O.K. everyone here is the 3rd chapter, the chapter you've been asking for.
IT'S A LEMON!!!!! So if the thought of reading about sex is offensive to
you PLEASE DO NOT READ THIS CHAPTER!!!
This is my first lemon so please let me know what you think or how you
think I might be able to write it better.
AGAIN THIS IS A LEMON, PLEASE DON'T READ, IF THAT BOTHERS YOU IN ANY WAY. DON'T SAY YOU WERE NOT WARNED!!
******
The rational part of Pan's brain drank in this male's appearance. To put it bluntly he was absolutely gorgeous!
His hair, a brownish-red, fell to just below his shoulder in length, and spiked out in different directions with a few locks falling into his eyes. He was lean and muscular, not an inch of fat on him. His sculpted armor emphasizing his already impressive physic. This male towered over her five foot seven inches by more than two feet, making him at least well over seven feet tall! But what stood out the most about him was not his impressive physical appearance or even his height, but his eyes! His eyes were a deep indigo blue, almost purple in color! It was an unusual color in humans let alone saiyans! Most saiyans had brown or even black eyes, but never during her many battles against the invaders had she seen one with blue eyes!
Meanwhile the irrational, animalistic, base part of her brain screamed at her to mate him, to toss him to the bed below her and satisfy her lusts!
Pan noticed this male's unsure gaze aimed her way; he looked as if he would bolt at any moment and run through the door! It would have been funny if the raging need in her body hadn't been in control of her at the moment.
With a low growl, a feral grin and her eyes at a seductive half-mast Pan got up off the bed and sauntered her way over to stand before him. She forced her-self to move slowly, as she placed both her hands on his cheeks, just below his ears and slid both hands behind his head and interlocked her fingers. Gazing up into his unusually colored eyes she saw shock and then.interest.
She used her laced fingers to force his head to her level, and with a small purr placed her lips upon his. She traced an outline of his lips with her tongue, begging for entrance, when he wouldn't relent she began to gently flick his upper lip with the tip of her tongue, all the while purring in the back of her throat, instinctively knowing this would be an enticement no Saiyan male could resist, and just to add to the temptation Pan unwrapped her tail from around her waist and began to gently stroke his bare neck with just the tip.
Finally with a slight growl he relented and allowed her access! Their tongues met in a fierce battle for dominance. Tangling and retreating, flicking and biting, and much to her surprise, when he placed his hands on her hips in a firm grip and pulled her close to him allowing her to feel his excitement, and deepening the kiss, he took control! "YES!!!" Was her last coherent though for quite some time, as all she could do now was follow her instincts and feel!
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Tholen watched her approach with a wary gaze; he could smell the desire rolling off her in waves. The smell alone almost enough to make him give in to the instinctive urges raging through his body..almost!
Watching, as with a small growl, an animalistic grin and pure seduction in her eyes the female slowly approached him. "Gods Riesa I am soooo gonna get you for this!" he thought with a quick glance towards the locked door, before he felt the female place her hands on his face causing him to look down into her eyes.
Tholen allowed his eyes a quick perusal of the women attempting to seduce him and for the first time since this debacle began he realized just how beautiful she was.
Her chocolate brown eyes were sparkling with fever and a need that only he could satisfy. With hair falling well below her shoulders and nearly to her waist that was coal black in color and shimmered reflecting the harsh lighting in the small chamber. Her figure lithe and curved in all the right places, with high firm breasts that would be a pleasant handful. In other words she wasn't just beautiful, she was stunning!
Suddenly she used her hold on his neck to pull him downward and locked her lips over his in an ardent kiss all the while purring, causing a pleasant vibration on his lips. Couple the purring with the gentle strokes of the tip of her tail against his neck and the persistent flicking of his closed lips with her tongue and he gave in. Tholen placed his hands upon her hips and pulled her snug against him allowing her to feel his growing excitement.
Knowing unconsciously that this wouldn't be the calm, or gentle mating that was always shared between Hesha and himself, but a savage and brutal meeting of two passionate animals!
Tholen deepened the quickly approaching brutal kiss, using his sharp canine teeth to nip and bit at her lips, causing the blood to flow from the small cuts he inflicted upon her. Pausing he pulled back from the deep kiss to lick at her lips, pulling in the sweet taste of her blood, then taking her bottom lip into his mouth to suck at the open wounds there.
As he did this, the now whimpering female in his arms suddenly pulled out of his embrace. Startled by the sudden turn of events Tholen quirked and eyebrow up in confusion, but the confusion quickly turned to amusement as she was glaring at his armor as if it offended her!
Instead of waiting for him to remove it she grasped the vest like armor by the collar of the breastplate and ripped it from his chest as if it were nothing! The force of the pull causing him to jerk forward, and then crash to the floor, as he was unprepared for the impulsive move.
Quickly strattling his back the female made quick work of his uniforms' under garments, and soon he lay beneath her completely naked and face down as she nipped and bit the back of his neck and shoulders causing the blood to trickle from the small wounds. The female paused her biting to lap at the blood flowing down his back, both of them purring their pleasure in the action.
Disliking his current position Tholen wrapped his thick brown tail around her waist and tightened his appendage, then with a quick flick tossed the female from his back and against a nearby wall, hissing in pleasure/pain as her fingernails raked his back in resistance to the movement, causing bloody welts to appear.
As he lifted himself up to his hands and knees he noticed that the women had pulled herself up into the same position and was making her way across the room towards him, her eyes filled with a primal lust, her tail swaying gently behind her, "pure seduction in motion" he thought.
Lashing his tail violently behind him indicating his excitement, Tholen began to stalk his way towards her also on hands and knees. Never braking eye contact, his indigo eyes now holding the same animalistic intent as her own, her needs now becoming his, her wants now his own!
The two met in the middle, male eyeing female, female eyeing male. Indigo eyes meeting brown, each wanting the same thing.
After only a moment's hesitation on his part, Tholen quickly brought his right hand up and over the back of her head grasping her hair in his fist. Wrapping her hair around his hand he pulled her onto her back, and beneath him. With his left hand he hastily ripped her cloths from her body.
Moaning her surrender she arched her back begging for his touch, and Tholen relented by fondling her ample breasts in his large hand and bending his head to suckle at the other, occasionally pinching her pert nipple between his thumb and forefinger roughly.
Swirling his tongue around the nipple he suckled at, he listened to her pleas and whimpers. Trailing his mouth downward on her breast Tholen bit down savagely on its bottom slope, causing her to scream in pain, then again in satisfaction as his tongue lapped at the blood flow.
The female deciding it was her turn to torture him, pushed him off and then beneath her as best she could with her hair wrapped in his fist! Strattling his body and trailing a series of opened mouth kisses down his neck and to his pecs she returned the favor and twirled her tongue around his flat nipple, and then kissed her way to his naval where she swirled her tongue around his bellybutton causing him to moan in ecstasy, and the scream in pain as she viciously bit into the area just below that with an inhuman growl. Tholen tossed his head side to side in a violent frenzy of euphoria as he felt her soft mouth begin to suck at the open injury!
Tightening his grip on her hair with a low snarl, Tholen pulled her off of her feast of him, and again below him. Crawling up her body he situated himself atop her and with his right hand still wrapped in her raven hair tugged her head back baring her throat to him, and bestowing a gentle out of place kiss upon her bared throat, reassuring the female beneath him he would only hurt her as much as she would allow. With an at ease purr she relaxed underneath him unconsciously telling him she was willing for anything he had in store. A satisfied smirk on his lips he tugged her hair again with his right hand letting her know he understood her and with his left he pulled her already parted thighs even further apart.
Pulling one of her legs up and around his hip he began to use his free hand to massage her already wet nether regions.
The female moaned loud and long in his ear, betraying her need. Putting her arms around him and embracing him fully, raking her fingers down his back in passion and wrapping her other leg around his waist she whimpered in impatience. Inserting two fingers into her to test her readiness, causing her to whimper even more, he found her more than ready.
Adjusting his position, Tholen thrust his pelvis forward and entered the women below him in a semi brutal possession.
Eyes wide the female screamed in both pain and pleasure at this movement, then as he began to move within her it turned to pure pleasure! Mimicking his motions she became his mirror image. Thrusting her hips against him in a rhythm more ancient then life itself, pulling away as he did, thrusting as he did.
Both moaning their pleasure as Tholen increased the pace of his thrusts to match the need raging in his body. Placing his bared teeth against her neck, but never biting her there, his pace picked up even more. The women under him also baring her teeth against his neck matched him thrust for thrust.
Soon the only sounds that they could hear were there own impassioned cries, grunts and moans, as they each sought their own satisfaction.
Soon the women beneath him thru her head back and screamed her release quickly followed by Tholen arching his back and tossing his head back, using his still free hand to prop himself up trying to deepen his last thrust, as he yelled out his orgasm!
Collapsing on the female below him panting, Tholen rested a few seconds before rolling to the side and gathering her into his arms and pulling her close. "That was the most intense experience of my life!" he thought to himself stroking her sweat soaked back gently. Looking over at the bed on the far wall, he shook his head in amusement, as they were still on the floor! "We never even made it that far!" Tholen thought in amazement and made a mental note to thank Riesa later as he dropped off to sleep, holding the still quivering female in his arms. Her head resting on his chest, he felt her tail wrap itself around the arm stroking her back, his tail wrapping its way around her upper thigh in response, not even realizing his hand was still wrapped in her long hair.
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"Oh my god, Oh my god, OH MY GOD!!!" Pan mentally screamed as her body, still trembling in pleasure, was gathered into this strange male's arms. She rested her perspiration soaked head on his chest, not having much of an option in the matter, as her hair was still wrapped around his hand. The hand that was stroking her back gently, felt wonderful, and she unconsciously wrapped her tail around his arm in response to the petting, and felt his tail twine its self around her upper thigh. She was too tired to voice her appreciation of the movements of his hand, or even to move at all for that matter!
She finely felt normal, albeit extremely tired, but the intense painful throbbing was gone and fever no longer racked her body. "So tired!" Pan said to herself, but before exhaustion could take her, her last coherent thought was "Oh my god!! I don't even know his name!!!!"
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A/N: Soooooo what did you guys think of the very first lemon I have ever written? To intense..not intense enough? Let me know! PLEASE!!! Any questions to this or other chapters feel free to ask. Also if anything confuses you please tell me what it is so that I can (1) either explain it to you a little better or (2) rewrite the chapter to explain the situation better.
Also someone asked about Kakkarot's (Goku's) OOC ness, O.K this is an A/U in which Goku wasn't sent to earth as a child, but as an adult in his late 20's early 30's. So he was raised by saiyans, to be a saiyan, and think like a saiyan, this will be explained more in later chapters so keep an eye out!
I wrote in the last chapter that I was thinking of writing Kakkarot and Chi Chi's story & wanted to know if anyone would be interested. So please let me know if you would like to read something like that! Please???
I am starting a mailing list to let people know when I am updating my fics. If you would like to be included please e-mail me at NIGHTSCREAM452@HOTMAIL.COM OR see my bio page with my e-mail address on it and let me know you want to be added.
A big hug to the following people how reviewed my last chapter:
Vegeta Goddess (Thank you so much!!!! And you know what for!) Veovixa Majin Pan Evil Child (She wants to post it on her web site!! Jumping up and down excitedly!!!) Caged Bird Alia nights Kuti-pan Xing Pfefi X Man-in-Darkness Ills Devilstitan Miroku
Thanks bunches everyone!
AGAIN THIS IS A LEMON, PLEASE DON'T READ, IF THAT BOTHERS YOU IN ANY WAY. DON'T SAY YOU WERE NOT WARNED!!
******
The rational part of Pan's brain drank in this male's appearance. To put it bluntly he was absolutely gorgeous!
His hair, a brownish-red, fell to just below his shoulder in length, and spiked out in different directions with a few locks falling into his eyes. He was lean and muscular, not an inch of fat on him. His sculpted armor emphasizing his already impressive physic. This male towered over her five foot seven inches by more than two feet, making him at least well over seven feet tall! But what stood out the most about him was not his impressive physical appearance or even his height, but his eyes! His eyes were a deep indigo blue, almost purple in color! It was an unusual color in humans let alone saiyans! Most saiyans had brown or even black eyes, but never during her many battles against the invaders had she seen one with blue eyes!
Meanwhile the irrational, animalistic, base part of her brain screamed at her to mate him, to toss him to the bed below her and satisfy her lusts!
Pan noticed this male's unsure gaze aimed her way; he looked as if he would bolt at any moment and run through the door! It would have been funny if the raging need in her body hadn't been in control of her at the moment.
With a low growl, a feral grin and her eyes at a seductive half-mast Pan got up off the bed and sauntered her way over to stand before him. She forced her-self to move slowly, as she placed both her hands on his cheeks, just below his ears and slid both hands behind his head and interlocked her fingers. Gazing up into his unusually colored eyes she saw shock and then.interest.
She used her laced fingers to force his head to her level, and with a small purr placed her lips upon his. She traced an outline of his lips with her tongue, begging for entrance, when he wouldn't relent she began to gently flick his upper lip with the tip of her tongue, all the while purring in the back of her throat, instinctively knowing this would be an enticement no Saiyan male could resist, and just to add to the temptation Pan unwrapped her tail from around her waist and began to gently stroke his bare neck with just the tip.
Finally with a slight growl he relented and allowed her access! Their tongues met in a fierce battle for dominance. Tangling and retreating, flicking and biting, and much to her surprise, when he placed his hands on her hips in a firm grip and pulled her close to him allowing her to feel his excitement, and deepening the kiss, he took control! "YES!!!" Was her last coherent though for quite some time, as all she could do now was follow her instincts and feel!
***********
Tholen watched her approach with a wary gaze; he could smell the desire rolling off her in waves. The smell alone almost enough to make him give in to the instinctive urges raging through his body..almost!
Watching, as with a small growl, an animalistic grin and pure seduction in her eyes the female slowly approached him. "Gods Riesa I am soooo gonna get you for this!" he thought with a quick glance towards the locked door, before he felt the female place her hands on his face causing him to look down into her eyes.
Tholen allowed his eyes a quick perusal of the women attempting to seduce him and for the first time since this debacle began he realized just how beautiful she was.
Her chocolate brown eyes were sparkling with fever and a need that only he could satisfy. With hair falling well below her shoulders and nearly to her waist that was coal black in color and shimmered reflecting the harsh lighting in the small chamber. Her figure lithe and curved in all the right places, with high firm breasts that would be a pleasant handful. In other words she wasn't just beautiful, she was stunning!
Suddenly she used her hold on his neck to pull him downward and locked her lips over his in an ardent kiss all the while purring, causing a pleasant vibration on his lips. Couple the purring with the gentle strokes of the tip of her tail against his neck and the persistent flicking of his closed lips with her tongue and he gave in. Tholen placed his hands upon her hips and pulled her snug against him allowing her to feel his growing excitement.
Knowing unconsciously that this wouldn't be the calm, or gentle mating that was always shared between Hesha and himself, but a savage and brutal meeting of two passionate animals!
Tholen deepened the quickly approaching brutal kiss, using his sharp canine teeth to nip and bit at her lips, causing the blood to flow from the small cuts he inflicted upon her. Pausing he pulled back from the deep kiss to lick at her lips, pulling in the sweet taste of her blood, then taking her bottom lip into his mouth to suck at the open wounds there.
As he did this, the now whimpering female in his arms suddenly pulled out of his embrace. Startled by the sudden turn of events Tholen quirked and eyebrow up in confusion, but the confusion quickly turned to amusement as she was glaring at his armor as if it offended her!
Instead of waiting for him to remove it she grasped the vest like armor by the collar of the breastplate and ripped it from his chest as if it were nothing! The force of the pull causing him to jerk forward, and then crash to the floor, as he was unprepared for the impulsive move.
Quickly strattling his back the female made quick work of his uniforms' under garments, and soon he lay beneath her completely naked and face down as she nipped and bit the back of his neck and shoulders causing the blood to trickle from the small wounds. The female paused her biting to lap at the blood flowing down his back, both of them purring their pleasure in the action.
Disliking his current position Tholen wrapped his thick brown tail around her waist and tightened his appendage, then with a quick flick tossed the female from his back and against a nearby wall, hissing in pleasure/pain as her fingernails raked his back in resistance to the movement, causing bloody welts to appear.
As he lifted himself up to his hands and knees he noticed that the women had pulled herself up into the same position and was making her way across the room towards him, her eyes filled with a primal lust, her tail swaying gently behind her, "pure seduction in motion" he thought.
Lashing his tail violently behind him indicating his excitement, Tholen began to stalk his way towards her also on hands and knees. Never braking eye contact, his indigo eyes now holding the same animalistic intent as her own, her needs now becoming his, her wants now his own!
The two met in the middle, male eyeing female, female eyeing male. Indigo eyes meeting brown, each wanting the same thing.
After only a moment's hesitation on his part, Tholen quickly brought his right hand up and over the back of her head grasping her hair in his fist. Wrapping her hair around his hand he pulled her onto her back, and beneath him. With his left hand he hastily ripped her cloths from her body.
Moaning her surrender she arched her back begging for his touch, and Tholen relented by fondling her ample breasts in his large hand and bending his head to suckle at the other, occasionally pinching her pert nipple between his thumb and forefinger roughly.
Swirling his tongue around the nipple he suckled at, he listened to her pleas and whimpers. Trailing his mouth downward on her breast Tholen bit down savagely on its bottom slope, causing her to scream in pain, then again in satisfaction as his tongue lapped at the blood flow.
The female deciding it was her turn to torture him, pushed him off and then beneath her as best she could with her hair wrapped in his fist! Strattling his body and trailing a series of opened mouth kisses down his neck and to his pecs she returned the favor and twirled her tongue around his flat nipple, and then kissed her way to his naval where she swirled her tongue around his bellybutton causing him to moan in ecstasy, and the scream in pain as she viciously bit into the area just below that with an inhuman growl. Tholen tossed his head side to side in a violent frenzy of euphoria as he felt her soft mouth begin to suck at the open injury!
Tightening his grip on her hair with a low snarl, Tholen pulled her off of her feast of him, and again below him. Crawling up her body he situated himself atop her and with his right hand still wrapped in her raven hair tugged her head back baring her throat to him, and bestowing a gentle out of place kiss upon her bared throat, reassuring the female beneath him he would only hurt her as much as she would allow. With an at ease purr she relaxed underneath him unconsciously telling him she was willing for anything he had in store. A satisfied smirk on his lips he tugged her hair again with his right hand letting her know he understood her and with his left he pulled her already parted thighs even further apart.
Pulling one of her legs up and around his hip he began to use his free hand to massage her already wet nether regions.
The female moaned loud and long in his ear, betraying her need. Putting her arms around him and embracing him fully, raking her fingers down his back in passion and wrapping her other leg around his waist she whimpered in impatience. Inserting two fingers into her to test her readiness, causing her to whimper even more, he found her more than ready.
Adjusting his position, Tholen thrust his pelvis forward and entered the women below him in a semi brutal possession.
Eyes wide the female screamed in both pain and pleasure at this movement, then as he began to move within her it turned to pure pleasure! Mimicking his motions she became his mirror image. Thrusting her hips against him in a rhythm more ancient then life itself, pulling away as he did, thrusting as he did.
Both moaning their pleasure as Tholen increased the pace of his thrusts to match the need raging in his body. Placing his bared teeth against her neck, but never biting her there, his pace picked up even more. The women under him also baring her teeth against his neck matched him thrust for thrust.
Soon the only sounds that they could hear were there own impassioned cries, grunts and moans, as they each sought their own satisfaction.
Soon the women beneath him thru her head back and screamed her release quickly followed by Tholen arching his back and tossing his head back, using his still free hand to prop himself up trying to deepen his last thrust, as he yelled out his orgasm!
Collapsing on the female below him panting, Tholen rested a few seconds before rolling to the side and gathering her into his arms and pulling her close. "That was the most intense experience of my life!" he thought to himself stroking her sweat soaked back gently. Looking over at the bed on the far wall, he shook his head in amusement, as they were still on the floor! "We never even made it that far!" Tholen thought in amazement and made a mental note to thank Riesa later as he dropped off to sleep, holding the still quivering female in his arms. Her head resting on his chest, he felt her tail wrap itself around the arm stroking her back, his tail wrapping its way around her upper thigh in response, not even realizing his hand was still wrapped in her long hair.
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"Oh my god, Oh my god, OH MY GOD!!!" Pan mentally screamed as her body, still trembling in pleasure, was gathered into this strange male's arms. She rested her perspiration soaked head on his chest, not having much of an option in the matter, as her hair was still wrapped around his hand. The hand that was stroking her back gently, felt wonderful, and she unconsciously wrapped her tail around his arm in response to the petting, and felt his tail twine its self around her upper thigh. She was too tired to voice her appreciation of the movements of his hand, or even to move at all for that matter!
She finely felt normal, albeit extremely tired, but the intense painful throbbing was gone and fever no longer racked her body. "So tired!" Pan said to herself, but before exhaustion could take her, her last coherent thought was "Oh my god!! I don't even know his name!!!!"
******
A/N: Soooooo what did you guys think of the very first lemon I have ever written? To intense..not intense enough? Let me know! PLEASE!!! Any questions to this or other chapters feel free to ask. Also if anything confuses you please tell me what it is so that I can (1) either explain it to you a little better or (2) rewrite the chapter to explain the situation better.
Also someone asked about Kakkarot's (Goku's) OOC ness, O.K this is an A/U in which Goku wasn't sent to earth as a child, but as an adult in his late 20's early 30's. So he was raised by saiyans, to be a saiyan, and think like a saiyan, this will be explained more in later chapters so keep an eye out!
I wrote in the last chapter that I was thinking of writing Kakkarot and Chi Chi's story & wanted to know if anyone would be interested. So please let me know if you would like to read something like that! Please???
I am starting a mailing list to let people know when I am updating my fics. If you would like to be included please e-mail me at NIGHTSCREAM452@HOTMAIL.COM OR see my bio page with my e-mail address on it and let me know you want to be added.
A big hug to the following people how reviewed my last chapter:
Vegeta Goddess (Thank you so much!!!! And you know what for!) Veovixa Majin Pan Evil Child (She wants to post it on her web site!! Jumping up and down excitedly!!!) Caged Bird Alia nights Kuti-pan Xing Pfefi X Man-in-Darkness Ills Devilstitan Miroku
Thanks bunches everyone!