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2. Surprising the heebee jeebees out of everyone
Alanna grinned as she rode towards the palace. All though she was only 14 she was 3rd most powerful mage in the world. As a black robe mage she made Duke Rogers gift look like a candle compared to a house on fire. She hadn't told her brother this yet. To tell the truth no one except the Masters at the school knew. She was glad she left the school.
She had had no friends either because they were scared or jealous of her gift. She was also very beautiful her long red hair fell half way down her back and her curvy body made almost every man fall in love with her.
A few hours later she rode into Corus gaping at everything. When she saw the palace her jaw dropped even further. It was huge. As she rode through the gilded gates a hostler took her horse and some servants took her to her room. After she had freshened up she pulled on a pair of expensive breeches and a shirt and used her magical link with Thom to find him. He was in the archery yards.
Alanna stopped outside the doors and made her self invisible, and easy task for a powerful mage. Quickly she slid through the door and looked around. Thom was next in line for archery. Oohh this is goona' be good she thought. Quickly she when and stood beside the target and right before Thom shot she stepped in front of it and made herself visible. There was gasps of horror at that and the fact the arrow was headed strait for her heart. With a wave of her hand the arrow blew up and she started laughing very hard at the looks on everyone's faces.
"Alanna," whispered Thom, "is that you?"
"The one and only," she replied trying to control her laughter. Thom let out a whop and ran to hug Alanna. "Can't breath," wheezed Alanna through his hug. In the background people were recovering from their shock and a handsome man with black hair and sapphire eyes cleared his throat.
"Ah yes let me introduce you to everyone: This is Prince Jonathan my knight master, Gary, Alex and Raoul."
"Pleased to meet you Lady Alanna," said Prince Jonathan, "Please call me Jon."
"Well then you must call me Alanna. Will you excuse me though I must get ready for the ball." And she ran off.
"Wow," said an awestruck Jon as Raoul, Gary and Alex nodded, "You didn't tell us your sister was so beautiful."
Thom scowled "I wonder why," he said sarcastically.
2. Surprising the heebee jeebees out of everyone
Alanna grinned as she rode towards the palace. All though she was only 14 she was 3rd most powerful mage in the world. As a black robe mage she made Duke Rogers gift look like a candle compared to a house on fire. She hadn't told her brother this yet. To tell the truth no one except the Masters at the school knew. She was glad she left the school.
She had had no friends either because they were scared or jealous of her gift. She was also very beautiful her long red hair fell half way down her back and her curvy body made almost every man fall in love with her.
A few hours later she rode into Corus gaping at everything. When she saw the palace her jaw dropped even further. It was huge. As she rode through the gilded gates a hostler took her horse and some servants took her to her room. After she had freshened up she pulled on a pair of expensive breeches and a shirt and used her magical link with Thom to find him. He was in the archery yards.
Alanna stopped outside the doors and made her self invisible, and easy task for a powerful mage. Quickly she slid through the door and looked around. Thom was next in line for archery. Oohh this is goona' be good she thought. Quickly she when and stood beside the target and right before Thom shot she stepped in front of it and made herself visible. There was gasps of horror at that and the fact the arrow was headed strait for her heart. With a wave of her hand the arrow blew up and she started laughing very hard at the looks on everyone's faces.
"Alanna," whispered Thom, "is that you?"
"The one and only," she replied trying to control her laughter. Thom let out a whop and ran to hug Alanna. "Can't breath," wheezed Alanna through his hug. In the background people were recovering from their shock and a handsome man with black hair and sapphire eyes cleared his throat.
"Ah yes let me introduce you to everyone: This is Prince Jonathan my knight master, Gary, Alex and Raoul."
"Pleased to meet you Lady Alanna," said Prince Jonathan, "Please call me Jon."
"Well then you must call me Alanna. Will you excuse me though I must get ready for the ball." And she ran off.
"Wow," said an awestruck Jon as Raoul, Gary and Alex nodded, "You didn't tell us your sister was so beautiful."
Thom scowled "I wonder why," he said sarcastically.