Disclaimer: I don't own any of the Dark Angel characters. Iris is mine.
Thanks for reviewing and giving me you opinion about Freak Nation. It was
okay for just an episode, but I expected WAY more than that for a season
ending! Oh, and Alec, I really thought he could fight way better than that!
He should've knocked that chick out!
**************************************************************************** ************** Ben, my love
IRIS'S PLACE
She finally, after two hours, stopped training. She walked to her refrigerator to get a bottle of water. She walked to her bedroom and flipped the light on.
It was amazing!!! All the walls in her bedroom were covered with pictures of Ben, pictures that the staff from Manticore took to show their superiors, fighting scenes, combat training absolutely everything. She had just about every move a man could make in a picture form, with Ben on it! Most of them were pictures from when he was just a little boy, but she also had some others, where he was more mature, older. She even had a picture of his dead body, which is kinda morbid.
She sat down on her bed and grabbed an album, she opened it. More pictures with Ben on it, some of them with her and Ben on it. She was never on a picture with Ben, she put that one together with a computer program. She also took out a notebook, all her thought, about Ben, were in there.
She was totally obsessed with Ben, she only met him once, when she was a kid. They were paired of as sparring partners. He was good, he could take her on any day, no problem. That's what got her hooked on him.
No one ever beat her before, she was used to winning, but Ben, he was good. He was the first person to beat her, to put her in her place. He didn't even say anything to when she was lying on the ground, he just stuck out his hand to help her up. She never did that to the guys she had beaten. So he helped her up, he shouldn't have done that. A guard came up behind him and hit him in the back with a baton. He fell down to the ground. She didn't do anything to help him, she just stood there.
A tear ran down her cheek "I should've helped you, I know, but I couldn't. I felt so weird, I'd never felt that way before. My hart was beating so fast, it felt like I had butterflies in my stomach, I couldn't move, I'm sorry." She started to cry.
* flashback *
Iris was starring out of a window back at Manticore, watching Ben fighting with someone else. A girl, he even smiled at her from time to time when the guards weren't watching. Why was than girl more special then me, why did he smile at her and not and not at me.
* end flashback *
452,Max yeah I know who you are, I know now that that was you, I knew you were that girl when we met, when we fought back at Manticore. He liked you better than me, Ben, why? Now that I found him again,.You, always you, you're in the way. You aren't suppose to be with him, I am! Maybe he's not in love with you, but he likes you, more than he likes me!
He'll be mine! I not gonna lose him, not again.
I saw his body in the morgue, I snuck in when they weren't watching. I heard the guards talking about you, X5-493. They said you were crazy, that you killed people and took their teeth. I couldn't believe it, you could never do that, never.
When they were talking about you, I thought you came back, for me. When you escaped I missed you, I wish you had taken me with you. I even tried to escape myself, so I could be with you. I failed, they put me in psy-ops for six months. They thought I would try to escape again. I didn't, I waited, hoping you'd come back for me. You came back, but not for me, you didn't even come back alive. Cold, you were so cold. Someone snapped your neck. That was it, that was the moment I decided to kill whoever did that to you.
She slammed the album and the notebook shut and put them under her bed.
"No matter, I found you again. I always knew I would. But you're with her, I'll kill her, I just know she's the one who killed you before, who killed Ben. Once I get her out of the way we'll be together like we should've been in the first place."
She went back into the living room and stared to train again.
* flashback *
"527, over here!" Renfro ordered her, she came.
"You'll fight 452!" she said, and Max appeared
I couldn't believe my eyes, she was really here. "Ma'am, yes ma'am!" finally I got an opportunity to kill her, to kill 452! She escaped with 493, that should've been me!
They started to fight, she was good, guess she picked up some moves from the outside. BAM, yes, hit her, I hope it hurts. She's looking at me, I look back. Evil. Anger, I'll kill you, I will.
We fought pretty hard, she could definitely pack a punch.
"Stop! I said stop, at ease soldiers, that's an order!" Renfro shouted
We didn't listen, I didn't care, all I cared about was making her suffer!
"Guards! Get them away from each other!" she shouted
The guards came and pulled us apart.
Damn, I failed, again.
* end flashback *
"I'll get you this time!"
(TBC)
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I know, kinda short, but that's all I could come up with. Hope this was okay. REVIEW Ghosty girl
Oh like I just said, I know this is kinda short, so I decided to post chapter 7 as well. Hope you like it!
**************************************************************************** ************** Ben, my love
IRIS'S PLACE
She finally, after two hours, stopped training. She walked to her refrigerator to get a bottle of water. She walked to her bedroom and flipped the light on.
It was amazing!!! All the walls in her bedroom were covered with pictures of Ben, pictures that the staff from Manticore took to show their superiors, fighting scenes, combat training absolutely everything. She had just about every move a man could make in a picture form, with Ben on it! Most of them were pictures from when he was just a little boy, but she also had some others, where he was more mature, older. She even had a picture of his dead body, which is kinda morbid.
She sat down on her bed and grabbed an album, she opened it. More pictures with Ben on it, some of them with her and Ben on it. She was never on a picture with Ben, she put that one together with a computer program. She also took out a notebook, all her thought, about Ben, were in there.
She was totally obsessed with Ben, she only met him once, when she was a kid. They were paired of as sparring partners. He was good, he could take her on any day, no problem. That's what got her hooked on him.
No one ever beat her before, she was used to winning, but Ben, he was good. He was the first person to beat her, to put her in her place. He didn't even say anything to when she was lying on the ground, he just stuck out his hand to help her up. She never did that to the guys she had beaten. So he helped her up, he shouldn't have done that. A guard came up behind him and hit him in the back with a baton. He fell down to the ground. She didn't do anything to help him, she just stood there.
A tear ran down her cheek "I should've helped you, I know, but I couldn't. I felt so weird, I'd never felt that way before. My hart was beating so fast, it felt like I had butterflies in my stomach, I couldn't move, I'm sorry." She started to cry.
* flashback *
Iris was starring out of a window back at Manticore, watching Ben fighting with someone else. A girl, he even smiled at her from time to time when the guards weren't watching. Why was than girl more special then me, why did he smile at her and not and not at me.
* end flashback *
452,Max yeah I know who you are, I know now that that was you, I knew you were that girl when we met, when we fought back at Manticore. He liked you better than me, Ben, why? Now that I found him again,.You, always you, you're in the way. You aren't suppose to be with him, I am! Maybe he's not in love with you, but he likes you, more than he likes me!
He'll be mine! I not gonna lose him, not again.
I saw his body in the morgue, I snuck in when they weren't watching. I heard the guards talking about you, X5-493. They said you were crazy, that you killed people and took their teeth. I couldn't believe it, you could never do that, never.
When they were talking about you, I thought you came back, for me. When you escaped I missed you, I wish you had taken me with you. I even tried to escape myself, so I could be with you. I failed, they put me in psy-ops for six months. They thought I would try to escape again. I didn't, I waited, hoping you'd come back for me. You came back, but not for me, you didn't even come back alive. Cold, you were so cold. Someone snapped your neck. That was it, that was the moment I decided to kill whoever did that to you.
She slammed the album and the notebook shut and put them under her bed.
"No matter, I found you again. I always knew I would. But you're with her, I'll kill her, I just know she's the one who killed you before, who killed Ben. Once I get her out of the way we'll be together like we should've been in the first place."
She went back into the living room and stared to train again.
* flashback *
"527, over here!" Renfro ordered her, she came.
"You'll fight 452!" she said, and Max appeared
I couldn't believe my eyes, she was really here. "Ma'am, yes ma'am!" finally I got an opportunity to kill her, to kill 452! She escaped with 493, that should've been me!
They started to fight, she was good, guess she picked up some moves from the outside. BAM, yes, hit her, I hope it hurts. She's looking at me, I look back. Evil. Anger, I'll kill you, I will.
We fought pretty hard, she could definitely pack a punch.
"Stop! I said stop, at ease soldiers, that's an order!" Renfro shouted
We didn't listen, I didn't care, all I cared about was making her suffer!
"Guards! Get them away from each other!" she shouted
The guards came and pulled us apart.
Damn, I failed, again.
* end flashback *
"I'll get you this time!"
(TBC)
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I know, kinda short, but that's all I could come up with. Hope this was okay. REVIEW Ghosty girl
Oh like I just said, I know this is kinda short, so I decided to post chapter 7 as well. Hope you like it!
