Inu-Yasha: Finally, her last chapter is here. Sorry for the delay, people.
My mom needed to set up a new computer and left the old one for a while.
She felt horrible at leaving the story alone so don't flame her, except for
the chapter being short again.
There are too many stories I want to write. I have at least four I have in my head. I know other authors have more unfinished fanfics than that but I CAN'T MULTI-TASK!
Inu-Yasha: Keh! Just ignore her and read on unless you want to see her pulling out her hair.
Anyway, there never was much romance in my fics but hopefully I'll get better. This ending won't have much. Also, I decided to stick to my old name for the dragon. I never noticed that the monster's appearance does sound like what Dodonpa would do. Thanks to whoever said that for making me think of that! I will never own Golden Sun.
Ivan's Change
Chapter Seven
I can't think of a title for my last chapter! Ahhhhh!!!!!!!!!
Ivan ran in the entrance of the cave and waited for his eyes to adust to the darkness. Ivan hated caves. They were cold and didn't have much wind. Ivan always felt more lonely when there wasn't a breeze blowing on his skin. Usually, he had his friends with him but his djinn had to do for now. He didn't remember where he came out of and was too lazy to use Reveal. He put his djinn on standby and commanded them to find something that didn't belong in a cave. Ivan did the same.
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"Meet my Psynergy Dragon. You will soon find out that it's got an advantage over all of you." The voice whispered to them. Isaac knew the voice sounded familiar but couldn't remember where he heard it before. Isaac decided he'd find out after killing the monster. He used Earthquake but it didn't even flinch when it hit the dragon. Confused, he summoned Judgement, sure it would finish it off, but it had no effect. Sheba, Garet, and Mia were doing the same, shocked that it didn't die after withstanding the four strongest summons and their strongest attacks. Isaac slashed it with his sword. The dragon pulled back a little as the sword cut its leg. It could only feel physical attacks. Isaac's sword wasn't strong though so it would take many attacks to kill it.
They all dodged the Psynergy Dragon's attacks and slashing it at the same time but it seemed more annoyed at the cuts then hurt. Garet, now angry at his psynergy not having much affect, jumped up and stabbed it in one of its eyes. The furious dragon stepped toward him and kicked him. Garet was slammed against the wall hard and was knocked out. It held its eye with one claw as it kicked Sheba and Mia into the wall. The punched Isaac, all of them fainted. The dragon stomped closer to the group, getting ready to kill them, when the door opened. A figure stood at the door.
"Hi guys! I hope you aren't in any trou-," Ivan announced but stopped when he saw his friends unconscious and the giant monster only a few yards away from them. Ivan quickly summoned Thor but he was surprised that it had no effect of the monster. Unlike the others, Ivan realized right away that it was immune to psynergy and had tough scales. He decided to use his new powers he learned and glared at the monster. The dragon stopped moving, like it felt something odd inside itself. Ivan briefly cut his concentration and saw it growling in pain. Ivan used more of his energy until he could feel pain in his head like before. He let go of his concentration, letting the ball of energy only visible to him grow inside the dragon until it exploded, leaving dust.
Ivan sighed in relief. He probably would've passed out if he had to use any more power than he already used. Before he could confront his friends, he heard a noise back in the cave. Ivan used his other psychic power he learned and grabbed someone hiding in the shadows with his mind. Sheba woke up and, first, noticed a layer of dust on her, which meant that the dragon was destroyed. She stood up slowly, since she was still sore, and looked for the person who defeated it. She found Ivan covered in the most dust. Sheba ran up to him and hugged her.
"Ivan, how did you kill the monster and get here so fast," Sheba asked, but he didn't look at her. Ivan was giving the wall an intense look. She heard someone say ouch as a person being shoved out from a hidden spot made a hole in the wall. Kraden was floating in the room, thanks to Ivan's psychic powers. The old man was thrashing in the air, trying to get out of Ivan's invisible grip. He was the familiar voice everyone, except for Ivan, heard.
"Kraden, you hired others to kidnap Ivan?! You aren't evil." Sheba exclaimed, trying to convince herself that Kraden was too old and kind to be evil.
"Everyone gets bored of studying people. Even adepts get uninteresting after a while." Kraden replied simply, "I wanted to make my own monsters and I've been finding people with something similar to psynergy but not element-related. I was only finding out more by testing its powers." Ivan wasn't impressed or feeling sympathetic to him at all. Sheba was disbelieving, too.
"Want me to send him to the Tolbi jail," Ivan asked Sheba. She nodded. Ivan teleported to Tolbi and dropped Kraden in an empty jail cell, giving the astonished guard a very short explantion. Sheba was shocked too. Even Alex couldn't teleport that fast and not even leave a blur. Ivan teleported back in less than five minutes. She just stood there staring at him, until Ivan got nervous and started looking somewhere else to avoid her gaze. Sheba hugged Ivan, glad that everyone was safe. Ivan blushed and Sheba thought he didn't like her.
She apologized but Ivan told her he didn't mind. Sheba happily helped Mia, Isaac and Garet wake up, suddenly very cheerful. When they all were awake and all broken bones were healed by Mia, they were informed by the warden that Kraden was sentenced for ten years in prison for illegal human experimenting, creating creepy monsters and hurting one of the adepts that helped save the world.
"It serves him right. So many scientists looked him up to. Make sure he doesn't get anything that he can mess with in his cell." Isaac told the warden. He agreed and went back to work. After Isaac finished talking, he saw Ivan and Sheba walking to a restaurant holding hands and smiling at each other.
"That's what those two were doing behind us while we were walking back to Tolbi," Isaac said to himself, remembering that Sheba and Ivan were behind the rest of the group when walking to Tolbi. They were now officially a couple.
I don't like the ending but it's better than the one I wrote on paper. I hope someone enjoyed this story. I'm kind of relieved that I'm finished. I don't like lingering on one topic for a long time.
Inu-Yasha: Pretty much, she's glad she got reviews and the story's over, okay?
Yeah, he said it all. Um, thanks for reading and leaving reviews! They made me happy and I learned to.make my chapters longer or else people will complain. What, you expected me to say something important? Ah, I'm never good at endings. I never know what to say to readers however weird that sounds.
Inu-Yasha: You guys are torturing her! Just write your review and leave already!
Having Inu-Yasha around makes it a lot easier! I guess if I write more, I'll get less. never mind.
There are too many stories I want to write. I have at least four I have in my head. I know other authors have more unfinished fanfics than that but I CAN'T MULTI-TASK!
Inu-Yasha: Keh! Just ignore her and read on unless you want to see her pulling out her hair.
Anyway, there never was much romance in my fics but hopefully I'll get better. This ending won't have much. Also, I decided to stick to my old name for the dragon. I never noticed that the monster's appearance does sound like what Dodonpa would do. Thanks to whoever said that for making me think of that! I will never own Golden Sun.
Ivan's Change
Chapter Seven
I can't think of a title for my last chapter! Ahhhhh!!!!!!!!!
Ivan ran in the entrance of the cave and waited for his eyes to adust to the darkness. Ivan hated caves. They were cold and didn't have much wind. Ivan always felt more lonely when there wasn't a breeze blowing on his skin. Usually, he had his friends with him but his djinn had to do for now. He didn't remember where he came out of and was too lazy to use Reveal. He put his djinn on standby and commanded them to find something that didn't belong in a cave. Ivan did the same.
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
"Meet my Psynergy Dragon. You will soon find out that it's got an advantage over all of you." The voice whispered to them. Isaac knew the voice sounded familiar but couldn't remember where he heard it before. Isaac decided he'd find out after killing the monster. He used Earthquake but it didn't even flinch when it hit the dragon. Confused, he summoned Judgement, sure it would finish it off, but it had no effect. Sheba, Garet, and Mia were doing the same, shocked that it didn't die after withstanding the four strongest summons and their strongest attacks. Isaac slashed it with his sword. The dragon pulled back a little as the sword cut its leg. It could only feel physical attacks. Isaac's sword wasn't strong though so it would take many attacks to kill it.
They all dodged the Psynergy Dragon's attacks and slashing it at the same time but it seemed more annoyed at the cuts then hurt. Garet, now angry at his psynergy not having much affect, jumped up and stabbed it in one of its eyes. The furious dragon stepped toward him and kicked him. Garet was slammed against the wall hard and was knocked out. It held its eye with one claw as it kicked Sheba and Mia into the wall. The punched Isaac, all of them fainted. The dragon stomped closer to the group, getting ready to kill them, when the door opened. A figure stood at the door.
"Hi guys! I hope you aren't in any trou-," Ivan announced but stopped when he saw his friends unconscious and the giant monster only a few yards away from them. Ivan quickly summoned Thor but he was surprised that it had no effect of the monster. Unlike the others, Ivan realized right away that it was immune to psynergy and had tough scales. He decided to use his new powers he learned and glared at the monster. The dragon stopped moving, like it felt something odd inside itself. Ivan briefly cut his concentration and saw it growling in pain. Ivan used more of his energy until he could feel pain in his head like before. He let go of his concentration, letting the ball of energy only visible to him grow inside the dragon until it exploded, leaving dust.
Ivan sighed in relief. He probably would've passed out if he had to use any more power than he already used. Before he could confront his friends, he heard a noise back in the cave. Ivan used his other psychic power he learned and grabbed someone hiding in the shadows with his mind. Sheba woke up and, first, noticed a layer of dust on her, which meant that the dragon was destroyed. She stood up slowly, since she was still sore, and looked for the person who defeated it. She found Ivan covered in the most dust. Sheba ran up to him and hugged her.
"Ivan, how did you kill the monster and get here so fast," Sheba asked, but he didn't look at her. Ivan was giving the wall an intense look. She heard someone say ouch as a person being shoved out from a hidden spot made a hole in the wall. Kraden was floating in the room, thanks to Ivan's psychic powers. The old man was thrashing in the air, trying to get out of Ivan's invisible grip. He was the familiar voice everyone, except for Ivan, heard.
"Kraden, you hired others to kidnap Ivan?! You aren't evil." Sheba exclaimed, trying to convince herself that Kraden was too old and kind to be evil.
"Everyone gets bored of studying people. Even adepts get uninteresting after a while." Kraden replied simply, "I wanted to make my own monsters and I've been finding people with something similar to psynergy but not element-related. I was only finding out more by testing its powers." Ivan wasn't impressed or feeling sympathetic to him at all. Sheba was disbelieving, too.
"Want me to send him to the Tolbi jail," Ivan asked Sheba. She nodded. Ivan teleported to Tolbi and dropped Kraden in an empty jail cell, giving the astonished guard a very short explantion. Sheba was shocked too. Even Alex couldn't teleport that fast and not even leave a blur. Ivan teleported back in less than five minutes. She just stood there staring at him, until Ivan got nervous and started looking somewhere else to avoid her gaze. Sheba hugged Ivan, glad that everyone was safe. Ivan blushed and Sheba thought he didn't like her.
She apologized but Ivan told her he didn't mind. Sheba happily helped Mia, Isaac and Garet wake up, suddenly very cheerful. When they all were awake and all broken bones were healed by Mia, they were informed by the warden that Kraden was sentenced for ten years in prison for illegal human experimenting, creating creepy monsters and hurting one of the adepts that helped save the world.
"It serves him right. So many scientists looked him up to. Make sure he doesn't get anything that he can mess with in his cell." Isaac told the warden. He agreed and went back to work. After Isaac finished talking, he saw Ivan and Sheba walking to a restaurant holding hands and smiling at each other.
"That's what those two were doing behind us while we were walking back to Tolbi," Isaac said to himself, remembering that Sheba and Ivan were behind the rest of the group when walking to Tolbi. They were now officially a couple.
I don't like the ending but it's better than the one I wrote on paper. I hope someone enjoyed this story. I'm kind of relieved that I'm finished. I don't like lingering on one topic for a long time.
Inu-Yasha: Pretty much, she's glad she got reviews and the story's over, okay?
Yeah, he said it all. Um, thanks for reading and leaving reviews! They made me happy and I learned to.make my chapters longer or else people will complain. What, you expected me to say something important? Ah, I'm never good at endings. I never know what to say to readers however weird that sounds.
Inu-Yasha: You guys are torturing her! Just write your review and leave already!
Having Inu-Yasha around makes it a lot easier! I guess if I write more, I'll get less. never mind.