Say something, Inu-Yasha.
Inu-Yasha: Keh! I don't have to say anything, baka! Why'd you call yourself dog-eared hanyou anyway? Do you want to be considered a freak by both humans and demons?
Aw, come on. Kagome, Shippo, Miroku, Kirara, Sango and I don't mind. I think you're cute. You're all cocky, and your ears and cool fangs and a REALLY big sword.
Inu-Yasha: Keh! Anyway, dog-eared hanyou doesn't own Golden Sun. Nintendo does. Why does everyone like this time anyway? Everything's so scary and smells weird. Kagome's 'word', Kikyou and Rumiko Takahashi own me. My fan just rented me. If you want to know what I look like, watch my own anime, read my manga or go on the Internet and find some pics! Even dog-eared hanyou is obsessed with me, hence her pen name.
Kagome: Did you say KIKYOU?! You two-timer! So Kikyou owns you but just my word owns you? Sit, sit, sit, sit, sit, sit! (leaves)
Inu-Yasha: (face shoved in the ground) BAKA!
.and two cool moves for your sword and silvery hair and golden eyes and a strong kimono made of the fur of the fire rat and a useful sheath and strong claws and a very good jumping height and strength.
Ivan's Change
Chapter Four
Effect
Ivan was getting nervous. He didn't say much to Sheba, afraid she would think he was boring. He rested on the bed and decided to change into his PJs. He told Sheba to not turn around and why. He changed into a lighter and shorter tunic and was surprised that Sheba had also changed. She was wearing a yellow dress. He didn't want to lay down anymore now that Sheba had. He sat on the edge of the bed and looked at the wall.
Suddenly, he felt a pain in his head. It hurt more than a simple headache. It felt like someone was knocking on his head like a door. He grabbed his head and groaned at the pain. He fell on the bed and moaned louder. Ivan couldn't think clearly anymore.
Sheba turned around, wondering what he was doing, shocked to see him on the bed, holding his head with his eyes tightly squeezed shut. She moved next to Ivan and asked him what was wrong.
"My head hurts," was all he could say. Then, he continued groaning. Sheba grabbed his arms and shoved them away from his head and asked him again what was wrong, hoping she could get a better explanation. He couldn't answer. It looked like the pain was getting stronger every moment. She quickly inspected his head but didn't find anything wrong with it, not a bump or bruise. Sheba let go of his arms since he was resisting her grip. Ivan instintively grabbed his head again.
'I guess I've got to read your mind to calm you down,' she thought to herself. All Jupiter adepts could read the minds of others and the person wouldn't notice. Sheba was special though. When she read minds, the person would kind of be in a trance and be calm. Unfortunately, the person would stay like that for a little while after it too. For adepts, the stronger they were, the more calm they would be. Sheba guessed since he was much stronger than a lazy adept in Vale, he'd probably fall asleep. That'd be good for Ivan.
"Mind read," Sheba whispered as she used her psynergy. As she searched for info in Ivan's mind, he started to calm down and eventually fall asleep. Sheba was still searching when she heard his soft snoring. She sighed in relief, now that he was okay. Sheba finally found out about Ivan's kidnapping. She instantly stopped mind reading and grabbed Ivan's right arm. He still had a tiny hole on his arm and Sheba was shocked. It wasn't a trick of what she read in his mind. She hit him on his head, angry that he didn't tell her, thinking it wasn't important enough. Instead of yelling for help, she decided to just check on Ivan until morning. Then, she'd ask Mia to check on him and cure whatever was hurting him.
Sheba covered Ivan up with one of the blankets and she leaned on the wall. Ivan was still asleep dispite being hit on the head hard by Sheba. She always thought of her 'side effect' of mind reading bad but she was grateful it wasn't just this once. She couldn't stand him being hurt like that. Not because he was a friend but because she had feelings for him too.
Corny ending, weird plot and short chapter!! What a bad story this'll be. I hate ending. I hate endings. They're the hardest.
You'd better finish this story and that Inu-Yasha one or else. You already finished this one on paper so don't be lazy.
Shhhhh! The readers are supposed to think I'm making it up as I go! Ahem, anyways.review!
Inu-Yasha: Keh! I don't have to say anything, baka! Why'd you call yourself dog-eared hanyou anyway? Do you want to be considered a freak by both humans and demons?
Aw, come on. Kagome, Shippo, Miroku, Kirara, Sango and I don't mind. I think you're cute. You're all cocky, and your ears and cool fangs and a REALLY big sword.
Inu-Yasha: Keh! Anyway, dog-eared hanyou doesn't own Golden Sun. Nintendo does. Why does everyone like this time anyway? Everything's so scary and smells weird. Kagome's 'word', Kikyou and Rumiko Takahashi own me. My fan just rented me. If you want to know what I look like, watch my own anime, read my manga or go on the Internet and find some pics! Even dog-eared hanyou is obsessed with me, hence her pen name.
Kagome: Did you say KIKYOU?! You two-timer! So Kikyou owns you but just my word owns you? Sit, sit, sit, sit, sit, sit! (leaves)
Inu-Yasha: (face shoved in the ground) BAKA!
.and two cool moves for your sword and silvery hair and golden eyes and a strong kimono made of the fur of the fire rat and a useful sheath and strong claws and a very good jumping height and strength.
Ivan's Change
Chapter Four
Effect
Ivan was getting nervous. He didn't say much to Sheba, afraid she would think he was boring. He rested on the bed and decided to change into his PJs. He told Sheba to not turn around and why. He changed into a lighter and shorter tunic and was surprised that Sheba had also changed. She was wearing a yellow dress. He didn't want to lay down anymore now that Sheba had. He sat on the edge of the bed and looked at the wall.
Suddenly, he felt a pain in his head. It hurt more than a simple headache. It felt like someone was knocking on his head like a door. He grabbed his head and groaned at the pain. He fell on the bed and moaned louder. Ivan couldn't think clearly anymore.
Sheba turned around, wondering what he was doing, shocked to see him on the bed, holding his head with his eyes tightly squeezed shut. She moved next to Ivan and asked him what was wrong.
"My head hurts," was all he could say. Then, he continued groaning. Sheba grabbed his arms and shoved them away from his head and asked him again what was wrong, hoping she could get a better explanation. He couldn't answer. It looked like the pain was getting stronger every moment. She quickly inspected his head but didn't find anything wrong with it, not a bump or bruise. Sheba let go of his arms since he was resisting her grip. Ivan instintively grabbed his head again.
'I guess I've got to read your mind to calm you down,' she thought to herself. All Jupiter adepts could read the minds of others and the person wouldn't notice. Sheba was special though. When she read minds, the person would kind of be in a trance and be calm. Unfortunately, the person would stay like that for a little while after it too. For adepts, the stronger they were, the more calm they would be. Sheba guessed since he was much stronger than a lazy adept in Vale, he'd probably fall asleep. That'd be good for Ivan.
"Mind read," Sheba whispered as she used her psynergy. As she searched for info in Ivan's mind, he started to calm down and eventually fall asleep. Sheba was still searching when she heard his soft snoring. She sighed in relief, now that he was okay. Sheba finally found out about Ivan's kidnapping. She instantly stopped mind reading and grabbed Ivan's right arm. He still had a tiny hole on his arm and Sheba was shocked. It wasn't a trick of what she read in his mind. She hit him on his head, angry that he didn't tell her, thinking it wasn't important enough. Instead of yelling for help, she decided to just check on Ivan until morning. Then, she'd ask Mia to check on him and cure whatever was hurting him.
Sheba covered Ivan up with one of the blankets and she leaned on the wall. Ivan was still asleep dispite being hit on the head hard by Sheba. She always thought of her 'side effect' of mind reading bad but she was grateful it wasn't just this once. She couldn't stand him being hurt like that. Not because he was a friend but because she had feelings for him too.
Corny ending, weird plot and short chapter!! What a bad story this'll be. I hate ending. I hate endings. They're the hardest.
You'd better finish this story and that Inu-Yasha one or else. You already finished this one on paper so don't be lazy.
Shhhhh! The readers are supposed to think I'm making it up as I go! Ahem, anyways.review!