Disclaimer: Well I don't own Gilmore girls. . So please don't sue me cause
I'm 16 and I have nothing worth value! And if I did I would give Jarred a
better character cause I think he is a good actor and the guy was just
given a bad story line!!! I hope when Dean and Rory break up his character
is given a fair chance!!!!^_^ Cause Dean and Rory should just be friends
there's no chemistry!!! But hey what do I know right once again only
sixteen!!!!
Paring: Hmmm let me think..????
Spoilers: Maybe. It does but doesn't follow the story line.
A/N: Well let me just say thank you thank you thank you too EVERYONE!!!!
Wow I never really thought this story would get some many reviews after
just two chapters. Well okay here is the thing I know I can't spell. Also I
have a hard time with the he his she him her cause they kinda look a like
so if anyone would like to proof read e-mail me! Be much appreciated!!! So
anywho on with the story!!!
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Chapter Three: That Same Old Feeling
//A girl and a guy can be just friends, but at one point or another they will fall for each other. Maybe temporarily, maybe at the wrong time, maybe too late, or maybe forever...//
She was walking away now. She had never scene it coming. Had never though it could happen. The fact that it did showed her how cruel life truly was. She took one step at a time. God how she hated coincidence. How irony seemed to sneak up on her and tear away at her heart. Not that there was much left but she figured she needed what she still had. She had been upset. Crying. Running. To busy to look. To busy to pay attention. To busy to notice. How could she be so dumb? So blind.
She mentally hit herself for thinking three months was enough time. Enough time to forget. To stop feeling. To stop wanting. She had though that when she would see him again it would mean nothing. She was wrong. Every inch of her wanted to feel him. To hold him. To know him. She looked back thinking how it could have happened.
She had been running away from her mom. How could her own mother not see it? The hurt. The lost for life, all in her eyes. Just lying on the table ready to be snatched up for endless questioning. She was running blind less. She didn't see him. He didn't see her. As she turned the corner her body slammed into something. Or someone. It was warm. Soft. Familiar. Almost right. When she looked up she saw him. Chocolate brown and sky blue. He was silent. She forgot she had been crying. She was lost in his eyes. When he blinked she came out of her trance and pulled away a little. His face twisted at the missed of contact. She looked at her shoes. Finally he cleared his throat.
"Your back I see." She nodded slowly not looking up. It hurt. Hurt so badly she wanted to die. "Rory," he put his hand under her chin and lifter her face. She looked at him shyly "why are you crying?" She sucked in a breath and closed her eyes.
His hands were so warm. His voice so strong. He took his thumb and wiped a tear away. She felt his hand cup her cheek and she leaned into it feeling the warm sensation. The comforting strokes. The loving touch. She felt the tears welling in her eyes as she remember she couldn't have this. Wasn't allowed this, by her perfect world standards. She suddenly jerked her face away and turned and left.
He just stood there with his outstretched hand being frozen where her face had once been. He followed her with his eyes as she left. Wanting to chase her. To hold her close. To kiss her senseless. To give himself up to her love. He didn't though. He was frozen still. His hand shaking as it lost the warmth of her skin to the cool air. He could only stare. She was walking away now.
A/N: Okay I really need feedback for this chapter. I really don't know if I like it. Hmmm I think it is missing something but I'm not sure. Oh boy!! Okay so please please please please review review!!! I will update faster if you do!!!! Also if I get lots of reviews you will all get a great present next chapter.^_^!!!! OH yeah thanx for the constructive criticism!!! Please not stupid flames that just make me feel bad!!! THANK YOU!!!!
Everything
Chapter Three: That Same Old Feeling
//A girl and a guy can be just friends, but at one point or another they will fall for each other. Maybe temporarily, maybe at the wrong time, maybe too late, or maybe forever...//
She was walking away now. She had never scene it coming. Had never though it could happen. The fact that it did showed her how cruel life truly was. She took one step at a time. God how she hated coincidence. How irony seemed to sneak up on her and tear away at her heart. Not that there was much left but she figured she needed what she still had. She had been upset. Crying. Running. To busy to look. To busy to pay attention. To busy to notice. How could she be so dumb? So blind.
She mentally hit herself for thinking three months was enough time. Enough time to forget. To stop feeling. To stop wanting. She had though that when she would see him again it would mean nothing. She was wrong. Every inch of her wanted to feel him. To hold him. To know him. She looked back thinking how it could have happened.
She had been running away from her mom. How could her own mother not see it? The hurt. The lost for life, all in her eyes. Just lying on the table ready to be snatched up for endless questioning. She was running blind less. She didn't see him. He didn't see her. As she turned the corner her body slammed into something. Or someone. It was warm. Soft. Familiar. Almost right. When she looked up she saw him. Chocolate brown and sky blue. He was silent. She forgot she had been crying. She was lost in his eyes. When he blinked she came out of her trance and pulled away a little. His face twisted at the missed of contact. She looked at her shoes. Finally he cleared his throat.
"Your back I see." She nodded slowly not looking up. It hurt. Hurt so badly she wanted to die. "Rory," he put his hand under her chin and lifter her face. She looked at him shyly "why are you crying?" She sucked in a breath and closed her eyes.
His hands were so warm. His voice so strong. He took his thumb and wiped a tear away. She felt his hand cup her cheek and she leaned into it feeling the warm sensation. The comforting strokes. The loving touch. She felt the tears welling in her eyes as she remember she couldn't have this. Wasn't allowed this, by her perfect world standards. She suddenly jerked her face away and turned and left.
He just stood there with his outstretched hand being frozen where her face had once been. He followed her with his eyes as she left. Wanting to chase her. To hold her close. To kiss her senseless. To give himself up to her love. He didn't though. He was frozen still. His hand shaking as it lost the warmth of her skin to the cool air. He could only stare. She was walking away now.
A/N: Okay I really need feedback for this chapter. I really don't know if I like it. Hmmm I think it is missing something but I'm not sure. Oh boy!! Okay so please please please please review review!!! I will update faster if you do!!!! Also if I get lots of reviews you will all get a great present next chapter.^_^!!!! OH yeah thanx for the constructive criticism!!! Please not stupid flames that just make me feel bad!!! THANK YOU!!!!