HI everyone... I just want to start out by saying hello and thank you
to all of my very faithful readers, like Rainydaze101 and Pixie Moon
Angel...they both have really great stories, and are both wonderful
authors, so go r/r their stories-Rainydaze101 has "Choices" and "Tears
All Over Tulsa" and Pixie Moon Angel (who in reality is my big sister
Angel Marquin-hey sis! Luv!) has "I'll Be That Girl" and a bunch more.
Actually, coming soon from her is "Greasers Go To Hawaii", and that's
where I make my grand old entrance.... the stories are somewhat
entwined-I think that's a word. And Vanillasky has the funniest darn
greaser parodies around, and everyone should read those, too...
Thanks for the great reviews everyone!
LoL... anyway... without anymore waiting (b/c we all know how horrible
that is LoL)... here is Ch. 5!
YaY!
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Angel stepped out of the shower, and grabbed her towel. She
dried off, and looked in the mirror. Pushing her hair out of her face,
she thought, 'You really did it this time, huh Angel? Sometime within
the next year, you'll be Mrs. John Cade.' She exhaled loudly. "What are
you DOING?!" she accidentaly said aloud-obviously a Marquin trait.
"Waiting for you to get your ass out of the shower, I'm dirty!" said
Jade with a laugh. Angel giggled and let her in.
Jade was standing outside, in Soda's favorite t-shirt (that
was inside out, AND backwards). She looked trampled. Hair everywhere,
lipstick smears all over her face. Angel burst into laughter at the
sight of her rumpled friend. "Did you have fun?" she said sarcastically.
"Haha, very funny... what do you think?" Jade replied as a smile slowly
spread across her face. "Well, it sure looks like Soda did!" They
cracked up laughing. "Anyway..." Angel started talking. "Did you guys
clean up after yourselves, or is my room trashed like last time?"
"No, not like last time... worse" Another giggle. "Why, did you expect
us to?" "Not really..." "Is there going to be food at this little
'close gathering of friends'" Jade moved her fingers in quotes, doing
a Dr. Evil impression. "I am STARVING after my little...escapades..."
Angel smiled. "Does pizza, pop, and chips count?" "Hell yea! Now, scoot,
cuz I gotta look presentable for the hoodlums tonight..." Angel stepped
out. "Just as long as you don't show up looking like that, we'll all be
happy!" Jade smirked as she gave Angel the bird and slammed the door.
Angel walked down the hallway to Heaven and Charity's room.
"Heaven, you up yet?" The door flew open, revealing Heaven-totally
unbruised.
"Oh my god, how? I mean, look at you! Your face! It's like,
fixed!" Angel stuttered at the sight of her sisters face. "Yes, back
to fabulous, thanks to the advancement of comsetics! Oh, and by the way,
I sorta borrowed your concealer, hope you don't mind." "Not at all, you
worked a miracle!" "Right.... what'd you need?" said Heaven boredly.
"Oh, I just wanted to see what you were wearing."
Heaven walked over to the closet, and pulled out a denim skirt
and a glitter lips shirt. "Why would you be wearing a long sleeved shirt
and a skirt?!" Heaven insantly became annoyed... her LIFE was fashion.
"Ok... FIRST OFF!-its a 3/4 length short... not long-sleeved, there is
a difference. And second off, it looks cute on me, and I'd like to look
nice. And third off, I overheard Dally tell Tim he was bringing his
brother, who's ABOUT my age"-Angelgasped at this-"and if he's cute, then
who knows?" Angel jumped off the bed. "He's bringing TAYLOR?! When'd he
get out of J.D.-WAIT A MINUTE! YOU are interested in Dally's little
brother, who you've never even seen?!" Heaven rolled her eyes. "It's
whom, not who, and if he looks anything like Dally, then HELL YEA, I'm
interested!" "Watch your mouth, Heaven... and hurry up and get dressed,
because I need your help picking out what I'm going to wear."
"What's this all about, anyway? It's all so sudden!" You'll see... don't
worry."
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
"Ok, everyone, I've got something important to say!" No one
heard Angel, they were all talking so loud. "Would ya'll shut the fuck
up? We have an announcement being made, and I'D like to hear it!"
yelled a very vibrant and refreshed Jade. "Yea!" yelled Joe, which
got a few laughs.
Everyone was silent as Angel stood up. "Ummm...." she stuttered
over her words. "Uh... oh, god-how do you say something like this?"
Angel looked to the floor, and to Johnny for back-up. Heaven could sense
something was going on. "Spill it already!" yelled the youngest Winston
buy, Taylor, from the couch beside Heaven and Dally. He punched Taylor
in the ribcage. Johnny came over to Angels side. "Do you want me to tell
them?" he said. She nodded.
"OK, listen up... keep your schedules clear for between now and
next August, cuz there's somewhere really important you all have to be."
He grabbed Angel's ringed hand and held it up for the slightly puzzled
Greasers to see. "Are you guys all brain-dead? WE'RE ENGAGED!"
The room exploded. Claire, Jade, Charity, and Heaven ran to
give Angel hugs, and gush over her diamond, while the guys took turns
punching Johnnys arms. "OH MY GOD!" Heaven was screeching over everyone
else. Soda walked around the crowd and asked Johhny, "Hey, is this an
honest wedding, or do you like... have to?" Johnny looked exasperatedly
at his friend. "What the hell are you talking about?" "I mean, is she
pregnant?"
Everyone stopped and stared at Soda. Angel walked out and left
everyone speechless. "Way to go... that was so out of line, Soda!"
yelled Johnny as he turned to run after her. "That's TWICE today!"
said Jade, holding up two fingers as she too walked out.
"WHAT?! What'd I do now? Man, it was just a question!" Soda
was confused. "Ok-Soda, you gotta work on your attitude! What's your
problem today?" Everyone turned to look at Dally as he spoke, and since
he never spoke like this, they all wanted to savor the moment.
"What's my problem? What's ya'lls problem? Evryone takes everything
so goddamn personally!" "Angel doesn't deserve to be talked about like
that, and you FUCKING KNOW IT, SODA!" Dally stood up, shoved his chair
across the room, and walked out, slamming the door"
Everyone knew that Soda felt bad. They all looked up to Dally,
and when Dally was pissed at you... the dissapointment was unbearable.
Claie decided to take control. "Umm... I'm not sure what's goin'
on, so maybe you guys should go." Heaven stood up. "No, let me go
check on Angel, and find out what's going on." She left the couch, and
her spot next to Taylor. He watched her go. Pony shot him dirty looks
the whole time.
A few minutes later, Heaven came back down. "Sorry, everyone,
but they aren't answering the door-you guys might wanna go." She came
down and stood in front of Taylor. "So, see ya around?" she said, very
flirtatiously. "I guess I had better go look for Dally." He put his arms
around her waist as hers encircled his neck. "I guess" she replied.
"So when are you coming back, Taylor?" "When do you want me too?"
"Soon... very so-" Heaven didn't finish, because she was cut off by
Taylors lips on hers. She closed her eyes. Taylor dipped her as though
they were dancing, and if she wasn't preoccupied, she'd have laughed.
He pulled her back up and pulled away.
"I hope that was ok." he said. "Yea... it was!" She replied with
a stupid school girl grin. "Is this?" This time, Heaven kissed him.
They probably would have sat on the couch, but they were interrupted.
Everyone had dispersed, save Heaven, Taylor, and Pony. Heaven kissing
Taylor back was the last straw, as Pony saw it, and he jumped out of
his chair, and slammed into them as he head quickly for the backdoor.
"What the fu-" "Don't, Taylor. I'll go and talk to him... you
gotta go find Dally." "Well, can I call you? Maybe we could go out
sometime..." "I'd like that" she said grinning. "Call me tommorrow."
Heaven giggled to herself as she wrote down the number and handed it to
him. "Until then..." Taylor said as he stuffed it into his pocket and
gave her one last kiss. He smiled, waved, and walked out the door.
"Bye..." Heaven whispered as it shut.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
"Pony, what the hell was that? Why did you do that?" Heaven
threw the back screendoor open, and let it slam back into place as
she flew down the steps into the cold November air to confront Pony.
"Heaven, listen to me... I feel like it is, like, my job, my
responsibility to watch over you, and I KNOW that Taylors no good for
you! He'll only hurt you!" Heaven finally got to where Pony was standing,
and she shoved him as hard as she could. 'Shes strong for a girl!'
thought Pony as he caught himself from falling from the shove. "Would
you let me judge who I date? I HAD a father-and he died a long time ago!
I don't need you to just step up and all of a sudden take his place!"
These words cut through Ponys heart like a knife. He moved
forward to place a hand on her shoulder, but she just pushed it off.
"Don't touch me!" she yelled. He grabbed her firmly. "Listen to me,
Heaven! He's cheated on pretty much all of his girlfriends! He's just
like Dally, and we ALL know what Dally uses his women for! He's just
going to do the same to you, so PLEASE, Heaven-just just don't let him
make you his next conquest." She sucked in her breath. "Do you REALLY
think I am that STUPID?! I just spent an hour and a half with him, just
talking, and you know WHAT? HE REALLY LIKES ME! SO YOU CAN JUST BUTT
THE HELL OUT!" She tried to rip herself from his grip, but he stopped
her. "Heaven, listen! Would you just look at this rationally for a-"
Heaven slapped him across the jaw. "Rule #1, Pony. NEVER lay a finger
on me, or next time, you'll lose a ball. And rule #2-Do not patronize
me. Leave me the fuck alone, or I swear to the gods I will turn your
whole world upside-down." she said through gritted teeth. She turned
and walked into the house, shaking with anger.
Ponyboy rubbed his cheek where she had hit him-it stung badly
at the touch of his fingers. He moved to follow her, but the
stining sensation in his cheek influenced him to just leave. He jumped
over the fence, and walked down the street.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Ok, what'd ya'll think? I am typing this from my notebook, and after
re-reading it, I realize that Heaven comes off as sort of a bitch, but
she just that way-it's a Marquin thing. But PLEASE review this chapter!
As for me, I am going to get started on getting chapter 6 up.
ALSO-I am currently working on my next story called "Happy Birthday,
Heaven!" so if you guys have anything you'd like to see happen in that,
let me know thru an anonymous review or email me at
HeavenLMarquin@yahoo.com
Two Fingerz All,
¥~*Rockabye*~¥
to all of my very faithful readers, like Rainydaze101 and Pixie Moon
Angel...they both have really great stories, and are both wonderful
authors, so go r/r their stories-Rainydaze101 has "Choices" and "Tears
All Over Tulsa" and Pixie Moon Angel (who in reality is my big sister
Angel Marquin-hey sis! Luv!) has "I'll Be That Girl" and a bunch more.
Actually, coming soon from her is "Greasers Go To Hawaii", and that's
where I make my grand old entrance.... the stories are somewhat
entwined-I think that's a word. And Vanillasky has the funniest darn
greaser parodies around, and everyone should read those, too...
Thanks for the great reviews everyone!
LoL... anyway... without anymore waiting (b/c we all know how horrible
that is LoL)... here is Ch. 5!
YaY!
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Angel stepped out of the shower, and grabbed her towel. She
dried off, and looked in the mirror. Pushing her hair out of her face,
she thought, 'You really did it this time, huh Angel? Sometime within
the next year, you'll be Mrs. John Cade.' She exhaled loudly. "What are
you DOING?!" she accidentaly said aloud-obviously a Marquin trait.
"Waiting for you to get your ass out of the shower, I'm dirty!" said
Jade with a laugh. Angel giggled and let her in.
Jade was standing outside, in Soda's favorite t-shirt (that
was inside out, AND backwards). She looked trampled. Hair everywhere,
lipstick smears all over her face. Angel burst into laughter at the
sight of her rumpled friend. "Did you have fun?" she said sarcastically.
"Haha, very funny... what do you think?" Jade replied as a smile slowly
spread across her face. "Well, it sure looks like Soda did!" They
cracked up laughing. "Anyway..." Angel started talking. "Did you guys
clean up after yourselves, or is my room trashed like last time?"
"No, not like last time... worse" Another giggle. "Why, did you expect
us to?" "Not really..." "Is there going to be food at this little
'close gathering of friends'" Jade moved her fingers in quotes, doing
a Dr. Evil impression. "I am STARVING after my little...escapades..."
Angel smiled. "Does pizza, pop, and chips count?" "Hell yea! Now, scoot,
cuz I gotta look presentable for the hoodlums tonight..." Angel stepped
out. "Just as long as you don't show up looking like that, we'll all be
happy!" Jade smirked as she gave Angel the bird and slammed the door.
Angel walked down the hallway to Heaven and Charity's room.
"Heaven, you up yet?" The door flew open, revealing Heaven-totally
unbruised.
"Oh my god, how? I mean, look at you! Your face! It's like,
fixed!" Angel stuttered at the sight of her sisters face. "Yes, back
to fabulous, thanks to the advancement of comsetics! Oh, and by the way,
I sorta borrowed your concealer, hope you don't mind." "Not at all, you
worked a miracle!" "Right.... what'd you need?" said Heaven boredly.
"Oh, I just wanted to see what you were wearing."
Heaven walked over to the closet, and pulled out a denim skirt
and a glitter lips shirt. "Why would you be wearing a long sleeved shirt
and a skirt?!" Heaven insantly became annoyed... her LIFE was fashion.
"Ok... FIRST OFF!-its a 3/4 length short... not long-sleeved, there is
a difference. And second off, it looks cute on me, and I'd like to look
nice. And third off, I overheard Dally tell Tim he was bringing his
brother, who's ABOUT my age"-Angelgasped at this-"and if he's cute, then
who knows?" Angel jumped off the bed. "He's bringing TAYLOR?! When'd he
get out of J.D.-WAIT A MINUTE! YOU are interested in Dally's little
brother, who you've never even seen?!" Heaven rolled her eyes. "It's
whom, not who, and if he looks anything like Dally, then HELL YEA, I'm
interested!" "Watch your mouth, Heaven... and hurry up and get dressed,
because I need your help picking out what I'm going to wear."
"What's this all about, anyway? It's all so sudden!" You'll see... don't
worry."
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
"Ok, everyone, I've got something important to say!" No one
heard Angel, they were all talking so loud. "Would ya'll shut the fuck
up? We have an announcement being made, and I'D like to hear it!"
yelled a very vibrant and refreshed Jade. "Yea!" yelled Joe, which
got a few laughs.
Everyone was silent as Angel stood up. "Ummm...." she stuttered
over her words. "Uh... oh, god-how do you say something like this?"
Angel looked to the floor, and to Johnny for back-up. Heaven could sense
something was going on. "Spill it already!" yelled the youngest Winston
buy, Taylor, from the couch beside Heaven and Dally. He punched Taylor
in the ribcage. Johnny came over to Angels side. "Do you want me to tell
them?" he said. She nodded.
"OK, listen up... keep your schedules clear for between now and
next August, cuz there's somewhere really important you all have to be."
He grabbed Angel's ringed hand and held it up for the slightly puzzled
Greasers to see. "Are you guys all brain-dead? WE'RE ENGAGED!"
The room exploded. Claire, Jade, Charity, and Heaven ran to
give Angel hugs, and gush over her diamond, while the guys took turns
punching Johnnys arms. "OH MY GOD!" Heaven was screeching over everyone
else. Soda walked around the crowd and asked Johhny, "Hey, is this an
honest wedding, or do you like... have to?" Johnny looked exasperatedly
at his friend. "What the hell are you talking about?" "I mean, is she
pregnant?"
Everyone stopped and stared at Soda. Angel walked out and left
everyone speechless. "Way to go... that was so out of line, Soda!"
yelled Johnny as he turned to run after her. "That's TWICE today!"
said Jade, holding up two fingers as she too walked out.
"WHAT?! What'd I do now? Man, it was just a question!" Soda
was confused. "Ok-Soda, you gotta work on your attitude! What's your
problem today?" Everyone turned to look at Dally as he spoke, and since
he never spoke like this, they all wanted to savor the moment.
"What's my problem? What's ya'lls problem? Evryone takes everything
so goddamn personally!" "Angel doesn't deserve to be talked about like
that, and you FUCKING KNOW IT, SODA!" Dally stood up, shoved his chair
across the room, and walked out, slamming the door"
Everyone knew that Soda felt bad. They all looked up to Dally,
and when Dally was pissed at you... the dissapointment was unbearable.
Claie decided to take control. "Umm... I'm not sure what's goin'
on, so maybe you guys should go." Heaven stood up. "No, let me go
check on Angel, and find out what's going on." She left the couch, and
her spot next to Taylor. He watched her go. Pony shot him dirty looks
the whole time.
A few minutes later, Heaven came back down. "Sorry, everyone,
but they aren't answering the door-you guys might wanna go." She came
down and stood in front of Taylor. "So, see ya around?" she said, very
flirtatiously. "I guess I had better go look for Dally." He put his arms
around her waist as hers encircled his neck. "I guess" she replied.
"So when are you coming back, Taylor?" "When do you want me too?"
"Soon... very so-" Heaven didn't finish, because she was cut off by
Taylors lips on hers. She closed her eyes. Taylor dipped her as though
they were dancing, and if she wasn't preoccupied, she'd have laughed.
He pulled her back up and pulled away.
"I hope that was ok." he said. "Yea... it was!" She replied with
a stupid school girl grin. "Is this?" This time, Heaven kissed him.
They probably would have sat on the couch, but they were interrupted.
Everyone had dispersed, save Heaven, Taylor, and Pony. Heaven kissing
Taylor back was the last straw, as Pony saw it, and he jumped out of
his chair, and slammed into them as he head quickly for the backdoor.
"What the fu-" "Don't, Taylor. I'll go and talk to him... you
gotta go find Dally." "Well, can I call you? Maybe we could go out
sometime..." "I'd like that" she said grinning. "Call me tommorrow."
Heaven giggled to herself as she wrote down the number and handed it to
him. "Until then..." Taylor said as he stuffed it into his pocket and
gave her one last kiss. He smiled, waved, and walked out the door.
"Bye..." Heaven whispered as it shut.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
"Pony, what the hell was that? Why did you do that?" Heaven
threw the back screendoor open, and let it slam back into place as
she flew down the steps into the cold November air to confront Pony.
"Heaven, listen to me... I feel like it is, like, my job, my
responsibility to watch over you, and I KNOW that Taylors no good for
you! He'll only hurt you!" Heaven finally got to where Pony was standing,
and she shoved him as hard as she could. 'Shes strong for a girl!'
thought Pony as he caught himself from falling from the shove. "Would
you let me judge who I date? I HAD a father-and he died a long time ago!
I don't need you to just step up and all of a sudden take his place!"
These words cut through Ponys heart like a knife. He moved
forward to place a hand on her shoulder, but she just pushed it off.
"Don't touch me!" she yelled. He grabbed her firmly. "Listen to me,
Heaven! He's cheated on pretty much all of his girlfriends! He's just
like Dally, and we ALL know what Dally uses his women for! He's just
going to do the same to you, so PLEASE, Heaven-just just don't let him
make you his next conquest." She sucked in her breath. "Do you REALLY
think I am that STUPID?! I just spent an hour and a half with him, just
talking, and you know WHAT? HE REALLY LIKES ME! SO YOU CAN JUST BUTT
THE HELL OUT!" She tried to rip herself from his grip, but he stopped
her. "Heaven, listen! Would you just look at this rationally for a-"
Heaven slapped him across the jaw. "Rule #1, Pony. NEVER lay a finger
on me, or next time, you'll lose a ball. And rule #2-Do not patronize
me. Leave me the fuck alone, or I swear to the gods I will turn your
whole world upside-down." she said through gritted teeth. She turned
and walked into the house, shaking with anger.
Ponyboy rubbed his cheek where she had hit him-it stung badly
at the touch of his fingers. He moved to follow her, but the
stining sensation in his cheek influenced him to just leave. He jumped
over the fence, and walked down the street.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Ok, what'd ya'll think? I am typing this from my notebook, and after
re-reading it, I realize that Heaven comes off as sort of a bitch, but
she just that way-it's a Marquin thing. But PLEASE review this chapter!
As for me, I am going to get started on getting chapter 6 up.
ALSO-I am currently working on my next story called "Happy Birthday,
Heaven!" so if you guys have anything you'd like to see happen in that,
let me know thru an anonymous review or email me at
HeavenLMarquin@yahoo.com
Two Fingerz All,
¥~*Rockabye*~¥
