Ok, I'll try to keep this short. This is my first fanfic but I do have an
original. I update slowly because of school but also because I'm lazy,
sometimes. After reading this, I'd LOVE it if you'd read my original,
Bermuda Island's Secret, and cze's story, Divine Powers. Both of us want
reviews badly. Besides cze, only relatives have read my story.sniff,
sniff. Anyways, please remember to make a review at the end! I'd really
appriciate it!
Disclaimer: poke poke What's this? This wasn't in my original story. poke poke CHOMP! Ahhh, my finger! Get it off of me! Fine, I don't own Golden Sun. lets go Now where's that superglue?
Ivan's Change
Chaper One
Taken
Isaac sighed. He was very happy that Garet and Jenna were together. He was even happier that he told Mia that he loved her but he did pity Ivan and Sheba. He knew that they loved each other but were afraid to admit it. After saving the world from destruction and placing the Jupiter and Mars Star in Vale, they were all relaxing in Tolbi except for Ivan who was in Kalay. Isaac suddenly had an idea and asked a boy in the streets to retrieve his friends in Tolbi except for Sheba The kid eagerly nodded and ran off, knowing it was an honor to talk to the adepts who saved the world. He got the innkeeper too and waited to tell his old gang his plan to get the two Wind adepts together.
Ivan wished he could tell Sheba how he felt about her. He was afraid of telling her in words but gave her many hints often. He would give her gifts like cards, weapons, and clothes but she was either stubborn, ignoring him, or felt the same. Ivan was in a story looking for a bouquet. When he found a nice one that seemed to fit Sheba, Ivan payed for it and headed for Tolbi.
After only a few minutes after leaving the gate, though,, he already got into trouble. He heard a rustling noise and drew out his Shamen's Rod to kill whatever was following him. Ivan spun around and was surprised to see three men wearing black tunics. They looked strong but Ivan didn't sense any psynergy and noticed that they had weak weapons. Ivan glanced at thier short swords and bow and arrows. He continued heading toward Tolbi.
"He's ignoring us. Isn't he the adept that can use psynergy that uses no elements?" Ivan heard one say. He was confused and was curious about what they were talking about. Ivan turned around just in time to see the guy with the bow and arrow set shooting an arrow at him. Even though Ivan was a Wind adept, which meant he was fast, he couldn't dodge an arrow heading straight for him. The arrow hit him on his right side. He kneeled over, surprised that he was hit, and pulled the arrow out. Some of his blood dripped out of his wound and made a dark red puddle on the grass under him. The tip of the arrow was covered in something blue, which was definitely not his blood. Then, everything faded to black in Ivan's eyes as he fainted. The three men stood beside him grinning.
Well my old story had longer chapters, but for no reason, I'll make these short. Also, I usually make the whole story up before even typing it up so it'll take me some time to think of another chapter unless I'm feeling particularly creative. I hope I don't get writer's block at all. R&R!
Disclaimer: poke poke What's this? This wasn't in my original story. poke poke CHOMP! Ahhh, my finger! Get it off of me! Fine, I don't own Golden Sun. lets go Now where's that superglue?
Ivan's Change
Chaper One
Taken
Isaac sighed. He was very happy that Garet and Jenna were together. He was even happier that he told Mia that he loved her but he did pity Ivan and Sheba. He knew that they loved each other but were afraid to admit it. After saving the world from destruction and placing the Jupiter and Mars Star in Vale, they were all relaxing in Tolbi except for Ivan who was in Kalay. Isaac suddenly had an idea and asked a boy in the streets to retrieve his friends in Tolbi except for Sheba The kid eagerly nodded and ran off, knowing it was an honor to talk to the adepts who saved the world. He got the innkeeper too and waited to tell his old gang his plan to get the two Wind adepts together.
Ivan wished he could tell Sheba how he felt about her. He was afraid of telling her in words but gave her many hints often. He would give her gifts like cards, weapons, and clothes but she was either stubborn, ignoring him, or felt the same. Ivan was in a story looking for a bouquet. When he found a nice one that seemed to fit Sheba, Ivan payed for it and headed for Tolbi.
After only a few minutes after leaving the gate, though,, he already got into trouble. He heard a rustling noise and drew out his Shamen's Rod to kill whatever was following him. Ivan spun around and was surprised to see three men wearing black tunics. They looked strong but Ivan didn't sense any psynergy and noticed that they had weak weapons. Ivan glanced at thier short swords and bow and arrows. He continued heading toward Tolbi.
"He's ignoring us. Isn't he the adept that can use psynergy that uses no elements?" Ivan heard one say. He was confused and was curious about what they were talking about. Ivan turned around just in time to see the guy with the bow and arrow set shooting an arrow at him. Even though Ivan was a Wind adept, which meant he was fast, he couldn't dodge an arrow heading straight for him. The arrow hit him on his right side. He kneeled over, surprised that he was hit, and pulled the arrow out. Some of his blood dripped out of his wound and made a dark red puddle on the grass under him. The tip of the arrow was covered in something blue, which was definitely not his blood. Then, everything faded to black in Ivan's eyes as he fainted. The three men stood beside him grinning.
Well my old story had longer chapters, but for no reason, I'll make these short. Also, I usually make the whole story up before even typing it up so it'll take me some time to think of another chapter unless I'm feeling particularly creative. I hope I don't get writer's block at all. R&R!