This is a Merry chapter.. not a merry chapter but it only contains Merry..
I´ve tried my best to make a lot of details but I guess it didn´t end up
very well because of all my errors..
So please tell me, if you have the energy to, if you find many errors..
Thank you for the reviews! Puss på er!
~Chapter 6~ part one
Merry had ridden for about ten minutes when it started to blow. The wind was cold as it blew in his face and slowly it grew colder. He started to shiver and he wondered why he hadn´t brought a cloak with him.
Ah, of course, it was because that he needed to hurry, so that they could save Pippin from death. He shuddered and rode faster but there was still much more to ride.
Grey clouds began to cover the sky and suddenly it started to drizzle.
Merry cursed the rain. It would slow his ride for sure. It began to rain even more and the pony´s hooves began to slip a little in the mud. Merry was soaked by now and he heard a thunder quite far away.
The sun was completely gone now. A sudden lightning lit up the black sky; the thunder was coming closer and it started to rain harder.
"I will never make it.." Merry muttered as a new lightning flew across the sky and Thorin, the pony, got stressed.
"Easy there.." Merry murmured in the pony´s ear and Thorin calmed slightly.
It felt like hours before Merry saw the river which float quitely and reflected the starry sky. The eerie silence was soon cut of by an other thunder and after only a few secounds it was followed by a lightning which seemed to get awfully near.
'I hope it didn´t hit something..' Merry thought.
An other freezing wind passed and chilled Merry to the bone. He sighed in frustration as the pony slowed down because a tree was blocking the path.
End chapter 6½
I know, not very much action, and it was certainly not long, but it is only the first part.. And don´t laugh at me for naming the pony Thorin.. I don´t even know if you spell it like that..
Part 2 up soon!( I hope..)
Please review!!!
So please tell me, if you have the energy to, if you find many errors..
Thank you for the reviews! Puss på er!
~Chapter 6~ part one
Merry had ridden for about ten minutes when it started to blow. The wind was cold as it blew in his face and slowly it grew colder. He started to shiver and he wondered why he hadn´t brought a cloak with him.
Ah, of course, it was because that he needed to hurry, so that they could save Pippin from death. He shuddered and rode faster but there was still much more to ride.
Grey clouds began to cover the sky and suddenly it started to drizzle.
Merry cursed the rain. It would slow his ride for sure. It began to rain even more and the pony´s hooves began to slip a little in the mud. Merry was soaked by now and he heard a thunder quite far away.
The sun was completely gone now. A sudden lightning lit up the black sky; the thunder was coming closer and it started to rain harder.
"I will never make it.." Merry muttered as a new lightning flew across the sky and Thorin, the pony, got stressed.
"Easy there.." Merry murmured in the pony´s ear and Thorin calmed slightly.
It felt like hours before Merry saw the river which float quitely and reflected the starry sky. The eerie silence was soon cut of by an other thunder and after only a few secounds it was followed by a lightning which seemed to get awfully near.
'I hope it didn´t hit something..' Merry thought.
An other freezing wind passed and chilled Merry to the bone. He sighed in frustration as the pony slowed down because a tree was blocking the path.
End chapter 6½
I know, not very much action, and it was certainly not long, but it is only the first part.. And don´t laugh at me for naming the pony Thorin.. I don´t even know if you spell it like that..
Part 2 up soon!( I hope..)
Please review!!!