Hey guys, I'm writing this chapter like an episode. Some is done in dialouge, some not. I hope it is not confusing because I really like the way it turned out. Hope you do too!!
Later that day: Gilmore House
( The girls are making last minute 'adjustments' to the house before the grandparents get there.)
L: "Fancy Smansy candles?"
R: "Check."
L: "Wayyyy too expensive lamp?"
R: "Check. "
L: "Pictures of historical stuff that we will never actually look at because we would die of boredom?"
R: "Check."
L: "Teeny tiny tea set not fit for any decent amount of coffee?"
R: "Double Check."
L: "Why double?"
R: "Two sets."
L: "Of course, you cannot have only one tea set, it would cause complete caos throughout the world..."
R: "Mom?"
L: "Huh"
R: "Just go on."
L: "Oh right, .....uh.... hunky jewelry she bought us scattered around aimlessly?"
R: "Check."
(There is a loud knock at the door)
(Both girls jump)
L: "Oh no.."
R: "They're here."
L: "We were not finished checking..."
R: "Come on..." (tugging on her mother's shirt)
Beginning credits and **First commercial break
Emily, Richard, Loreali, and Rory are all seated in the living room, tension mounting high.
"I see you've tidied up." Emily complemented, breaking the silence.
"Yeah, well we don't have guests very often." Rory spoke up.
"That was very kind." Richard stated geniuenly.
"You're welcome, dad." Loreali said, clearly surprised by this rare 'Beaver Cleaver,perfect family moment'.
"But that garden....." Emily began
And the moment was destroyed as she complained about the wilted flowers and crab grass patches.
Loreali, to say the least, was not happy.
"Uh, grandma, Rory interrupted, why don't we bring your bags upstairs?"
"Ahh, good idea,dear." Emily said brightening up.
And the garden was momentarily forgotten as all four trudged upstairs.
Of course , after about two seconds of having them in the same room, Loreali and Emily began to bicker , again. Richard's attempts to calm them down had fallen on deaf ears.
The phone rang then , and Rory raced downstairs to retrieve it, mentally thanking the caller.
(Click) "Thankyou so much!"
"Isn't hello the usual gesture?" Jess's voice boomed through the line.
"Hello....." she said teasingly.
He laughed. "Let me guess, your grandparents are there."
"Bingo"
"Want me to come rescue you?" he joked.
"Well, you are my hero as I said before." she teased.
"That's so cliche, you do know that, right?"
"But you still love it."
"True..., he confessed, When should I ride up on my gallant white horse?"
"How about right now...." she urged.
"Going.." he confirmed.
She hung up and reentered the living room to find her very distressed mother.
"Who was that , babe?" Loreali asked, relieved her ali had returned.
"It was Jess.." Rory answered slowly.
Loreali pulled her aside. "He wanted to tell you something and Not pick you up and take you away, right?"
"Uhhh......"
"Rory!" Loreali whined.
(There was a second knock on the door.)
Rory pouted and stuck out her lower lip.
"Go..."
"Thankyou, Thankyou, Thankyou!", and she belted out the door after saying a quick apology to her grandparents.
After the door slammed shut, Loreali sighed, as she sat down on the chair opposite of her expressionless parents.
Cut to the Bridge:
(Jess is sitting with his feet dangling over the water and Rory is sitting between his legs, feet dangling as well.)
Jess begins to trace her neck with his mouth.
"Mmmm, Rory groaned, how do you do that?"
"Do what?" he asked coyly, wrapping his arms around her tightly.
"I don't know..she sighed, um...you make me feel so.....so.."
"Hot??" he joked.
"No...loved." she said sweetly.
(Jess flashes one of his genuine smiles, reserved just for Rory. The scene fades away as they are kissing passionately.)
Cut to Loreali lying awake in her bed with a pillow over her ears.
(Soft opera music can be heard. Loreali groans and holds the pillow to her head tighter.)
Rory knocks and enters the room.
"Opera music?.....why?" Rory whines.
"Aparently, my dear mother, needs it to 'soothe' her to sleep." Loreali explained, handing her daughter a pillow.
Both girls lay back and stare at the ceiling with their pillows.
"Did you have fun?" Loreali spoke loudly.
"Yeah." Rory yelled back.
(The music gets louder)
The show fades way, as both girls groan at the same time and pull their pillows tighter to their ears.
***Second commercial break****
Loreali's Room: Morning
(Rory and Loreali are asleep. First, a vacuum cleaner is heard being run outside the door. Then, a 'yes, mam' is screamed through the hallway.)
Mother and daughter are quickly awoken and stare at each other with identical suspicous glances.
L: "You've got to be kidding me..." (she stammers to the door and opens it. Outside is a maid cleaning randomly and quickly. )
Emily walks up to the room.
Loreali just stares at her mother's humble face with one of fury.
Camera pans back to Rory,holding back laughter.
Emily: "Good morning girls! This is Dolores, our new maid. I figured she could do a great deal of good here, and since you lack the ability to cook, inherited I guess. (chuckles) Anyway, she'll be helping out . In the meantime, why don't you two get dresed. I want to take you both to this quaint, little sale where people sell their unwanted items. It's very interesting actually."
L: "You mean a flee market?"
E: "No Loreali!, a sale!" (she bursts back downstairs in a huff)
Loreali looks back at Rory and they burst into a fit of laughter.
L: (in English accent) "Come dear daughter, we must get ready for the 'quaint sale'."
R: "I can't."
"Why?" Loreali asked accusingly.
She gets up and hugs her distraught mother. "It's my anniversary!" she says joyfully.
"Oh right,...Loreali gruffed, an entire year."
Rory goes into the bathroom with a change of clothing.
"Mommy will just, you know, get emotional abuse and have no shoulder to cry on."
"I'm sorry, a fully dressed Rory said , puting her make-up on, but I gotta go." (And with that,she kissed her mother's forehead and sped out of the house.)
***Last commercial break***
Loreali and Emily are at the sale/ flee market. Emily is empty-handed and ironically Loreali is the one having a great time. Her hands are full of colorful, interesting, purchases and a goofy grin on her face.
Cut to Jess's Room:
Rory and Jess are kissing and Rory pushes him down onto the bed. The kiss clearly gets more heated.
J: Are you sure you want this to happen?"
R: "Yes." Rory said simply with a glint in her eye that had never been there before.
Screen goes black.
End Show.
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Later that day: Gilmore House
( The girls are making last minute 'adjustments' to the house before the grandparents get there.)
L: "Fancy Smansy candles?"
R: "Check."
L: "Wayyyy too expensive lamp?"
R: "Check. "
L: "Pictures of historical stuff that we will never actually look at because we would die of boredom?"
R: "Check."
L: "Teeny tiny tea set not fit for any decent amount of coffee?"
R: "Double Check."
L: "Why double?"
R: "Two sets."
L: "Of course, you cannot have only one tea set, it would cause complete caos throughout the world..."
R: "Mom?"
L: "Huh"
R: "Just go on."
L: "Oh right, .....uh.... hunky jewelry she bought us scattered around aimlessly?"
R: "Check."
(There is a loud knock at the door)
(Both girls jump)
L: "Oh no.."
R: "They're here."
L: "We were not finished checking..."
R: "Come on..." (tugging on her mother's shirt)
Beginning credits and **First commercial break
Emily, Richard, Loreali, and Rory are all seated in the living room, tension mounting high.
"I see you've tidied up." Emily complemented, breaking the silence.
"Yeah, well we don't have guests very often." Rory spoke up.
"That was very kind." Richard stated geniuenly.
"You're welcome, dad." Loreali said, clearly surprised by this rare 'Beaver Cleaver,perfect family moment'.
"But that garden....." Emily began
And the moment was destroyed as she complained about the wilted flowers and crab grass patches.
Loreali, to say the least, was not happy.
"Uh, grandma, Rory interrupted, why don't we bring your bags upstairs?"
"Ahh, good idea,dear." Emily said brightening up.
And the garden was momentarily forgotten as all four trudged upstairs.
Of course , after about two seconds of having them in the same room, Loreali and Emily began to bicker , again. Richard's attempts to calm them down had fallen on deaf ears.
The phone rang then , and Rory raced downstairs to retrieve it, mentally thanking the caller.
(Click) "Thankyou so much!"
"Isn't hello the usual gesture?" Jess's voice boomed through the line.
"Hello....." she said teasingly.
He laughed. "Let me guess, your grandparents are there."
"Bingo"
"Want me to come rescue you?" he joked.
"Well, you are my hero as I said before." she teased.
"That's so cliche, you do know that, right?"
"But you still love it."
"True..., he confessed, When should I ride up on my gallant white horse?"
"How about right now...." she urged.
"Going.." he confirmed.
She hung up and reentered the living room to find her very distressed mother.
"Who was that , babe?" Loreali asked, relieved her ali had returned.
"It was Jess.." Rory answered slowly.
Loreali pulled her aside. "He wanted to tell you something and Not pick you up and take you away, right?"
"Uhhh......"
"Rory!" Loreali whined.
(There was a second knock on the door.)
Rory pouted and stuck out her lower lip.
"Go..."
"Thankyou, Thankyou, Thankyou!", and she belted out the door after saying a quick apology to her grandparents.
After the door slammed shut, Loreali sighed, as she sat down on the chair opposite of her expressionless parents.
Cut to the Bridge:
(Jess is sitting with his feet dangling over the water and Rory is sitting between his legs, feet dangling as well.)
Jess begins to trace her neck with his mouth.
"Mmmm, Rory groaned, how do you do that?"
"Do what?" he asked coyly, wrapping his arms around her tightly.
"I don't know..she sighed, um...you make me feel so.....so.."
"Hot??" he joked.
"No...loved." she said sweetly.
(Jess flashes one of his genuine smiles, reserved just for Rory. The scene fades away as they are kissing passionately.)
Cut to Loreali lying awake in her bed with a pillow over her ears.
(Soft opera music can be heard. Loreali groans and holds the pillow to her head tighter.)
Rory knocks and enters the room.
"Opera music?.....why?" Rory whines.
"Aparently, my dear mother, needs it to 'soothe' her to sleep." Loreali explained, handing her daughter a pillow.
Both girls lay back and stare at the ceiling with their pillows.
"Did you have fun?" Loreali spoke loudly.
"Yeah." Rory yelled back.
(The music gets louder)
The show fades way, as both girls groan at the same time and pull their pillows tighter to their ears.
***Second commercial break****
Loreali's Room: Morning
(Rory and Loreali are asleep. First, a vacuum cleaner is heard being run outside the door. Then, a 'yes, mam' is screamed through the hallway.)
Mother and daughter are quickly awoken and stare at each other with identical suspicous glances.
L: "You've got to be kidding me..." (she stammers to the door and opens it. Outside is a maid cleaning randomly and quickly. )
Emily walks up to the room.
Loreali just stares at her mother's humble face with one of fury.
Camera pans back to Rory,holding back laughter.
Emily: "Good morning girls! This is Dolores, our new maid. I figured she could do a great deal of good here, and since you lack the ability to cook, inherited I guess. (chuckles) Anyway, she'll be helping out . In the meantime, why don't you two get dresed. I want to take you both to this quaint, little sale where people sell their unwanted items. It's very interesting actually."
L: "You mean a flee market?"
E: "No Loreali!, a sale!" (she bursts back downstairs in a huff)
Loreali looks back at Rory and they burst into a fit of laughter.
L: (in English accent) "Come dear daughter, we must get ready for the 'quaint sale'."
R: "I can't."
"Why?" Loreali asked accusingly.
She gets up and hugs her distraught mother. "It's my anniversary!" she says joyfully.
"Oh right,...Loreali gruffed, an entire year."
Rory goes into the bathroom with a change of clothing.
"Mommy will just, you know, get emotional abuse and have no shoulder to cry on."
"I'm sorry, a fully dressed Rory said , puting her make-up on, but I gotta go." (And with that,she kissed her mother's forehead and sped out of the house.)
***Last commercial break***
Loreali and Emily are at the sale/ flee market. Emily is empty-handed and ironically Loreali is the one having a great time. Her hands are full of colorful, interesting, purchases and a goofy grin on her face.
Cut to Jess's Room:
Rory and Jess are kissing and Rory pushes him down onto the bed. The kiss clearly gets more heated.
J: Are you sure you want this to happen?"
R: "Yes." Rory said simply with a glint in her eye that had never been there before.
Screen goes black.
End Show.
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