Chapter 6- Year 4 Ok people what I am going to since everyone says I need
to be more detailed I think either I am going to start detailing now or go
back and rewrite my other chapters and then make it the same story only
more detailed. You guys tell me your reviews ok- thanks here is more.
The last game of the Quidditch Season was coming up and it was Gryffindor against Ravenclaw, the practices were not so hot. The weather had been crapy all week and Friday wasn't looking too good. And most important their star chaser had bronchitis. Lily couldn't talk and she was very tired but also determined to win this.
"Ok team you can take a break. Lily are you ok- you really shouldn't be playing, I mean I am sure we can get someone else to play for you."
Lily just gave James the finger.
"Dude you have one determined girl friend."
"I know and she is so hott when she is like that. Oy Lily come here baby." Sirius chased after Lily trying to give her a kiss to make her feel better.
James missed Lily more than anything seeing her with Sirius and making him the happiest guy in Hogwarts was great, but he wanted to be that guy. It was his fault they weren't together but why did it have to make him feel so miserable and that fact that she didn't talk to him was worse, all she ever said was Fuck off potter, Bite me, IS there someone talking. He hated it. But he had a plan he didn't care what happened he was going to get Lily back.
The team went back to practice and then James called it quits. He walked over to Lily where she was drying off,
"Hey Lily could I talk to you for like 10 minutes." She just shrugged her shoulders and went with him. They walked until they were by the lake. " Lily I really need to tell you something, I want to go back out with you more than anything I cant sleep, eat or think with out thinking of you I know it sounds dumb but its true . I was stupid to dump you (lily had a look on her face that said NO DUH!) but I had my reasons but I am willing to forget about it if you would come back to me. Please think about it and I know you cant say anything right now but if you would write me a note anything I don't care if it all it says is no, Please Lily." Lily looked at him - was it Hope, Happiness, Confusion, or pure hatred? - And then she simply just walked back to the castle.
Lily went up to her dorm with tears in her eyes, She couldn't believe what James had just said to her, was he being serious or was he just trying to make her talk to him again. She figured what could it hurt she would tell him the truth and see what happens. Even though she had Sirius he wasn't the same -sure he was funny and loving but he always wanted to make out or fool around and he wasn't serious - if that makes sense LOL- She wanted James back it had been 2 months since he dumped her and she thought she was over him -for a time she was but then he came back and she wanted to make him leave so she never had to deal with him again. Why was life so hard?
Lily pulled out a piece of parchment and she grabbed her swan feather quill that wrote in gold it when she was done..
A PERSON BEFORE I START AGAIN IS THIS DETIALED ENOUGH?
She sealed the letter with a kiss and sprayed it with some Love Spell - Body spray not a potion. She looked at the clock on the bedside table and saw that it was 12:30 and James was still up in the common so she decided instead of using Aphrodite she would just walked down there and give it to him and then walk back up to the common room, By the time she had gotten done rehearsing this 10 times it was 1:15 and she ran down to the common room afraid she would miss James.
James was about to walk up to the boy staircase when he saw Lily running down the stairs in her nightgown - not much coverage- she handed him the parchment and then she ran back up stairs. James sat on the cold stairs and opened the letter up the smell of lily filled the small passage way and he began to read.
James, The reason it hurts us so much to be apart is because are souls are connected, and maybe they always have been and will be. Maybe we have lived a thousand lives before - and in each of them we have found each other and perhaps each time we have been forced apart for the same reasons. That means that good bye is both a good bye for the past ten thousand years and a prelude to what will come.. I would love to tell you that everything will work out between us and I promise I do all I can to make sure it does. But if we never met each other and this is truly good bye, I know we will see each other in another life. And maybe we will find each other again and we will not only fall in love each other again but also for all the times we have before.
But I have so many questions for you. Why if you cant stop thinking about me did you dump me and act like a jerk and if you had some deathly reason you couldn't go out with me then why didn't you just say something to me I am sure I would have understood. And most of all do you think I am just going to dump Sirius and go back out with you-Did you ever think about his feelings, He loves me and he treats me like I should be treated. James I never stopped loving you and I don't understand why that is, but I am with Sirius now and until we break up or he dies you will have to wait -so my advice is you move on. If you think I am going to be nice to you now - I guess I will have to think about it. Lol - But James I really miss spending time with you. Maybe we could get together one night - perhaps a full moon - yes I know about Remus and I also was planning to become an animagi Ill tell you more when I see you- But maybe then Sirius wont be in the way. You are one of my best friends and I can't wait to catch up on everything - This is all I cant think of saying to you right now and please don't let Sirius see this - tell him I am thinking about him if he asks -
Love Always - Lillian Marie Evans
She would talk to him again and she wanted to hang out - wow this was more than he could handle. James ran up to the girls room and listened to see if they were all up. The room was silent and he walked in he got on his hands and knees and then crawled to Lily's bed. She slowly opened her curtains and looked in Lily was sleeping and she looked like a goddess with the moon light hitting her face and making her look immortal he wanted to kiss her and have everything be alright. His hand grazed her cheek and he lent down to kiss her softly on the lips. Lily woke up and she couldn't help but get caught up in the moment this is exactly what she was dreaming of.
"Lily I feel the same way. Please forgive me - I love you more than all the stars in the sky- you are my princess and I cant live another moment with out you knowing you feel the same way."
"Oh James,"
He was pulling into her bed. and the night went on.
That's all for now people maybe Ill write what happened in the next chapter -but only if you all review and tell me what I should do. -K Alexia thanks for r/r
The last game of the Quidditch Season was coming up and it was Gryffindor against Ravenclaw, the practices were not so hot. The weather had been crapy all week and Friday wasn't looking too good. And most important their star chaser had bronchitis. Lily couldn't talk and she was very tired but also determined to win this.
"Ok team you can take a break. Lily are you ok- you really shouldn't be playing, I mean I am sure we can get someone else to play for you."
Lily just gave James the finger.
"Dude you have one determined girl friend."
"I know and she is so hott when she is like that. Oy Lily come here baby." Sirius chased after Lily trying to give her a kiss to make her feel better.
James missed Lily more than anything seeing her with Sirius and making him the happiest guy in Hogwarts was great, but he wanted to be that guy. It was his fault they weren't together but why did it have to make him feel so miserable and that fact that she didn't talk to him was worse, all she ever said was Fuck off potter, Bite me, IS there someone talking. He hated it. But he had a plan he didn't care what happened he was going to get Lily back.
The team went back to practice and then James called it quits. He walked over to Lily where she was drying off,
"Hey Lily could I talk to you for like 10 minutes." She just shrugged her shoulders and went with him. They walked until they were by the lake. " Lily I really need to tell you something, I want to go back out with you more than anything I cant sleep, eat or think with out thinking of you I know it sounds dumb but its true . I was stupid to dump you (lily had a look on her face that said NO DUH!) but I had my reasons but I am willing to forget about it if you would come back to me. Please think about it and I know you cant say anything right now but if you would write me a note anything I don't care if it all it says is no, Please Lily." Lily looked at him - was it Hope, Happiness, Confusion, or pure hatred? - And then she simply just walked back to the castle.
Lily went up to her dorm with tears in her eyes, She couldn't believe what James had just said to her, was he being serious or was he just trying to make her talk to him again. She figured what could it hurt she would tell him the truth and see what happens. Even though she had Sirius he wasn't the same -sure he was funny and loving but he always wanted to make out or fool around and he wasn't serious - if that makes sense LOL- She wanted James back it had been 2 months since he dumped her and she thought she was over him -for a time she was but then he came back and she wanted to make him leave so she never had to deal with him again. Why was life so hard?
Lily pulled out a piece of parchment and she grabbed her swan feather quill that wrote in gold it when she was done..
A PERSON BEFORE I START AGAIN IS THIS DETIALED ENOUGH?
She sealed the letter with a kiss and sprayed it with some Love Spell - Body spray not a potion. She looked at the clock on the bedside table and saw that it was 12:30 and James was still up in the common so she decided instead of using Aphrodite she would just walked down there and give it to him and then walk back up to the common room, By the time she had gotten done rehearsing this 10 times it was 1:15 and she ran down to the common room afraid she would miss James.
James was about to walk up to the boy staircase when he saw Lily running down the stairs in her nightgown - not much coverage- she handed him the parchment and then she ran back up stairs. James sat on the cold stairs and opened the letter up the smell of lily filled the small passage way and he began to read.
James, The reason it hurts us so much to be apart is because are souls are connected, and maybe they always have been and will be. Maybe we have lived a thousand lives before - and in each of them we have found each other and perhaps each time we have been forced apart for the same reasons. That means that good bye is both a good bye for the past ten thousand years and a prelude to what will come.. I would love to tell you that everything will work out between us and I promise I do all I can to make sure it does. But if we never met each other and this is truly good bye, I know we will see each other in another life. And maybe we will find each other again and we will not only fall in love each other again but also for all the times we have before.
But I have so many questions for you. Why if you cant stop thinking about me did you dump me and act like a jerk and if you had some deathly reason you couldn't go out with me then why didn't you just say something to me I am sure I would have understood. And most of all do you think I am just going to dump Sirius and go back out with you-Did you ever think about his feelings, He loves me and he treats me like I should be treated. James I never stopped loving you and I don't understand why that is, but I am with Sirius now and until we break up or he dies you will have to wait -so my advice is you move on. If you think I am going to be nice to you now - I guess I will have to think about it. Lol - But James I really miss spending time with you. Maybe we could get together one night - perhaps a full moon - yes I know about Remus and I also was planning to become an animagi Ill tell you more when I see you- But maybe then Sirius wont be in the way. You are one of my best friends and I can't wait to catch up on everything - This is all I cant think of saying to you right now and please don't let Sirius see this - tell him I am thinking about him if he asks -
Love Always - Lillian Marie Evans
She would talk to him again and she wanted to hang out - wow this was more than he could handle. James ran up to the girls room and listened to see if they were all up. The room was silent and he walked in he got on his hands and knees and then crawled to Lily's bed. She slowly opened her curtains and looked in Lily was sleeping and she looked like a goddess with the moon light hitting her face and making her look immortal he wanted to kiss her and have everything be alright. His hand grazed her cheek and he lent down to kiss her softly on the lips. Lily woke up and she couldn't help but get caught up in the moment this is exactly what she was dreaming of.
"Lily I feel the same way. Please forgive me - I love you more than all the stars in the sky- you are my princess and I cant live another moment with out you knowing you feel the same way."
"Oh James,"
He was pulling into her bed. and the night went on.
That's all for now people maybe Ill write what happened in the next chapter -but only if you all review and tell me what I should do. -K Alexia thanks for r/r