Alright I guess that this is chapter one hope u like this also
Tommy drives down to ken's place he walks in on ken watching T.V. with a fully loaded Spaz on his lap. Ken points the gun at Tommy with out realizing it him," Who the f#$^ is there?!?!?" yelled Ken, "Oh! Gees chr- I'm sorry Tommy, I didn't realize it was you!!" "Yeah well don't let it happen again!! Gees man, anyways your little problem is gone at least for now. I found out who set the hit on you. Some little chump ass wannabe called Victor Reyes. That name sound familiar?" asked Tommy, "umm let me think victor, victor, ummm Reyes? OHHHHHH YEAH he owns North Point mall and some fancy upscale restaurants. It makes sense, he found out that we caused the explosion of the Tarbrush and smashed all the windows at the mall he must want payback or something. So what do u want me to do?"
"Well we should probably go to my estate its safer there with my patrol on guard. So umm let's go" Just then they hear a creaking sound on the roof "wait here ill check it out" said Tommy. He told ken to hide under the desk with his shotgun. Tommy walks outside and goes around back he sees a PCJ900 around the back, he walks up the stairs quietly with his pistol in his hand he sees a guy in a vantage point waiting for us to come out. Tommy takes a shot at his arm. He curses in pain and turns around "OWWW OH F#$% TOMMY!!!!!" The sniper yells "Yeah it's me Tommy Vercetti!!! You know im not gunna kill you-right now- im gunna let u go I want u to tell your prick of a boss that im gonna come after him when he least expects it !!" Tommy walks over to the guy and kicks him on the roof into a pile of bushes.
The guy barley gets up and jumps on his bike and rides away. Tommy walks down to get Ken. Then they both drive down to the estate in his newly acquired Banshee.
Hope you like. I think its alright but that's just me so please R&R.
Tommy drives down to ken's place he walks in on ken watching T.V. with a fully loaded Spaz on his lap. Ken points the gun at Tommy with out realizing it him," Who the f#$^ is there?!?!?" yelled Ken, "Oh! Gees chr- I'm sorry Tommy, I didn't realize it was you!!" "Yeah well don't let it happen again!! Gees man, anyways your little problem is gone at least for now. I found out who set the hit on you. Some little chump ass wannabe called Victor Reyes. That name sound familiar?" asked Tommy, "umm let me think victor, victor, ummm Reyes? OHHHHHH YEAH he owns North Point mall and some fancy upscale restaurants. It makes sense, he found out that we caused the explosion of the Tarbrush and smashed all the windows at the mall he must want payback or something. So what do u want me to do?"
"Well we should probably go to my estate its safer there with my patrol on guard. So umm let's go" Just then they hear a creaking sound on the roof "wait here ill check it out" said Tommy. He told ken to hide under the desk with his shotgun. Tommy walks outside and goes around back he sees a PCJ900 around the back, he walks up the stairs quietly with his pistol in his hand he sees a guy in a vantage point waiting for us to come out. Tommy takes a shot at his arm. He curses in pain and turns around "OWWW OH F#$% TOMMY!!!!!" The sniper yells "Yeah it's me Tommy Vercetti!!! You know im not gunna kill you-right now- im gunna let u go I want u to tell your prick of a boss that im gonna come after him when he least expects it !!" Tommy walks over to the guy and kicks him on the roof into a pile of bushes.
The guy barley gets up and jumps on his bike and rides away. Tommy walks down to get Ken. Then they both drive down to the estate in his newly acquired Banshee.
Hope you like. I think its alright but that's just me so please R&R.