Hello peeps! Bluebell of Mindelan is back, and inspired.
No, that's crap. How about:
Bluebell, bigger, better and…bouncy?
Ok, ignore my weirdness there, I've been at the Easter eggs AND the coke AND the ice cream.
Bk 2 fanfic. I hope u like the rest of this. Thanx 2 all who reviewed! U can carry on reviewing if u want 2. hint hint.
Chapter 2
~In Severe Shock~
'…Thayet, well, she hates me.'
Jon shifted uncomfortably under Alanna's piercing stare.
'What did you do?' she demanded.
Jon looked into the depths of her violet eyes, and saw suspicion, and concern hidden behind sharp awareness. One of Alanna's perfect eyebrows arched. Jon cleared his throat before answering.
'I, I told her. I told her about the feud between the people of her King's and her own, in a conversation.' Jon stammered, looking everywhere but at Alanna.
'You…did…what?' Alanna fumed, 'what kind of feud?'
Jon cowered under her steely gaze for a second, before slowly straightening and brushing down his tunic. He met her stare squarely and answered
'A, rather fiery one. I, er, wasn't aware of her original home.' He added stiffly, 'I believe that was a detail of which you never informed me.'
Alanna glared at him.
'So it's my fault you've just thrown away a perfect wife and queen? I don't think so Jon. The way I see it, you never asked after her home, and to be so free with what you say. Honestly. What were you thinking, she doesn't need to know about Corus's rivals.'
Alanna would have continued if Jon had not smothered her mouth with a soft hand, eyes glinting in amusement. Alanna's brow furrowed, and the moment he removed his hand she began to hiss at him.
'I don't know what you…'
'hush.' Jon interrupted. 'you are wrong about the loss of a perfect wife and queen, fro I know someone who would suit the job well enough. I cannot let slip any details that would anger her, as I have known her for long period of time.'
Alanna waited as Jon paused to survey the impact this had on the lady knight.
'Well?' she asked impatiently.
'Alanna,' Jon looked at her seriously, 'will you marry me?'
Neal had found Kel in the crowd after his fall, and hastily waded through the sea of people to reach her.
When he did reach her, he found Kel and the rest of their friends splitting their sides with laughter. The lady knight's squire grimaced.
'ok, I fell. Is it such a big deal?' he asked, embarrassed.
'you bet Queenscove.' Cleon replied, shaking with repressed laughter.
Neal looked away from the large redhead. Kel was rather taken with Cleon, and Neal had been noticeably cold towards him since he had found out. Neal had to admit, Cleon did look somewhat more appealing than him in his outfit. Kel too had noticed.
Neal turned to his crush, and his heart pounded as he saw her dress. With her own tumbling brown braids, she looked almost as stunning as the Lioness. Kel had let her hair grow, after being urged to do so by Cleon.
As they began to talk, a young man from court requested Kel's hand for the next dance, which Kel accepted.
While Kel was waltzing, Neal turned to Seaver, Merric, Owen, Roald and , reluctantly, Cleon.
'So you all thinki should ask Kel to dance and tell her how I feel while the song is playing?' Neal asked his friends…and Cleon.
All the heads nodded, Cleon's hesitantly.
Neal grinned and nodded back. Everyone separated to find a dance partner. Neal got a drink before preparing to ask Kel to dance. His heart fluttering, he noted that it was a slow song. That was good. He spotted the sky blue dress Kel had been wearing through all the dancing couples. He made his way toward it.
As he reached it, the fluttering stopped. His ears pounded and his stomach felt empty.
Cleon was holding Kel to him, and they were kissing while dancing close together.
'KENNAN!' Neal was furious.
Ok, not my best, but I was a bit stuck. Nice 2 hav so many reviews in so little time. Mor would still be welcomed! hopeful look and puppy dog eyes appear on face LOL!
R&R ppl!
Bluebell of Mindelan
@~~~~
No, that's crap. How about:
Bluebell, bigger, better and…bouncy?
Ok, ignore my weirdness there, I've been at the Easter eggs AND the coke AND the ice cream.
Bk 2 fanfic. I hope u like the rest of this. Thanx 2 all who reviewed! U can carry on reviewing if u want 2. hint hint.
Chapter 2
~In Severe Shock~
'…Thayet, well, she hates me.'
Jon shifted uncomfortably under Alanna's piercing stare.
'What did you do?' she demanded.
Jon looked into the depths of her violet eyes, and saw suspicion, and concern hidden behind sharp awareness. One of Alanna's perfect eyebrows arched. Jon cleared his throat before answering.
'I, I told her. I told her about the feud between the people of her King's and her own, in a conversation.' Jon stammered, looking everywhere but at Alanna.
'You…did…what?' Alanna fumed, 'what kind of feud?'
Jon cowered under her steely gaze for a second, before slowly straightening and brushing down his tunic. He met her stare squarely and answered
'A, rather fiery one. I, er, wasn't aware of her original home.' He added stiffly, 'I believe that was a detail of which you never informed me.'
Alanna glared at him.
'So it's my fault you've just thrown away a perfect wife and queen? I don't think so Jon. The way I see it, you never asked after her home, and to be so free with what you say. Honestly. What were you thinking, she doesn't need to know about Corus's rivals.'
Alanna would have continued if Jon had not smothered her mouth with a soft hand, eyes glinting in amusement. Alanna's brow furrowed, and the moment he removed his hand she began to hiss at him.
'I don't know what you…'
'hush.' Jon interrupted. 'you are wrong about the loss of a perfect wife and queen, fro I know someone who would suit the job well enough. I cannot let slip any details that would anger her, as I have known her for long period of time.'
Alanna waited as Jon paused to survey the impact this had on the lady knight.
'Well?' she asked impatiently.
'Alanna,' Jon looked at her seriously, 'will you marry me?'
Neal had found Kel in the crowd after his fall, and hastily waded through the sea of people to reach her.
When he did reach her, he found Kel and the rest of their friends splitting their sides with laughter. The lady knight's squire grimaced.
'ok, I fell. Is it such a big deal?' he asked, embarrassed.
'you bet Queenscove.' Cleon replied, shaking with repressed laughter.
Neal looked away from the large redhead. Kel was rather taken with Cleon, and Neal had been noticeably cold towards him since he had found out. Neal had to admit, Cleon did look somewhat more appealing than him in his outfit. Kel too had noticed.
Neal turned to his crush, and his heart pounded as he saw her dress. With her own tumbling brown braids, she looked almost as stunning as the Lioness. Kel had let her hair grow, after being urged to do so by Cleon.
As they began to talk, a young man from court requested Kel's hand for the next dance, which Kel accepted.
While Kel was waltzing, Neal turned to Seaver, Merric, Owen, Roald and , reluctantly, Cleon.
'So you all thinki should ask Kel to dance and tell her how I feel while the song is playing?' Neal asked his friends…and Cleon.
All the heads nodded, Cleon's hesitantly.
Neal grinned and nodded back. Everyone separated to find a dance partner. Neal got a drink before preparing to ask Kel to dance. His heart fluttering, he noted that it was a slow song. That was good. He spotted the sky blue dress Kel had been wearing through all the dancing couples. He made his way toward it.
As he reached it, the fluttering stopped. His ears pounded and his stomach felt empty.
Cleon was holding Kel to him, and they were kissing while dancing close together.
'KENNAN!' Neal was furious.
Ok, not my best, but I was a bit stuck. Nice 2 hav so many reviews in so little time. Mor would still be welcomed! hopeful look and puppy dog eyes appear on face LOL!
R&R ppl!
Bluebell of Mindelan
@~~~~