Thanks to everyone who reviewed this story! I really do appreciate it. I think almost everyone asked me to make this story longer, but I need your help! It's been so long since I played the game (Sadly, I don't own it.) that I cannot remember what happens AFTER the Thunder Plains to make a next chapter believable. Could someone drop me a review with some ideas, or a website I could look at? Or feel free to e-mail me. Thanks oodles! Abra Dee (abra_dee@hotmail.com)