"Because is you don't then that just means youre afraid. Besides I don't think your organoid can stand up to the power of mine."
"Why you little...Fine I EXCEPT BUT JUST TO SHOW YOU THAT I HAVE MUCH MORE POWER THEN YOU COULD EVER IMAGINE. Hey whats your namr anyway?"
"That's for me to know and you to find out. Yeah all bark but no bite."
They got into battle position. It was on.
(a/n):I know this chapter was a little bit short but I decided to put short and make the other half in another chapter. Just to keep you on suspence. Or so I thought! But if I get enough reviewshint hintI might just continue. But if you have more characters I will try to put them in the next chapter or the one after that. But im sorry to whoever made crys I didn't get there name. So all I have to say is PLEASE REVIEW. Oh and Veggie Girl please email me I need more ideas. Only if you want to. Well bye byez.