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Chapter XI: Betrayal Leads to Death
I felt a surge of pain run through my head. I closed my eyes. When I opened them, I was in ancient Egypt. I was in the crowd at a coliseum. Excuse me, the Coliseum. I looked out unto the center ring. There were three men and a gallow. One of the men had a black mask over his head. The executioner I suppose. Another was in chains and standing on the gallow. I recognized him as Randal. The last person had spiked purple and black hair with blond braids flowing down, over his eyes. The mighty Pharaoh.
"This is a warning to all tomb robbers. If caught, you face the rope." Shouted the Pharaoh. The crowd screamed in excitement. They enjoyed seeing the death of a robber. I should know.
"Do you have any last words, criminal?"
"Yes, dark for fear of failure. An inner gloom as wide as an eye and fermenting roiling hate. Death grip in my veins. Unveiling rancid petals. Flowering forth fouls nectar. The space between a blink and a tear… Death Blooms (a/n I love that quote, MuDvAyNe RuLz).
"Release the floor." The executioner let go of a rope. Door under Randal popped open. Randal fell under with the rope around his neck. His body fell down and bounced up with a sickening crack. I watched as his lifeless body swung from side to side from the rope. My face cringed in disgust. Randal's face was frozen in a deathly stare. It brought fear to me.
"The prisoner's neck has snapped!" The Pharaoh exclaimed to the crowd. The crowd was enjoying every minute of this. I kept my eyes on Randal's body. I saw the outline of a body float around him. I squinted to get a better look. It was an evil spirit. I could tell it was evil by the black aura around it. I looked around to see if anyone else noticed it. No one seemed to see it but me. The spirit flew into Randal's carcass. His body started to flail around. The crowd still didn't seem to notice it. The spirit and another one flew out of Randal. The other thing wasn't a spirit at all, though. It was Randal's soul. The spirit fused itself with Randal's soul. It took on a new visage.
"I guess you want to know who the spirit is." I heard a voice behind me. It was Randal and Randal's fusion.
"The spirit is Yami Randal. Just like you, my yami could control my body without my control. See, Yami here has had a grudge on you without you even knowing it. Remember your sister, Bakura."
"She's gone. I have no need to remember her."
"Oh, but in order to understand why Yami and I want you dead, I must bring her up. You see, Yami loved your sister, Quess (a/n I got the name from Char's Counterattack). His lust for her grew deeper and deeper every day, every time he saw her. He decided one day that he would tell her how he felt. But he saw you creep up on her while she was sleeping. He saw you murder her."
"I've heard enough, Randal!"
"No you haven't Bakura, for you see, when Yami saw that he ran home, took a knife and stabbed himself to death. His soul wandered the earth, for it could not rest in peace. It watched you, and it watched me. And when I died, it took over my soul to get revenge on you. My body flailed because I was about to be alive again. But a monk in the crowd saw what was going on and pulled Yami and my soul out of my body. Yami still fused with me but the monk sealed us in the dagger. There we waited for someone stupid enough to break the dagger, for that was the only way we could get out. When we finally did, I thought I was free of the spirit. But Yami was still a part of me. He took over my body and made me kill all of your friends. He wanted to cause you mental pain, just like you caused him. I wanted to cause you physical pain and kill you. Yami sensed this and let me go forth with what I wanted to do."
"You bastard!" I lunged at Randal. He dodged my attack and the scenery around us changed. I was back in the center of Domino City. And boy was I pissed. I took off towards my house. I didn't want Ryou to worry about me.
Chapter Terminated…
WoW. This just keeps getting better and more confusing. But people love it when new characters get intoduced. Then they know the story ain't ending any time soon. And great news, my and my ex-girlfriend Janie are back together and in a happy relationship. Just thought I'd tell yall. Oh and don't forget Quess. Yall should know by now when someone gets introduced, they are likely to play a bigger part then a cameo role. Well,
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