Sugar in the Sheets
Author's Notes
Updated 1:47 pm 2-17-03
Hey everyone! Welcome to my newest serial fic, Sugar in the Sheets! As I said at the beginning of the fic, this is going to be slash. Plain and simple. And it is going to be smutty. Starting next chappie, there's gonna be some interesting stuff, I hope. And if you guys aren't cool with two boys, namely Draco and Harry, being together, then get the hell out. :-D
I would like to repeat my dedication. Ariel is the coolest! She asked me to write a fic with Draco and chocolate. And the idea for Sugar in the Sheets began. We talked from about midnight my time till about 4, thinking up all the ideas that are to come. And boy, are there some ideas… ;-) Hee hee. So this fic is dedicated to my only non-bunny muse, Ariel, aka WorldShaking. Thank you for asking for the fic. Here's to you, girlie!
I'll be writing little notes for each chapter from here out… And of course, the responses to you all, my readers. A major note… PLEASE DO NOT REVIEW ON THIS CHAPTER. BACK UP ONE, AND REVIEW ON THE MOST RECENT CHAPTER. THIS CHAPTER WILL NOT STAY IN THE SAME POSITION. EVERY TIME A NEW CHAPTER IS POSTED, THIS WILL BE BUMPED BACK. DO NOT REVIEW ON THIS CHAPTER AS YOU AND I WILL BOTH GET CONFUSED. Thank you.
I don't know how often my chapters for this will be coming out, as When Opposites Attract and Voices of Wizards are my first priorities (in that order). But I will try to get out as much of this fic as possible at any given time. I hope you all stick with me, because this is bound to be a bumpy ride! ;-)
Notes on Chapters 1 and 2:
First off, I would like to say thanks to everyone who's reviewed so far. Holy crow, 10 reviews already and I only posted one chapter!!! Whoa! I am amazed! Rock on you guys!!! :-D
I figure I might as well put these notes together as I'm putting up the AN's after I've written Ch 2. So the boys in Ch1 had a nice little kiss. Sorry. Yeah. I know it was little. But hell, Dray didn't even know he cared about Harry till Ch2!!! So Ch2, there's no action… but a promise of action to come. Draco's asked Harry to meet him… Wonder what's coming! ;-) Hee hee. I hope you guys like the fic so far. And yes, the smutty stuff is on its way. I promise!!!! :-D
Notes on Chapter 3:
Okay, so this is a little late… I didn't put this up when I put up the new chappie like I usually do. :-\ Sorry. I was exhausted. Long weekend. But here's the newest chappie. I hope it's alright… It's my first sex scene ever, so please tell me what you think of it. I hope it is alright. I don't know if this is actually gonna have a real story to it… I doubt it… Pretty much, it's gonna be smut. That's about it. I don't know what else is to come. If you guys have any ideas, let me know. I'll have to clear them all with Ariel, tho… Since she's the one who asked for the fic! ;-) I dunno when the next chappie will be up, or what it will include, but I hope you all enjoyed this so far! :-D Thanks for reading! Oh, and I'm sorry this chappie took almost 2 weeks to get out… I was having a major blockage about the sex… Like I said, it was my first sex scene, so I was kinda worried about it… Please forgive me for taking so long!!!! Lotsa love to all of ya! And everyone that reviews this chappie will get some of Draco's melted fudge! ;-) Hee hee hee!
Notes to my reviewers:
Ok, so if you haven't read any of my serials so far, I'll tell you the drill. TWhat happens is this: I write my first chappie. I post. I get reviews. I write a new chappie, and responses to all the reviews I've gotten up to that point. I pot both a new chappie and the new notes. The cycle repeats till I'm finished the fic (which I have yet to do…). Then no more responses. We clear on that point? Ok. So for the reviews. If you get a new response during the current AN update, your name will be in boldface. If you have gotten responses previously, but are not getting one this time b/c I didn't get your review in time to post, your name will stay in italics. If you're reviewing for a second, third, 80th time, your name will be bold, and you will have "NEW:" somewhere in the block of my response to you. Clear? Ok. And the responses will go in order of the first time you reviewed. Your name and responses will not move unless I decide, and if it does, I will alert you to it. Clear? Good. On to the responses.
Ariel AKA WorldShaking: Perfect? Really? Thanks!!! It's all thanks to you! And don't worry. That chocolate is reaaaally gonna be in the next chappie. I promise. Yay bunnies! NEW: There's the new chappie, altho you've already seen it… ;-) Ain't it great to be a muse? ;-) I hope the bunnies are happie with this chappie. (I'm a poet and I didn't know it!) Was the sex to your liking, m'dear? Hope so! ;-)
sweet-sista: Oh come on… They just BELONG together! ;-) But you're entitled to your opinion. :-)
depressed-anime-fangirl: Thank you! You wanna read more b/c it's so damn cute, right? ;-) Hee hee just kidding. I hope I've done alright.
oili-snape: Welcome to SITS! :-D Draco is a doof, isn't he? He'll come around. ;-)
Akutsuin: Yay favs! Thanks!! Here's more!
WildfireFriendship: Ok, first… Cool name. ;-) Second… I felt the need for Harry to start it all. He'll be whipped into submission later… But he'll do some whipping of his own too… Altho, no realy whips… I'm not real keen on all that…
GalesMystique710: Yay! You're reading this one too!? Woo! :-D Hee, no, running isn't usually the right thing to have happen with Harry… But what would YOU do if your worst enemy kissed you and you loved it? I'd be scared! ;-) And I love my bunnies too! This one is bound to have very little plot tho… If I can write it ok, it's gonna be pure smut! ;-) I hope I can get it together! Hee hee Ariel's begging me for the chocolate part too… And don't worry. It's coming… (Just like the boys will!!!) ;-) NEW: This story is, for me, a whole role reversal kinda thing… Harry being dominant, Hermione being pissy, etc. And yes, I so agree… Who WOULD run from Harry?!? That running, tho, was just the "omg, my worst enemy just kissed me and I loved it" kinda run… I hope the fudge + Harry + Draco thing was alright… ;-) Yell at me if I did badly, please… I'll make it better for my other ones. I promise! Hee hee hee I hope you likey!
Abra Dee: Sorry… That was rotten of me, wasn't it? *evil laugh* I hope you like Ch2... And I promise I'll get 3 out ASAP. :-D
Zarah: Yeah, someone else said that too… WildfireFriendship did. Anywho. Like I told WF, I felt the need to give Harry some balls here… ;-) Here's more!
Jennifer-hottie-chick: I will! :-D Here's more!
Alona the Evil Authoress: So it's cute, huh? :-D Thanks! I hope this was an ok chappie for ya! :-)
Shota-kun: Hee hee Great stuff ain't it? ;-) And Pansy can't be an annoying stalker all the time… Altho, if you noticed, she kinda said she thinks Draco's hot… but she knows better than to go after him b/c he's a flamer. ;-) Glad you like it!
Keimei: Of COURSE there's more to come! The boys had a meeting date! I couldn't leave ya hanging! ;-) Like I said to GalesMystique… I felt like there was a need for the roles to be reversed… at least for a little while. *shrug* And thanks! I think I'm pretty good at writing kisses… I hope I'm at least ok at the sex scenes! *crosses fingers*
Liz: It just got very R didn't it? Like VERY… Like I said at the beginning… I did have it planned that this would be a very strong R-ish fic… I'm glad you did like the first two chappies. :-) And I've said it to a couple people now… Yeah, I switched things up a bit… I felt like a little change was needed in the reactions of 'Mione and Ron, and the dominant/submissive roles with Harry and Dray. Hope you like the new chappie!
Lottalita: So do I get pez? Did I do alright? I'm glad you liked it so far! :-D I hope you still do!!!
Vividian: Oh. My. God. You actually came. I can't believe it! When I got your review, I gotta tell you, I was totally flipping out. :-D First off, I just wanted to say thanks for reading! And Second, thanks for WRITING! You're amazing!!!! Ok, now I gotta recover again… *whew* So. A wonderful job? Really? Thanks! Yeah, I am really happy Ariel asked me to write this! Was the whole reaction thing that good? I mean, I kinda just felt like a lil change, and everyone keeps commenting on that! Remarkable talent? Brilliant writer? *blushing furiously* Thanks!!!! Coming from you, that means a LOT. Thanks so much!! :-D
mayaz felton: Hee Welcome! There's a bit more kink mixed in here for ya, and a lot more smut! Harry and Dray really are best together, aren't they?!? *big goofy grin* And yes, YUM! :-D
A reader: Dray won't hurt Harry. I promise. I dunno quite why I made Dray run… It really isn't quite Malfoy-ish… but I thought it was an interesting twist? Anyway. I hope this chappie was good! :-D
Lady Vixen: First off, I don't know what to think of your review… Ok, whoever said Narcissa hated Dray? Uh, the only one that ever said that in the real books would be Harry while they were fighting. Now to answer your questions. 1) Why can't Harry be the one to start things? I felt like writing something where Harry was going after Draco for once. I thought I did a damn good job! 2) If I warned people, what would be the surprise there? That would take all the fun out of the surprise of the story. 3) The running was just something that came. Ok, what would you do if the guy that you've hated for at least a third of your life (all of your school life, anyway…) came up to you and kissed you. You'd be a bit freaked out, wouldn't you!? 4) I just thought I would add the whole cleanliness thing in just for amusement value, and so that Draco would be the last one out of the classroom so Harry could pounce on him without any others finding them. MOST IMPORTANT QUESTION ANSWERED: Please tell me the book, chapter and page that Draco is described with silvery grey eyes. Before I started writing any of my fics, I made sure that I searched out in every description of Draco Malfoy by JKR to find out exactly what color eyes he has. I found that he had silvery-blonde hair. But no mention of his eye color. If you tell me exactly where I could find that, I will gladly go back and change everywhere I wrote "blue." But until you do that, I will take my own liberties and make them whatever color I want, thank you very much. I'm glad you liked the story enough to yell at me about all this, and please, before you yell at me again about Draco's eyes, take the time to give me the exact location of his description. Thank you.
Tiger Blak: Yes, they've been bedded! Finally, my first sex scene! You have no idea how nervous I was about the scene… I suppose it's ok, right? I dunno what else is gonna go on in this thing… I haven't really planned anything out.
Zabina: Thanks! *grins back*
So there's the notes for now. I hope you all enjoy the new chapter. As I said before, PLEASE DO NOT REVIEW ON THIS CHAPTER. BACK UP ONE, AND REVIEW ON THE MOST RECENT CHAPTER. Thank you. Please come back often and let me know how I'm doing. I'm a writer. I live for reviews. Don't we all? So go review. Thanks for stopping by for Sugar in the Sheets!
Draco Dormiens Nunquam Titillandus!
~*~Katie of Gryffindor~*~
