Chap. 3
I changed my writing stile tell me which is better
Disclaimer: I don't own zoids. So sad, that's life its never fare.
Blitz teams base
Beep...Beep.Beep.SMASH. Lenna got out of bed careful not to step on the broken pieces of the alarm clock she just smashed. Lenna had not been in a good mood at least the past two weeks, the first week after Bit left she seamed fine but the last two weeks she is extremely temperamental. Her paranoia, caused by Bit always stealing her food, had gotten to her. Shopping had lost a lot its joy because all she could think about is Bit and what he was getting into. Lenna walked into the kitchen to eat her breakfast and found Naomi at the table with her brother Leon. "What are you guys doing here?" Lenna questioned. Brad had just walked in and to hear the question and told Lenna that him and Naomi were going into town and Leon was there to take Jamey, girl scouting at the mall.
Lenna walked back to her room to get her cloths on so she could find something to blow up in her Gunsniper, after all class S matches started in one month.
Some where on a beach near a GF base
"Liger keep your eyes pealed, Jen is out here some were." Bit said to his partner. "Grrrr" translation (no problem.) Just then four explosions hit around Liger, "what was that!" said Bit as Jen came down from a cliff. "Hay Bit ready to play." "You know me I am always ready". The battle went on neither polite showing any singe of giving in until both computers flashed Combat System Freeze.
A few hours later Bit and Jen were with the other GF members in the mess hall. "That was some impressive piloting you guys did." Said John. "Thanks" said Jen while Bit stayed quiet. "You alright Bit?" Spike asked. "Yea, just think." "About a girl I bet." said Jen with a smirk on her face. Bit started to redden in the face but decided to change the subject to see why he couldn't beat her quickly. "How did your GunSniper last so long Jen?" "Bit, don't you have conversion parts for your liger." Bit nods his head "well I can have special parts on my zoid as well." Bit looked shocked. He had never met any one who also had conversion parts for their zoid or that could modify it to the point where it was at least two or three times stronger. "How did you change your zoid?" Asked a curious Bit. "Well the power was increased, armor was thicker, guns enhanced, and the speed and maneuverability increased." Stated Jen as Bit stared in shock at her. Then shook his head. "I'm going to bed, this week has been pretty hard on the body and mind." John, Jen, Spike laugh knowing what he meant. "I'm truly impressed by that boy." Said John, the group nods in agreement. "I did not expected him to keep up with us in our training. "I agree with you John, his reaction timing and mental stress skills rival you." Said Jen with a devilish grin on her face. "I think its time we got some rest too guys." Spike said getting up. John and Jen agree and all three headed their separate ways.
The next morning alarms woke up most of the base. Bit woke up and knew something was wrong so the started to run straight for the hanger where all the zoids were. As soon as he got there John, Jen, Spike, and Pierce were pined down behind a truck taking fire from some zoid thieves. Luckily some soldiers had distracted the zoid thieves long enough for Bit to get in Liger and get a few shots next to the thieves. They looked at the Liger and surrendered. "Nice job Bit" Spike said while he cuffed one of the thieves. "There is only one problem one got away, and what's worse is that they got away with the experimental zoid that we were working on." Said John as he inspected the hanger. "You don't mean they got away with the G.B. do you." Asked Pierce. "It looks that way." Said the John. Bit stood there confused looking at the group of worriers with confusion on his face. "Bit I'm sorry but you must go home so that we can capture the thief, (pauses and thinks for a moment) or you can join us and then return home to do some undercover work even though it will be extremely dangerous." Bit though for a moment with a smile on his face then agreed to do the undercover work for GF. "I don't suppose I will find out what the G.B. is will I." John shook his head no, "not until we know where it is. Jen will be your contact she will let you know when we have some info. She will tell where and when we will meat and give you a fake I.D. if it's needed to OK." Bit nodded and said his good buys knowing that things were about to get a lot more interesting.
Like I said, I changed the way I write stories Tell me how you like it so r/r
Disclaimer: I don't own zoids. So sad, that's life its never fare.
Blitz teams base
Beep...Beep.Beep.SMASH. Lenna got out of bed careful not to step on the broken pieces of the alarm clock she just smashed. Lenna had not been in a good mood at least the past two weeks, the first week after Bit left she seamed fine but the last two weeks she is extremely temperamental. Her paranoia, caused by Bit always stealing her food, had gotten to her. Shopping had lost a lot its joy because all she could think about is Bit and what he was getting into. Lenna walked into the kitchen to eat her breakfast and found Naomi at the table with her brother Leon. "What are you guys doing here?" Lenna questioned. Brad had just walked in and to hear the question and told Lenna that him and Naomi were going into town and Leon was there to take Jamey, girl scouting at the mall.
Lenna walked back to her room to get her cloths on so she could find something to blow up in her Gunsniper, after all class S matches started in one month.
Some where on a beach near a GF base
"Liger keep your eyes pealed, Jen is out here some were." Bit said to his partner. "Grrrr" translation (no problem.) Just then four explosions hit around Liger, "what was that!" said Bit as Jen came down from a cliff. "Hay Bit ready to play." "You know me I am always ready". The battle went on neither polite showing any singe of giving in until both computers flashed Combat System Freeze.
A few hours later Bit and Jen were with the other GF members in the mess hall. "That was some impressive piloting you guys did." Said John. "Thanks" said Jen while Bit stayed quiet. "You alright Bit?" Spike asked. "Yea, just think." "About a girl I bet." said Jen with a smirk on her face. Bit started to redden in the face but decided to change the subject to see why he couldn't beat her quickly. "How did your GunSniper last so long Jen?" "Bit, don't you have conversion parts for your liger." Bit nods his head "well I can have special parts on my zoid as well." Bit looked shocked. He had never met any one who also had conversion parts for their zoid or that could modify it to the point where it was at least two or three times stronger. "How did you change your zoid?" Asked a curious Bit. "Well the power was increased, armor was thicker, guns enhanced, and the speed and maneuverability increased." Stated Jen as Bit stared in shock at her. Then shook his head. "I'm going to bed, this week has been pretty hard on the body and mind." John, Jen, Spike laugh knowing what he meant. "I'm truly impressed by that boy." Said John, the group nods in agreement. "I did not expected him to keep up with us in our training. "I agree with you John, his reaction timing and mental stress skills rival you." Said Jen with a devilish grin on her face. "I think its time we got some rest too guys." Spike said getting up. John and Jen agree and all three headed their separate ways.
The next morning alarms woke up most of the base. Bit woke up and knew something was wrong so the started to run straight for the hanger where all the zoids were. As soon as he got there John, Jen, Spike, and Pierce were pined down behind a truck taking fire from some zoid thieves. Luckily some soldiers had distracted the zoid thieves long enough for Bit to get in Liger and get a few shots next to the thieves. They looked at the Liger and surrendered. "Nice job Bit" Spike said while he cuffed one of the thieves. "There is only one problem one got away, and what's worse is that they got away with the experimental zoid that we were working on." Said John as he inspected the hanger. "You don't mean they got away with the G.B. do you." Asked Pierce. "It looks that way." Said the John. Bit stood there confused looking at the group of worriers with confusion on his face. "Bit I'm sorry but you must go home so that we can capture the thief, (pauses and thinks for a moment) or you can join us and then return home to do some undercover work even though it will be extremely dangerous." Bit though for a moment with a smile on his face then agreed to do the undercover work for GF. "I don't suppose I will find out what the G.B. is will I." John shook his head no, "not until we know where it is. Jen will be your contact she will let you know when we have some info. She will tell where and when we will meat and give you a fake I.D. if it's needed to OK." Bit nodded and said his good buys knowing that things were about to get a lot more interesting.
Like I said, I changed the way I write stories Tell me how you like it so r/r