A scar that will never go away
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the Escaflowne characters
Chapter one : Tear struck
Alita was a very popular girl, she attended most of all the extra curricular activities that the school offered. In addition she also took classes on activities in self defense such as archery, Fencing, martial arts, and she also did some meditating to focus her power and clear her mind. Besides from her attractive personality, her physical appearance was quite beautiful. She had silky brown hair that ended just above her waist when she pulled it into a pony tail. Though her body is beautiful, her face surpasses the definition of beauty. One unique thing about Alita was her eyes, you could look at her eyes and tell what mood she was in. her eyes are the deepest blue when she is sad, the are a field green when she is happy, but the most unique color they changed was red, a blood red filled with rage. With this hint of her mood no one could figure out why her eyes stayed blue, they all knew that she was sad when they were blue but she didn't ever look sad. Every one has only seen her eyes blue and green, you were a rare person to see her eyes red. Alita has only had red eyes for one reason when the weak are threatened by the mighty.
After school one day when Alita had a fencing tournament Alita was preparing for it for 2 month, and she certainly looked the part. Alita was just leaving for the tournament, and she got into the car when her father got out and told her that he forgot something and went into the house to ask Alita's mom and older brother if they knew where it was. After Alita's father shut the door of the house there was an explosion....... When Alita got up from the car floor all she could see was black smoke. After Alita collected her thoughts she thought she knew what happened, she thought it was a gas explosion. Not long after the explosion the police and fire& rescue arrived. They found Alita in the car crying, they told her what she already knew, that it was a gas explosion and there were no survivors.
Authors note:
So what did you think of my first fanfic. Well review and I will tell you what happens to Alita.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the Escaflowne characters
Chapter one : Tear struck
Alita was a very popular girl, she attended most of all the extra curricular activities that the school offered. In addition she also took classes on activities in self defense such as archery, Fencing, martial arts, and she also did some meditating to focus her power and clear her mind. Besides from her attractive personality, her physical appearance was quite beautiful. She had silky brown hair that ended just above her waist when she pulled it into a pony tail. Though her body is beautiful, her face surpasses the definition of beauty. One unique thing about Alita was her eyes, you could look at her eyes and tell what mood she was in. her eyes are the deepest blue when she is sad, the are a field green when she is happy, but the most unique color they changed was red, a blood red filled with rage. With this hint of her mood no one could figure out why her eyes stayed blue, they all knew that she was sad when they were blue but she didn't ever look sad. Every one has only seen her eyes blue and green, you were a rare person to see her eyes red. Alita has only had red eyes for one reason when the weak are threatened by the mighty.
After school one day when Alita had a fencing tournament Alita was preparing for it for 2 month, and she certainly looked the part. Alita was just leaving for the tournament, and she got into the car when her father got out and told her that he forgot something and went into the house to ask Alita's mom and older brother if they knew where it was. After Alita's father shut the door of the house there was an explosion....... When Alita got up from the car floor all she could see was black smoke. After Alita collected her thoughts she thought she knew what happened, she thought it was a gas explosion. Not long after the explosion the police and fire& rescue arrived. They found Alita in the car crying, they told her what she already knew, that it was a gas explosion and there were no survivors.
Authors note:
So what did you think of my first fanfic. Well review and I will tell you what happens to Alita.